Date: 03/11/09 09:02 am Title: Chapter 23
!!! *bites fingernails*
Date: 03/11/09 04:46 am Title: Chapter 23
tabitha's good I should have known getting ride of her wouldn't be easy but I didn't think it be flat out impossible.
nothing looks good for both set of twins.
oh and a little smutt with information was good and there was some funny points within it from tom's points.
hope they don't get caught but I doubt they will not. someone has caught them hopefully it's not tabitha but someone else.
Date: 03/10/09 03:10 pm Title: Chapter 22
NO NOT THE END.. i wanna see like 20 more chapters
Author's Response: How about...4 more chapters and an upcoming sequel?
Date: 03/10/09 01:13 am Title: Chapter 22
no the end soon but the bright future has a sequel to make up for this end.
well when katy's hurt she can leash fury when you hurt the one she loves. poor bill didn't want to hurt him or the others.
well the crazy twin are like a evil mirror image of bill and tom relationship. kind of sweet how they love eachother so much but still scary.
oh the confession scene between bill and tom was relief for me. finally they get most thing on the table about their relationship. bill know's that he didn't cheat and tom found out that bill want to continue their relationship too.
so now waiting for what happens next will the cops arrest the evil twin or will they succeed with their mission.
Date: 03/09/09 11:48 am Title: Chapter 22
Wow. This has been pretty intense. I hope everything works out for Bill and Tom. I love this story so much. Update soon!!
Date: 03/09/09 03:40 am Title: Chapter 22
Gosh, this is so good. I can't wait for the update on this. Such a great story. I'm glad Tom told Bill that it doesn't matter that they are brothers, he still is in love with him.
Author's Response: I could probably have dragged the "Bill's-my-brother" angst out a few more chapters, but it might have started to get boring, especially since they haven't exactly known each other their entire lives XDD
Date: 03/09/09 03:15 am Title: Chapter 22
ooh udpdate soon pzlzplpzl=]
Date: 03/09/09 03:10 am Title: Chapter 18
Damn, I am loving this. I feel like I'm watching a movie, it is so good.
Date: 03/09/09 03:00 am Title: Chapter 17
OMG this is great, I love how this chapter ended.
Date: 03/09/09 01:33 am Title: Chapter 9
This story is so good, I've never read anything like it.
Date: 03/08/09 11:43 pm Title: Chapter 22
I'm glad they're reaching some kind of agreement. I wish it was a little less brotherly though (it still seems brotherly to me)
Date: 03/08/09 11:23 pm Title: Chapter 22
Hmmm... too easy... something's bound to go wrong.. but of course I don't need to say that to you, you're the master of this story :P This chapter was great, I'm so glad they made up and aww it was adorable. I hope everything goes okay *nervous shuffle* Untill you update again... XD
Date: 03/08/09 11:54 am Title: Chapter 21
Ooo...I'm now really really looking forward to the sequel. Billshido moments, yay! XD I can't wait for the next chapter, this is awesome. Keep it up (I'm sure you will) More soon please. :)
Date: 03/08/09 09:31 am Title: Chapter 21
O_O oouuhhhhh! scaryyyy!
need another one plleeeaassee! ^^
Date: 03/08/09 03:29 am Title: Chapter 21
oh you know all the good guy's are taken or gay. just a little sidenote to your reply last chapter.
well this is a disaster. and bill really loves the lavish lifestyle. I feel bad for him everything seems to be going bad for him.
tom tom tom what can I say but trouble always seems to follow him and his decisions. first with trusting to hyters which lead to his capture and tortures. now overacting about the situation and calling the cops making matters worst for everyone. he tries so hard but he just makes everything harder.
well can't wait to see if the brother assasinate the witch or all hell breaks lose as a result of tom's interference.
Author's Response: Who doesn't like a lavish lifestyle after living with Tabitha XD And Tom...poor guy. At least he has Bill XDD
Date: 03/08/09 12:00 am Title: Chapter 21
Ooh snap, Tom had an Idea... I feel bad for them but it's good for the plot... I have a feeling that the next chapter is going to be of orgasmic proprotions... I love your work so keep it up XD
Date: 03/08/09 12:00 am Title: Chapter 21
plzplz update soonnnn plzplzplzplzplz thx=]
Date: 03/07/09 11:47 am Title: Chapter 20
Oh I felt really sad now I can totally understand that decision Bill had to make and he choose the wrong one I knew it because once in a while I chose the wrong thing to do too... Oh I just read this story all from the beginnig and love it...
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it :)
Date: 03/07/09 01:50 am Title: Chapter 20
the brother's still scare me but behind the door talk was interesting.
I feel bad for bill and a little indifferent to bushido.
and at the end it seemed like bill might of developed feelings for anis and again don't know how that makes me feel. gosh I kind think that anis is so wonderful to bill.
I see the plan didn't work out but I like that and the change in plans. the tabitha hit so looking forward to and hope you actually kill her off.
oh and can't wait to see what the sequel has in store.
Author's Response: The sequel... :/ I'll probably take a small hiatus before I start to post the sequel, it's being difficult :/ Anis is in love with Bill--hence the wonderfulness. I actually know someone kinda like Bushido XD Too bad he's in love with a friend.
Date: 03/07/09 01:01 am Title: Chapter 20
heeh plz update soon thx=]