Date: 02/13/09 08:46 pm Title: Chapter 9
*gasp* Wow... that was really vivid... I loved it... I can't wait to see how Bill's going to get him outa this one! XD Keep up the AMAZING work!
Date: 02/13/09 02:24 pm Title: Chapter 9
This story is amazing! I'm so glad I've found it. I like the idea, very original and your writing is great too. I can't wait for the next chapter!!!
Date: 02/13/09 01:45 pm Title: Chapter 9
OMGGG. nooo Tom!
:O
how could you?
I still like it xD
Date: 02/13/09 01:39 pm Title: Chapter 9
0_0 DON'T STOP GIVE ME MORE!!!!! GIVE GIVE ME!!!
What is happening!!! Im so confused!!
But I like it :)
Author's Response: What's happening: Tom found a cat, which is actually Bill. He finds out that Bill was stolen as an infant and raised to be a familiar for witches and warlocks. Bill can also turn into a human during the midnight hour. Bill gets hurt by a hyter, which are the hunters the witch sent out to find Bill after he ran away. Tom goes out with a girl, who turns out to be one of the hyters, and now the witch is torturing him. rnrnI think that's about it. Did I miss anything?
Date: 02/11/09 08:54 pm Title: Chapter 8
Why would tom be so stupid? Alarm bells should be going off in his head.
Date: 02/11/09 08:48 pm Title: Chapter 7
Wouldn't it be safer for bill to just hid in the house all day?
Author's Response: Possibly. Unless the hyter are able to track him by the spell which turns him into a cat...I don't know that much about hyters, I'm afraid, but the witch might have given them something to help find poor kitty.
Date: 02/11/09 08:43 pm Title: Chapter 6
Time to ask mommy about a possible twin.
Date: 02/11/09 08:37 pm Title: Chapter 5
Well at least Simone caved.
Date: 02/11/09 07:59 pm Title: Chapter 3
Well this explains why Bill was taken, not a nice lady I guess, poor Bill, but he escaped. Maybe he can break the curse.
Date: 02/11/09 07:52 pm Title: Chapter 2
So where's Bill planning on going anyway?
Date: 02/11/09 07:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aw, he threw Bill out?! That's sort of sad/funny at the same time. Why'd the witch take Bill from his family just to turn him into a cat? Just go to a pet store.
Also, Tom was way too believing.
Date: 02/11/09 07:39 pm Title: Prologue
That's quite the start, why would some creepy old lady just show up out of the blue and take him?
Date: 02/11/09 07:15 pm Title: Chapter 8
wow I didn't see this coming.
bill sounds so cute and cuddly when he was a half cat and human. I didn't think that the cut would do that that was a surpise.
the forth hyter was katrine. and she took tom because he is such a horny little boy trying to prove his sexuality.
well you came up with a great plan to get bill to go back to rescue his friends. but I didn't think that tom would fall for that girls charms. so know bill has to sacrifice himself for his stupidity.
so they were both getting so close before this happen. oh well at least bill knows he loves tom. now tom has to realize.
oh by the way I thought about what you said and you can make a delicious treat that she likes that you put the wipe cream in and have the treat say that it's a thank you for the familiar she gave to one of the witches or warlocks. she would probably willingly eat it if it was a gift from one of her costomers. just a thought.
Author's Response: She's probably paranoid about gifts, seeing as how she gives them a lot and knows that every gift is not what it seems. I think someone suggested selling it online, I might do that. Or maybe it well just sit in their fridge forever and ever. *shrugs* We'll see what happens.
Date: 02/11/09 02:39 pm Title: Chapter 8
aww how sad poor bill got hurt but tomi is there to make it all better =]
no! no! no! no! no! dumb ass tom why did he have to go with her!!! why! why! why! i just hope are lil billa can save the day =]
Date: 02/11/09 02:33 pm Title: Chapter 8
Aww yay for all the love.. boo to the bad lady that is making your plot all the richer XD I love it so keep it up... I feel some action coming up XD
Author's Response: "boo to the bad lady that is making your plot all the richer"rnrnI never thought of it that way, but thanks ^_^ This really made me laugh.rnrn
Date: 02/11/09 02:06 pm Title: Chapter 8
noooooo stupid boy stop fallowing that thing in your pants... now billa's gunna get all killed because you couldnt think about something else... *twaps tomi in the head*
Date: 02/11/09 10:56 am Title: Chapter 8
omg...plzplzpzlzlpz update soon thx=]=] i luvz u and this
Date: 02/11/09 09:23 am Title: Chapter 8
I just love this ^^ Every chapter just gets better and better, more involved, with the parts of the story just coming together beautifully, and the characters growing (but not too quickly or too slowly.) Anyway, aside from selling the tub of whip cream to an ice cream shop or something, i really don't know what you could do with it -- did you come up with something yet?
Author's Response: No :( Stil working on it. Although selling it on eBay or something might work XD Thanks for the suggestion!
Date: 02/11/09 05:18 am Title: Chapter 8
OOohhh Tom! never open the door to strangers! did ur mother never told u that?! xD
Author's Response: Tom would really like to NOT be a stranger to this girl XD