Date: 02/20/09 03:37 pm Title: Chapter 12
don't let it kill him D:
Author's Response: I kinda have a no-permanent damage rule with my characters...and death is KINDA permanent. Sorta. Unless there's a resurrection spell or reincarnation spell. So either Bill likes a zombie or a baby...and the baby probably WOULDN'T be realted to him, so that would fix that problem... :P
Date: 02/20/09 12:23 pm Title: Chapter 11
omg.. tom was like pear rapped.. lol anyways i love it please update?
Date: 02/19/09 09:39 pm Title: Chapter 11
Oh my God *_*
This is epic!
Date: 02/19/09 09:01 pm Title: Chapter 11
*gasp* I've done a lot of research on midieval torture devices and i must say.. well played out. It was a very good read and the torture was top mark. I can't wait to read more and see where this is going :D Love yah!
Author's Response: Thanks! I think I'm pretty done with the graphic torture scenes for now lol. Although mental torture is probably a safe bet XD
Date: 02/19/09 04:21 pm Title: Chapter 11
nothing like a nice tortureer right?
Author's Response: Not sure Tabitha was that nice XD After all, Bushido had to tell her how to torture someone properly XDD
Date: 02/19/09 09:11 am Title: Chapter 11
Wow, this story was so sweet and innocent (and a bit wonderfully silly) when it started, but somehow you've managed to turn it into SAW VIII or whatever -- well not quite that bad, but either way, I'm glad the torture is over -- and you did end the chapter quite nicely ;)
Author's Response: The torture was hell to write :( Normally I only do sweet fluffy stories, but I wanted to get the essence of a REAL fairytale in there, Grimm style. I guess I succeeded XD
Date: 02/19/09 02:31 am Title: Chapter 11
oh my god that was the best graphic torture scene I have ever read. were did you read these things from. I know you like to research real things for your story. this was the best descriptive work I have scene. you make it so interesting. the witch is so terrorizing. the things she does wow I love your orignal character so so much. and the whole scene I just don't know what to say one of the best so far. the ending was great too. I don't know what your going to do next but I know it's going to be perfection.
oh and on side note I'm so happy that you finally got a place for the wipe cream to go in your story. at least that stress is over. this story really is so thrilling. more more thanx for writing and continuing.
Author's Response: My history with torture scenes began when I read fanfiction from authors Cassia & Siobhan in the Lord of the Rings fandom. They are possibly the best writers I know ^_^ They managed to write fluffy Aragorn & Legolas fics, with TONS of torture, yet the elf & human were never lovers. Now THAT takes talent. And since them, I'm been secretly fascinated/appalled at the dark ages torture devices. Thank you Cassia and Siobhan for showing me that SOMETIMES, mental torture is 10x better than physical (with less disfiguring marks, too!)
Date: 02/19/09 01:48 am Title: Chapter 11
......damn!
holy hell girl! you were right torture scene is a bitch to read but it had to be done and i just looked up the Pear of Anguish to see what it look like and damn that's got to hurt!!
but there is light at the end of the tunnel right because bill showed up in time to save him.....right?
oh but wait they belong to Bushido now... that can't be good
Author's Response: I think the pear kinda stuck with me since the first time I looked up medieval torture instruments. They are MONSTERS!!!rnrnYeah, Bushido....he's a character.
Date: 02/17/09 06:19 pm Title: Chapter 10
I can't believe that the situation keeps getting more chaotic. I don't see how they're going to get out of this mess. bushido has plans for both now so I'm so worried for both of them and they torchered him so much.
I'm so estatic that bill at least didn't at least run in blind as a cat he should at least wait tell his human and have a plan.
well seems like bill and tom are going to be together but at what cost and what's simone going to do with the disappearance. and when they come back I hope she won't get rid of bill.
can't wait to see what you write next I don't know how it can get better only bad.
Author's Response: *finally figured out what to do with the whipped cream*
Date: 02/17/09 03:15 pm Title: Chapter 10
Awww poor Tomi!!! Oh I can't even fathom how you're gona get them out of this mess! But I can't wait to read about it so keep up the fabulous work!
Date: 02/17/09 12:26 pm Title: Chapter 10
you updated. yay, i love how this is going keep it up.
Author's Response: I try to update every 2-3 days >_<
Date: 02/17/09 10:41 am Title: Chapter 10
omfg plz update soon..thx=]
Date: 02/17/09 09:11 am Title: Chapter 10
still good, still awesome ^^
Date: 02/17/09 07:38 am Title: Chapter 10
Poor Tomi.i have to know what gona happend to Tom and Bill. plz update soon or i go crazy :)
Date: 02/17/09 06:23 am Title: Chapter 10
*goes emo* oh noooooooooeesss! xD
Author's Response: Let me inform you now: It gets worse.
Date: 02/14/09 05:55 pm Title: Chapter 9
Poor Tom.
plz pudate soon
Date: 02/14/09 11:36 am Title: Chapter 9
plzplz update soon..thx
Date: 02/14/09 04:13 am Title: Chapter 9
oh the witch is a torcherous bitch. poor tom put himself in a bad situation.
I can't believe that tom got scared after he got hit I would have been scared when she mentioned bill.
so you mentioned that someone said sell it on ebay well maybe sell it to starbucks they can use it on their deliciously sinful drinks.
so can't wait to see what happened to tom and what's going to await bill's return.
Author's Response: Starbucks IS delicious...I blame them for making me fat XD Having a drink from there almost every day does that... But seriously, I'm sure this whipped cream isn't nearly as good as Starbucks lol
Date: 02/14/09 03:55 am Title: Chapter 9
O_O wtf is happening?!
the witch is a fucking pervert xD
Author's Response: You think so now? What a few chapters. It gets BADDDDD XDD
Date: 02/14/09 02:50 am Title: Chapter 9
ohhhh please please please update))