Date: 04/25/15 10:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
So this one confirms all my suspicions about this series.... Tom's is totally confusing his girlfriend and Bill in his mind. I think he likes it that way too. and trying to relive old memories of Bill with her. When he speaks of "you", it's both. And yet if you pick up the clues, you'll know which one of the two "you"'s it is he's talking about. That's how I'm reading this series so far and I think it's brilliant. Can't wait to find out happened to Bill, or why they're not together. :) :)
Date: 12/30/10 01:51 am Title: Chapter 1
Gosh is there another part where you fix this?! I'm off to find it now! Well, this was gorgeous honey :) bril writing :)
Author's Response: I see you've found the other parts. Not so much fixed, though. lol
Date: 04/17/10 04:53 am Title: Chapter 1
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Author's Response: Well, thanks for reading.
Date: 03/22/10 10:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
So heartbreaking. Tom obviously wants to be back with Bill again - no one else will be good enough or come close to what they had. What split them apart, and where is Bill now? Will they ever belong to each other again? So sad that Tom's making do with a surrogate "Bill".
Author's Response: It is sad. :( I wish I could answer all of your questions, but I don't even know what those answers will be. Thanks so much for reviewing, though. Every time I read a new one, I get a little motivation to pick this series back up. :)
Date: 01/18/09 07:26 am Title: Chapter 1
i didn't read them yet.. that would probably be a good idea :) thanks sweetie
Author's Response: You might want to do that then. You're welcome. :)
Date: 01/17/09 07:02 am Title: Chapter 1
i didn't really get this one :s it's probably my fault though.. x
Author's Response: None of that now. The story is a bit confusing. Have you read the other two in the series? That might help. I mean, it would give you some sort of idea as to what's going on. Though, probably not much.rnrnBasically, the stories are glimpsing through Tom's eyes. He's not entirely sure what's going on around him or inside of his head, so neither is the audience.
Date: 01/14/09 08:27 am Title: Chapter 1
It's very good.
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Date: 01/14/09 05:16 am Title: Chapter 1
Great story :) Tomi is in love with Bill ^^ And uses his girlfriend for it xD Lolz xD
xx Chi ^^
Author's Response: Thanks. Oh, Tom's much more than 'in love'. So much more. ;)
Date: 01/14/09 01:49 am Title: Chapter 1
Still my favorite of the Triggers. ^_^
In my haste, I push against the wrong hole and you cry out.
LOL. That bad boy.
Author's Response: Not bad, just...confused. ;)