Date: 01/16/09 11:57 pm Title: Systematic Separation
Awwwww.
I appreciate that David is just trying to make things 'work', but still... D:
Date: 01/16/09 07:32 pm Title: Systematic Separation
i lovei t!
Date: 01/16/09 03:29 pm Title: Systematic Separation
Awwwwwwwe. But they're so sweet together. You can't split them up.
Putting them in seperate buses for a while is not going to change things. They're bonded to eachother like super-glue.
Date: 01/16/09 03:16 pm Title: What To Do
Simply beautiful!! I LOVED it!!
Date: 01/16/09 09:23 am Title: Systematic Separation
Really good chapter :)
But so sad...
Date: 01/16/09 06:55 am Title: Systematic Separation
I wanna kill him. I really do. Just what or who the heck does the man think he's protecting? The twins? Or his job?
Has he ever heard of the term "keeping out of other people's business"?
GOD! I swear my blood pressure has increased steadily through this chapter. This is just so infuriating. It's not like they're hurting anyone. I bet he wouldn't make such a fuss if they were taking drugs instead. >_<
Please let David suffer.
Can't wait for the next part.
Date: 01/16/09 06:12 am Title: What To Do
i'm already loving this...poor twins...what is david going to do next?
please dont take tooo long to update!
Date: 01/16/09 03:23 am Title: Systematic Separation
;_;
fuck david
Date: 01/16/09 12:31 am Title: Systematic Separation
I like it. It feels like new territory.
Date: 01/16/09 12:29 am Title: Systematic Separation
That last scene was really touching and this whole thing is beautifully written.
Date: 01/15/09 11:22 pm Title: Systematic Separation
so sad... the part where tom is humming some song to bill is bittersweet
Date: 01/15/09 10:42 pm Title: Systematic Separation
dooooood
you spilled the beans. >_>
When David separated them, my stomach plummeted. Of course it had to happen, but I never thought it would. Jeez.
Date: 01/15/09 01:29 pm Title: What To Do
oh I love this, it'll be so interesting to see what happens next. (I love everything you've written though so I was extremely happy when I saw a new project) and also I love Tom in this one.
Date: 01/14/09 11:33 pm Title: What To Do
D:
AWWWWWW.
Damnit, David.
I'm really curious as to how he found out.... :/
Date: 01/14/09 03:57 pm Title: What To Do
This...Was...AWSOME!:D. I loved it(:.
Date: 01/14/09 02:44 pm Title: What To Do
That was absolutly and unexpectly beautiful. Sooo much sweetness on the end! BRAVO!!
Date: 01/14/09 10:45 am Title: What To Do
AAAAAAAAAHHHH!!!!! OH MEIN GOTT!!!! *runs around panicking* ;_;
Damn you, Jost! Keep your nose out of what is clearly NOT your fucking business! >_<
Grr...I really want to know how he found out. And if anyone else might know, too and has just kept quiet. The Gs for example.
Can't wait for the next part!
Date: 01/14/09 10:05 am Title: What To Do
This was so scarily realistic--the talk, and their fear, and their interactions afterward. I really want to see what happens next.