Date: 05/16/10 04:58 pm Title: Tactile
This litterally and quite frankly physically hurts me T_T
Date: 12/14/09 12:56 am Title: What To Do
Please update this soon? I can't wait to see what happens next!!
Date: 05/22/09 09:03 pm Title: Tactile
OH yaay. cant wait to read the next chapi... update soon right? ;D ;D hehe
Date: 03/30/09 09:55 am Title: Tactile
It's ok if it's short. It's still HAWT like a jalapeño.
Date: 03/28/09 02:04 pm Title: Tactile
please don't take so long to update again..pleaaaase!
this is really good...poor twins, i wanna strangle david.
Date: 03/26/09 07:05 pm Title: Tactile
Awww, this chapter made me sad :(
Date: 03/26/09 06:23 pm Title: Tactile
Aww!*pets the twins*
Thank yu for updating ^_^ I really enjoyed every word of this chapter.I hope their situation gets shittier XD,because when it gets better,it makes me melt even more.Bye!^^
Date: 03/26/09 04:58 pm Title: Tactile
I'm so excited about thi story!
Date: 03/26/09 01:43 pm Title: Tactile
I love this. Really, really, really love this. b29;
It's so sad, but I suppose sadness makes it painfully beautiful, too.
Compliments, you're always the best b29;
Waiting for more! (:
Date: 03/26/09 09:13 am Title: Tactile
Die of longing for more.
I really love your style of writing. The words are so soft but make me hurt so deep.
Date: 03/26/09 06:19 am Title: Tactile
Like I want to cry,
and I want to praise you.
But it's offly hard to praise someone when you feel like crying.
I don't know how to explain this but my sister and I were sepperated because she was a 'bad influence' and You're describing the way that I felt so long ago.
But our seperation wasn't a gradual thing, one day I went home and she wasn't there, the only thing that was left of her was a pink letter, that I wasn't aloud to read.
I didn't see her again until I was twelve, almostfive years later.
What you're writing is some great characterization that almost painful for me to read, but in a good way.
It's almost like someone understands, but not in an emo way.
Thank you,
xxxx
Russ!a
Author's Response: Wow. I'm sorry that happened to you, but I'm glad to know you feel that way about the story. Thank you.
Date: 03/26/09 02:08 am Title: What To Do
Now he knows the spot behind Tom's ear that makes him shiver, the meaning of each moan, just how to move his tongue.
It's useless trivia in a situation like this.
Goddamnit.
I mean, still o/ but. Damn.
Date: 03/25/09 10:48 pm Title: Tactile
Gah, when I was reading the argument, it was so realistic because...since it's two guys arguing, there's this disconnect where neither one is ready to give in or able to understand the other, at least initially. I'm rambling, but I'm just trying to say that I thought the dialogue was realistic and painful. I can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Yay, s'what I'm always going for. :)
Date: 01/25/09 04:55 pm Title: Systematic Separation
Oh God... I suppose Bill and Tom were together BEFORE David figured out what was going on but he disturbs EVERYTHING anyway... Why does Bill just let him do? I think Tom is right... They have to fight back ! Even if David has good reasons to think that's kinda weird.
Date: 01/25/09 04:35 pm Title: What To Do
I wonder how David noticed what was going on between them... Do the G's actually know about it? Let's see... I can only imagine how terrible this must be for the twins to fear a possible seperation...
Date: 01/19/09 06:55 am Title: Systematic Separation
I know you don't need ego strokes like me, but I just felt like saying... you're a bright speck of awesome amongst the ruins of stupidity. Don't ever change.
(And update soon, I'm dying over here.)
Date: 01/18/09 03:42 pm Title: Systematic Separation
O_O AWESOMENESS!!
Luv everything you write
luv everything you write WITH Sophia
Luv you!
The more they try to separate the twins,the more their longing for each other will be strong.I think.
Date: 01/18/09 10:32 am Title: Systematic Separation
amazing!
i'm looking forward to follow this story-