Date: 02/05/09 12:00 am Title: The Convoluted Conclusion
haha! I was wrong ;_______; but what a good ending it was, didn't see it coming.
Date: 01/31/09 02:50 pm Title: The Maligned Men
that's some pretty intereting ride!! i like the turns!!! Whoaha!!!
Date: 01/31/09 12:27 pm Title: The Maligned Men
Wow wow wow that gets more and more complicated... I like that ! ^^ But I really have no clue, who the blackmailer could be !
Date: 01/31/09 12:09 pm Title: The Fortunate Fiancee
They have a really special relationship... There is attraction of course but... I don't know if there is more than just that ! Tom s slowly getting over Juliette but he hasn't mentioned his feelings about Bill yet ! And it seems like Bill just wants to thank or comfort Tom in a way by giving him all this "affection"... Let's see where it goes...
Date: 01/31/09 10:27 am Title: The Pending Policy
Ouch... That's like a hard punch in the face... Did Bill actually do something to Anis? Does he just feign innocence? I don't think he's a bad guy but... That's possible !
But I really don't think he's using Tom... Even if he let him fuck him... A bit easily I'd say... But anyway ! I used to do it for money before so that's probably no big deal for him
Date: 01/31/09 09:57 am Title: The Weeping Witness
I don't know if it's the reason why Anis hid Bill from sight but it could be... Anyway I think there is another reason for that... Something with the family maybe !
So that's why Tom drinks so much alcohol... He has been hurtor a year now and that's the only comfort he could think of... Hope Bill will get him out of it...
Hope Tom will help Bill too, show him that he's not only a nice piece of ass...
Date: 01/31/09 09:27 am Title: The Wasted Wannabe
I really think Bill has something to do with Bu's murder... I can't help but think he did it, even though he may have had a good reason to do so... Maybe he and Tom will feel attracted to each other... Then it'll be all the more difficult for Tom to claim Bill's "innocence"... Let's see if I'm right... or not !! Like reading you ^^
Date: 01/27/09 03:55 pm Title: The Maligned Men
I have a feeling...that Bill did it...
...or not...
crap! This is EXACTLY like law and order
They wait until the last few minutes to make it so everything becomes clear and you feel dumb for not knowing all along.
no fair, the plot is too good! it's just like a damn tv show. I think Bill must have done it! He's just SO innocent, it's very hard to believe, plus he's sleeping with a cop. But, there haven't been any holes in his story that I can see...crap.
Sorry, this wasn't really a review, but I can make it one:
FABULOUS! Better the SVU by farrrrr
I hope we learn more about Bill's past, and how he's coped with it...or if he never did and just started killing people...
I'm on the edge of my seat. It is extremely obvious that I'm interested in this story and thought about it a little too much, but I'm okay with that. It's damn good, just like all your other stories.
'Kay, that's a little better.
Great job :)
DCB
Date: 01/26/09 08:20 pm Title: The Maligned Men
WHAT?!?! NOOOOOOO, not over yet! Just two more chapters, agh, i mean minutes! PWEASE?
Author's Response: Just one chapter and the epilogue left. *pets* Sorry... *cackles*
Date: 01/26/09 12:01 pm Title: The Maligned Men
Almost done??
I've gotten so sucked into this, I need moreee.
But I have a feeling it was Bill D: Please don't tell me it was Bill.
Date: 01/26/09 09:30 am Title: The Maligned Men
Really good n_n
Date: 01/26/09 08:56 am Title: The Maligned Men
*dances*
That was an intense chapter!! my eyes were glued to my screen.
This made me LMAO:
"Tom glares at the dead body as if he could raise Pangerl from the dead with the force of his questions alone but the man refuses to do anything but stay dead"
BWAHAHAHAHA!!
It's Bill? The frenchman?Mom?Bill's dad?Bill's accomplice? Bill? Georg?Bill? BILL?????
no?Then who is it?
you?Of course it's you,you're the one writing this LOL!
Seriously...It's JOST!!He was in love with Anis,like I said in my review for the previous chapter.Hmmm...Or maybe it was someone who hadn't been mentioned in this fic,yet?
We're almost done with the ride? Noooooooooooooooooooooooo!!! I don't wanna be done with this yet ç___ç
It sounds so "real" when you write it.
-sigh-
Date: 01/26/09 06:32 am Title: The Maligned Men
i have to lean towards Luise, because (be ready for my sick judgement) i really don't think she did it, so that means she did. And Bill totally looks guilty from my POV but if he looks so guilty then that means he isn't! (it's my backwards thinking that really works wonders during CSI episodes)
Date: 01/26/09 12:53 am Title: The Maligned Men
Oh gosh.
This is so freaking good, and I'm positively obsessed.
:)
Date: 01/26/09 12:07 am Title: The Maligned Men
interesting. I want to see the end of this.
Date: 01/25/09 11:00 pm Title: The Maligned Men
Maybe it won't be Bill because that's too obvious and it's who we're all thinking of first... hm, hmmm....
I'm guessing Georg or Jost now.
Date: 01/25/09 10:24 pm Title: The Maligned Men
Bill or Georg... or Bushido's mom... hmmm... or David?
I want it to be Bill... hehhehe
Date: 01/25/09 10:23 pm Title: The Maligned Men
Tom forgot his meds, eh? So he BLACKED OUT and offed Sarah and doesn't remember! I'm onto you, missy.
I love it and I want more now. But then I want it to last forever so I want to wait a couple days. You have me all torn. But we both know my guess. Honestly, the title of the whole thing was the biggest clue for me.
Date: 01/25/09 10:10 pm Title: The Maligned Men
XD
I think it was Bill.
Date: 01/25/09 09:55 pm Title: The Maligned Men
Aha, that last line was kinda funny...
*smacks self*