Date: 01/25/09 09:52 pm Title: The Maligned Men
keep it comin!
Date: 01/25/09 09:40 pm Title: The Maligned Men
im sure its likkkkeee.
tom because he doesnt take his pills
lol
noon
i thought it could be bill, but it would be too obvious in a way.
fuckkk
Date: 01/25/09 07:53 pm Title: The Maligned Men
Why do I have the feeling that this story will go deeper in the darkest, ugliest depths of human psyche than I would have thought? And why do I have the feeling that Bills childhood is the origin of everything that happened? Why do I think that Tom should hurry to get home to Bill? Why am I certain that Bill isn’t guilty and about that he has something to do with Smiling Children? Yeah, enough ‘whys ’ :). But one thing is one hundred percent sure: I was totally, absolutely, hyper wrong with my theories(Damn you, not-good-enough-working-brain of mine! >:/) . Did I ever say that you are a great author...because you certainly are!
Date: 01/25/09 07:43 pm Title: Murder at the Manor
I think that Bill is in on the killing but I'm not sure who is the actual killer still.
Date: 01/25/09 07:15 pm Title: The Maligned Men
Oh man, when all the suspects are being killed off, the ride almost has to be close to over! :D
Well now you've killed my favorite suspect, and I'm still trying to believe Bill is not the killer. Trying hard, but it just keeps pointing that way. D:
Date: 01/25/09 07:14 pm Title: The Maligned Men
This is brilliant. I bet Bill's the killer :O
Date: 01/25/09 07:03 pm Title: The Maligned Men
The last sentence made the story regardless, I may have laughed out loud. Lol.
Date: 01/25/09 07:02 pm Title: The Maligned Men
As long as Bill stays bullet free, I'm good.
You do suspense and mystery well. Especially considering this ff is what, six chapters long? Instead of 20+ XDD
Date: 01/25/09 06:59 pm Title: The Maligned Men
Oh man...I really don't want to think it's Bill, lol.
Date: 01/25/09 07:10 am Title: Murder at the Manor
Oh dear, Tom falling so hard and so fast worries me incredibly so!
I don't trust that minx. ...But I think I like it ;)
Date: 01/24/09 05:28 pm Title: The Fortunate Fiancee
Or maybe they can use the food?
*evil smirk*
Date: 01/24/09 06:53 am Title: The Fortunate Fiancee
One thing I love about your stories is that they're always so well prepared. Like you do a TON of research before you start writing. Now I don't know if that's the case or if you're just extreeemely talanted with words (and knowing the professional terms for everything ;) but either way, you're amazing. I also love the vulnerability Bill brings out of Tom, how he can't control his emotions around him.
Date: 01/24/09 06:35 am Title: The Fortunate Fiancee
I'm still suspicious of Bill :P
Amazing work, keep going!!
Date: 01/24/09 05:46 am Title: The Fortunate Fiancee
I'm STILL suspicious of Bill :O Ugh, I really want someone else to cling to for the guilty party but I just can't see this ending happily with Bill and Tom skipping off into the sunset with Bu's money. I mean.. that would be awesome but there's a general momentum in this story that feels like it's leading up to something big and unpleasant. Really unpleasant.
.... EVERYONE IS GUILTY!~~!!1!!11!
Date: 01/24/09 12:43 am Title: The Fortunate Fiancee
somehow i want Bill to be the villain in this story... hehhehe
Date: 01/23/09 09:54 pm Title: The Fortunate Fiancee
*sigh* Sophia, I know I told you how much I love this story, but um...can I just say again that I absolutely love this story?
I don't want to say too much because I'm really just losing myself in the plot and I don't want to speculate on who Bushido's killer is until further in the story. In the meantime, I am noticing the character development and the pacing, both of which are fantastic and really very subtly done.
You know, I think for every fic that I love, I always say that I can't wait for more. When the update email comes for this one, I really catch my breath and I get the biggest smile, because I know it's going to be great. Thank you for this.
Date: 01/23/09 09:18 pm Title: The Fortunate Fiancee
Wow. This is so good. I love the AU-verse, and I love how you're portraying both of them-- I like Tom having such a serious job, you know? Georg is an ass, but I like Gustav. And I love the setup, you've made it quite casual and natural
Date: 01/23/09 06:12 pm Title: The Fortunate Fiancee
Yummy. Love dis shit
Date: 01/23/09 06:06 pm Title: The Fortunate Fiancee
Food can definitely wait.
Date: 01/23/09 06:06 pm Title: The Fortunate Fiancee
*sigh*
Tom's moving a bit fast :(
But I'm glad he isn't so...out of it anymore, I suppose =]