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Reviewer: jaxarce Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/13/10 11:10 pm Title: Chapter 1 - 1st Meetings
Date: 03/13/10 11:10 pm Title: Chapter 1 - 1st Meetings
I love it!! its so cute :)
Reviewer: HeterochromiaGreenDay Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/17/09 06:07 pm Title: Chapter 1 - 1st Meetings
Date: 01/17/09 06:07 pm Title: Chapter 1 - 1st Meetings
I'm lovin' it!
There are a few grammatical errors, however. (Little Muse touched on the main one.)
I would like to see the other chapters up sooner or later.
Author's Response: And you shall...
Reviewer: myself225 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/15/09 02:34 pm Title: Chapter 1 - 1st Meetings
Date: 01/15/09 02:34 pm Title: Chapter 1 - 1st Meetings
i liked it.. sequel?? :p
Author's Response: Yes, I'm going to publish Chapt. 2 tonight!
Reviewer: Little Muse Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/13/09 06:56 pm Title: Chapter 1 - 1st Meetings
Date: 01/13/09 06:56 pm Title: Chapter 1 - 1st Meetings
Please find a beta reader. I want to read, but you have multiple speakers in one paragraph, which is incorrect and disorienting.
And if you were raised in Leipzig, how is it you're spelling "was" as "vas"?
Author's Response: Well (With the whole "Vas" thing) Somebody got confused and said "What do you mean, 'was'? Who 'was?'" I think some other peole might be confused by that.
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