Date: 01/30/09 08:06 pm Title: Session Four - Rachel
Wow, this chapter was really good! I liked it a lot and Bill and Tom are really beginning to come out of their shells. I feel bad for Miss Lane though, because she has to deal with a suicide and a decision for Bill and Tom.
Please don't stop writing this story. I've been writing fanfiction for 5 years and there are times when I didn't finish a story and I felt really disappointed in myself. I make it a point to finish stories now because it makes me feel good and I know my loyal reviewers are happy to finish the story.
If you need help writing future chapters, feel free to contact me (the email is in the contact section or whatever it is on my bio page). I know what it's like to get to a point in a story and not think I can write it due to the subject material, but it's something I've learned to overcome to better my writing skills. So really, if you need help please don't be afraid to get in touch.
Update soon!
Author's Response: Oh thanks hun, theres a huge chance I'll be getting in cantact with you hun, I'll probably need some help. I'm just terrified I'll offend someone and get virtually shouted at lol Glad you like it hun ^.^
Date: 01/30/09 08:03 pm Title: Session One - The Kaulitz Twins
Ahaha, so far I like this Rachel Lane. She seems interesting and I'm hoping to see her character develop somemore as she digs deeper into the twins. I have a feeling I'll be sticking around for some time (:
Date: 01/30/09 07:19 pm Title: Session Four - Rachel
I like this fic. Any updates are good updates.
Author's Response: :) Thanks hun, glad you like it ^.^
Date: 01/30/09 07:11 pm Title: Session Four - Rachel
it wasnt boring at all. i think this chapter is really important for the plot. wow, this story is intense, i feel bad for rachel cuz she's torn between her job and what she thinks is right.
keep on writing, cuz ur story just gets better and better.
Author's Response: :) I've been thinking about it hun, and I probably will carry on with it, it might take a while, I need to really plan where this one is going :P Thanks for reading ^.^
Date: 01/30/09 06:17 pm Title: Session Four - Rachel
I agree with Misa btw. And I'll help if you need me to! I dun't mind. Ohz I must go typey type. I wonders, How's Twin Jitters coming... and who's doing the banner...ah shite. Just e-mail me soon
Date: 01/30/09 06:16 pm Title: Session Four - Rachel
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.... more?
:)
Author's Response: lol Probably...Might be a little while, but probably. ^.^
Date: 01/30/09 05:47 pm Title: Session Four - Rachel
*narrows eyes* If you quit this story, I will kill you. Seriously. I'll kill you. *rawr*
Author's Response: ...You know what? I don't doubt you for a second. O.o...lol I liked the rawr hun, a very nice touch :P
Date: 01/28/09 07:19 pm Title: Phone Call - Decesions To Be Made
i like this, its very interesting. you do a good job describing bill and tom's love from another person's view. it sounds so real and intense, just beautiful. keep up the good work, update soon please. =)
Author's Response: Thanks hun, their relationship is so hard to describe and I'm glad you think I do a good job of it. :)
Date: 01/27/09 10:09 pm Title: Phone Call - Decesions To Be Made
aw i love this one too. jeez girl i love your stuff.
Author's Response: :D And I love getting review's from you hun :P Thanks as ever for reading ^.^
Date: 01/27/09 05:05 pm Title: Phone Call - Decesions To Be Made
I love it XD
It works really well having someone else's point of view.
Author's Response: Thanks hun, I'm glad you like it ^,^
Date: 01/26/09 06:59 pm Title: Session One - The Kaulitz Twins
Okay.
I'll be honest.
I read the summary and didn't really want to read it because the main character wasn't someone in the Tokio Hotel world but I will also admit this.
I feel like a damn fool that I didn't read this story earlier.
(:
It's amazing.
Point blank.
And I find that I do, actually, like seeing how in love they are from an outsider's point of view.
It's not from Gustav or Gerog's point of views which would be a little hazy from all the booze and bias but it's from someone who doesn't know them as people, just their own beliefs.
Please, update as frequently as possible.
:D
I love this story.
Author's Response: :) Thank you for your honesty. I'm actually touched that you'd come out of your comfort zone in fanfic, if you follow my meaning, to read my story. I'm very glad you gave it a chance, and more so that you enjoyed it so much. I will update it as soon as possible, shouldn't be more than a few days. :D Thanks for reading! ^.^
Date: 01/24/09 05:15 pm Title: Phone Call - Decesions To Be Made
this is interesitng...
Author's Response: :) Awesome ^.^
Date: 01/24/09 04:09 pm Title: Phone Call - Decesions To Be Made
Rawr... Can't wait to read more and see what happens... ^_^ And this line: " Tom looked at Bill like he was the most beautiful thing on this earth, like the sight of him awed him. Bill looked at Tom with utter devotion, like there was no one else he would ever need. " It is adorable, and I love it.
Author's Response: lol Thats probably the fluffiest line I'll ever wriet :P Glad you like it hun ^.^
Date: 01/24/09 03:57 pm Title: Session Two - Panic Attacks
Er... cannabis is marijuana, not cocaine... ^_^ If I'm not mistaken. But really, excellent so far, I'm really enjoying this. And I think it's cool that the panic attack thing was authentic and based upon your own experiences. My brother used to get them, too.
Date: 01/24/09 02:00 pm Title: Phone Call - Decesions To Be Made
This sentence: "Tom looked at Bill like he was the most beautiful thing on this earth, like the sight of him awed him. Bill looked at Tom with utter devotion, like there was no one else he would ever need." made me aw. Because that is so true.
Poor Miss Lane. She really needs a lot of help. I wouldn't want to be her in this dilemma.
Update soon!
Author's Response: :) Everyone seems to like that one :P Will update soon hunni ^.^
Date: 01/24/09 11:53 am Title: Phone Call - Decesions To Be Made
GAH.
I LOVE the uniqueness of this idea.
I LOVE the colliding feelings Miss. Lane has.
I LOVE how this is written.
I LOVE how you describe the boys relationship & how they absolutely adore each other.
I fucking LOVE this. :)
Author's Response: Gah! lol Thank you so much, I'm really glad you enjoyd all the different aspects I'm trying to get in there. ^.^
Date: 01/23/09 10:07 pm Title: Phone Call - Decesions To Be Made
I did like the chapter, except it was too short! I dearly love this fic and can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Awesome you liked it hun, glad your enjoying it. It'll be much longer next time, never fear :D
Date: 01/23/09 09:40 pm Title: Phone Call - Decesions To Be Made
Acually, I like this chapter!
I LOVE LOVE LOVE how Miss Lane described how much the twins looked so in love.
It was sooo sweet.
I realy hope you update more soon!
Author's Response: :D I'm glad you found it sweet hun, I'm not to great at fluff. Thanks for reading! ^.^
Date: 01/23/09 09:03 pm Title: Phone Call - Decesions To Be Made
I like it so far! ;D But one question, your banner, is it real or is it a montage? o_o I can't tell!
Author's Response: :D Glad you like it hunni! lol It is real, it's just taken from a rather incrimanating angle :P Nice, isn't it? ;)
Author's Response: :D Glad you like it hunni! lol It is real, it's just taken from a rather incrimanating angle :P Nice, isn't it? ;)
Date: 01/17/09 06:37 pm Title: Session Three - For Bill...
I like how it's progressing like a real series of sessions would -- it takes a while to get down to the heart of the matter and the chapters are accordingly short. I also like the glimpses of Rachel's life...
Author's Response: I'm glad that comes across, I was worried people were just going to think I was too lazy to make the chapters longer :P I'm also glad you like the bit's of Rachels life, I was worried they might bore people...Thanks alot hun! ^.^