Date: 02/23/09 07:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
Beautiful. That's the kind of thing I see going on all the time. Perfection in balance...
Date: 01/11/09 01:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was a little choppy but I susptect it had something to do w/ translating it smoothly (no ofense, I translate stuff sometimes and it's never as smooth as I want it to be). This was really good though, and different. I liked it a lot.
Author's Response: Hi, Queen! I hope you haven't wasted your time while reading the story :-) rnTo be honest, I am terribly afraid of criticism though constructive one is always welcomed. ;-)
Date: 01/11/09 11:08 am Title: Chapter 1
FairyCelt, MarieCaroline, Yin8,
thanks a lot for the reviews! I have been greatly pleased with them. This is actually my first experience in literature of any kind. My friend Irena writes such stories and I just translate them. So, thanks again for such a warm welcome! :-)
Date: 01/11/09 09:17 am Title: Chapter 1
What a beautiful story! I just really loved the imagery in this and how everything is explained, but not quite (if that makes sense!). Just a really lovely story!
Date: 01/11/09 07:02 am Title: Chapter 1
Very impressive.