Date: 04/26/09 10:52 pm Title: Chapter 6
OH GOD! idky but here u r making me HATE tomi... sniff sniff...
u know this storie is great n the way both twins interact is awesomee! i mean how the other give things to the other just cuz they ask... here i really wish bill could say no for once to Tom so he could think things better...
still i love this :D
Author's Response: Oh, thank you! I'm glad you like it so far! And yeah, I know what you mean about Bill saying "no". Sometimes, I wish my story would let him, but nope! I need to torture the twins ALOT more before this thing is over! Thanks for the review, once again!
Date: 03/07/09 03:02 pm Title: Chapter 6
awesome, plz write more :3 LysiWicked craves it :D
Author's Response: Will do, will do! Thanks for the reviews!
Date: 03/07/09 01:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
this is an awesome story! :3 and it's only just started! wiiiie!
gonna keep reading now :D
Author's Response: Heehee!! Thank you! I'm glad you like it! I'll be updating with chapter 7 soon! I promise!
Date: 02/13/09 02:33 pm Title: Chapter 6
Why insinuate gay incestuous sex when you can describe it in graphic detail?!
Author's Response: lolll...Well, to be honest...I wasn't up to writing butt-sechs that day...The shower scene kinda took all the sexual...ness outta me, so by the time I got to Bill's entrance, I couldn't really write smut anymore...But I promise you, there will be plenty more opportunities for Billa an Tomi to be dirty, dirty boys...Just wait and see...Oh! And, of course, thanks very much for the loverly review!
Date: 02/10/09 09:48 pm Title: Chapter 4
Like it? I loved it! The ending was funny too.
Author's Response: Danke, danke! Oh, thanks for the favorite, by the way! I hadn't seen it earlier when I responded to your first review...*iz silly* I'm glad you found it humorus! I aim to make people laugh and release endorphins!
Date: 02/10/09 03:45 pm Title: Chapter 6
hey i read your chapter and it was not what i was expecting so I'm going to write you my thought about it and post it later for you just wanted you to ger this first so you know that i read your new chapter and cant wait for more.
Author's Response: Thank you muchly!
Date: 02/10/09 12:58 am Title: Chapter 1
This fic is really well written. You need to make a better summary or a banner so more people will read.
Author's Response: Thank you! I know...I do...The summary bit is 'cause I'm a lazy foo...The banner, however, is in the making. I'm gonna finish it up by this weekend so hopefully I can attract more readers with the pretties... :P Thanks again!
Date: 02/02/09 02:08 am Title: Chapter 5
ok I feel so sympathetic towards bill again he's so self sacrificing. I like that you let the reader in the head of bill it was enlightening because it let me see that he wants to be with tom but he loves him so much that he just wants him happy. and if liz makes tom happy bill will suffer through heartache for his happiness. I love bill in this story so much because he's so dimensional. I underestimated him I thought he was dilusional but he knows everything that going on and he axcepts it. I want bill to find happiness too he so deserves it after this chapter because I love him the most and he deserves love the most eventhough he has relationship with tom he will never get between tom's relationship with his girlfriends that's honorable. I assumed that tom still sleep with tom but I see he never chases tom he comes back to with his own free will. and he's never really pushy of tom's attention. even when he wants to be he so needs to stick up for his feelings and himself.
oh tom still funny he confuses me so much in his thinking. one minute he's all liz is my truelove next minute he all over bill. I hate the way he treats bill like he's all ways going to be there no matter what so i'll play with his feelings. he's so selfish and unpredictable so I never know where he stands so it's frustrating.
I like the man made family they have in the band. I can actually kind of see that as a true analysis of their roles to eachother in the band. it was a nice side note to the story.
so I really happy with the story and I like how you keep it changing all the time on me where things stand and I really want to see what happens next with tom's and liz's date. I really like liz so this should be good. make tom actual work for a person for a change. maybe bill should get some pointers from is female self because she's knows how to keep tom interested in only her for longterm and only her.
Author's Response: Once again, thank you for being such a faithful reader! I really do appreciate your comments and reviews! Sometimes knowing that you have an audience can really make a difference with a story! ;DrnrnAnyways, I hope I'll be able to keep you on your toes with the next few chapters! I have a few REALLY BIG surprises that I hope to pull off in a few chapters time...Keep watching for updates! Thanks again!
Date: 01/18/09 12:49 am Title: Chapter 4
I didn't think they're going to have sex because of the whole liz thing. and for some reason I felt like bill was bitchy to tom during the whole tom asking to make love and it made me want tom to be with liz because bill was treating him like crap and he actually didn't deserve it at the time really.
I find myself pitying tom in this chap and I shouldn't after all I wanted bill to bitch at him but for other reasons.idk I guess I can understand but then at the end when tom called liz for dating again I said "oh tom" then I jumped back on bill's side eventhough I found the last line funny and so tom still trying to get his way with liz.
now back to me thinking poor bill.
wow sorry for all that I love this chap it made me think twice about who I want tom to be with and that's good.keep it up because your suprising me eventhough I thought I had your story peg.more please
Author's Response: Heehee! I'm glad I've got you thinking! There's still more surprises to come, so keep on the lookout! I'll update soon, I promise!
Date: 01/15/09 05:39 pm Title: Chapter 3
so I love the slang and the cute goodbye bill gave to gustav and georg when they went to mengle. well I see that bill is being a good brother and helping tom get the girl of his dreams but tom so didn't appreciate the gesture. that was a funny fight, I see that liz wants to start slow. and that liz is already coming in between bill and tom but they don't even realize that tom totally ignores or forgets about bill when he's with her. can't wait for the next chap to see the way tom makes it up to bill for the misconception of the situation and I want bill to yell at tom for everything that tom has done to him that day too.
Author's Response: Danke, danke!/ Billa might do some yelling soon...but wwe'll hafta see just who at...Thanks for the comments!
Date: 01/15/09 02:24 pm Title: Chapter 3
woah...part of me is really really scared because i do not want Lizzy to come btwn Bill and Tom (as I know she will) I mean, she's nice and all, but for some reason, I feel like in the end Tom might just pick Bill (especially since Lizzy seems like a girl version of Bill) *shrugs& idk.
Author's Response: Well, you'll just hafta wait and see! ;D Thanks for reading and reviewing! I really appreciate it!
Date: 01/13/09 09:27 pm Title: Chapter 2
first of all I want a tom sandwich sounds good.
next well I think bill is defintely dilusional if he thinks tom's going to leave liz for him she's not just any other girl to tom so I feel sad for bill in long run. but it's halarious watch tom chase a girl instead of being chased. I can't believe he used penny's obsession with TH to get liz to the B-Day party. can't wait to see what happens at the party and will bill notice a difference in tom's affection towards liz. love your story so far.
Author's Response: Yeah, I somehow feel that, even with his crazy-awesome charms, he'd use every dirty-trick possible to get a girl if he really wanted her. Glad I'm entertaining you! Thanks for reading, once again!
Date: 01/11/09 04:16 am Title: Chapter 1
so going by the title and summary bill doesn't want to be with anyone other than tom but tom incidently wants to have fun with bill and a girl then by picking up liz tom realizing that her being like bill makes him fall in love with her giving him another way to have a relationship with bill by loving her it's the truelove he's been looking for because she's bill in a girl's body make everything bill and him have go away. then bill will lose tom forever as a lover because he found someone to make him stop. so that's what I think but I could be wrong but I like it so far so i'll keep reading I'm very interested to see how liz turns their lives upside down.
Author's Response: Good insights so far! You're on the right track, but I've got a fews more surprises in store. Thanks for reading!
Date: 01/11/09 12:01 am Title: Chapter 1
I like this so far! And I mean, I really, really like it. I've read a lot, but I haven't read anything quite like this, so that's a relief. I'm very interested to see where this is going.
Your username, I'm guessing that you read Loveless? I convinced my science teacher Mr. Gontasz to read it, and he's a fan now, too. :)
Author's Response: Thank you! And yes, I'm a Loveless fan. That's funny about your teacher! I did the same thing with my Junior year English teacher, actually!