Date: 04/24/10 03:51 pm Title: Chapter 1: Unrequited Pleasure
Lol :p that was fun!!
Date: 03/21/10 02:25 pm Title: Chapter 1: Unrequited Pleasure
ohhh u can continue this story!!! its so funny and great!! continue..please
Date: 02/20/10 11:04 am Title: Chapter 1: Unrequited Pleasure
I think I got frustrated with those words... but not even nearly as frustrated as Bill was left! lol
Nice story, quite funny
Date: 05/24/09 05:30 pm Title: Chapter 1: Unrequited Pleasure
ok ! lmao dude the ending was so funny i loved how tom completely leaves him there and then pops out with a "HUGE" word lol and bills just there like 0.o
Date: 01/17/09 02:22 pm Title: Chapter 1: Unrequited Pleasure
however Bill was ignorant of everything but the words – um *makes a face* I don’t know if ignorant is exactly the word you should use there… maybe oblivious would have been better.
“‘Colposinquanonia’, Skoptsy, Gymnophoria.” Hey these aren’t in order…is he flipping randomly or going through page by page?
Bill’s innocent expression drove Tom mad. Running at him, Tom jumped onto the couch in an attempt to catch his younger brother. Laughing Bill ran out of the way and behind the table in the dining room. Bill knew he was in control of this situation, deciding to taunt his brother even more, - *giggles* so funny Bill is so mean to Tom…but I bet Tom loves it
before I slowly untie your jeans…” – untie jeans? Um what kind of jeans is he wearing?
administrations – I think you just mean ministrations oops
The vocab words were fun. A great way to focus around a one shot. Nice! Very good first twincest story. Well done!
BTW sorry I can't help but beta it's compulsory for me.
Date: 10/13/08 02:29 pm Title: Chapter 1: Unrequited Pleasure
hahaha where did you got all that?!
Author's Response: lol where else? The internet.
Date: 10/12/08 12:24 am Title: Chapter 1: Unrequited Pleasure
that's so cute and they do like 2 tease eachother a lot and I do like ur stories and this one was lol u really do have a talent 4 writing
Date: 09/21/08 09:08 pm Title: Chapter 1: Unrequited Pleasure
omg wow that was hillarious. loved the part were tom denies bill.
Date: 02/21/08 05:12 pm Title: Chapter 1: Unrequited Pleasure
I have not once heard any of these words xD I'm even having a hard time pronouncing them xD
Still, this was really cute ^^ Liked it
Date: 02/08/08 05:46 am Title: Chapter 1: Unrequited Pleasure
hahaha :D love the end, that was brilliant.
Date: 01/12/08 12:16 am Title: Chapter 1: Unrequited Pleasure
Hahahahahha!
That was incredible!
Loved it!
Kudos!
Date: 12/24/07 10:17 am Title: Chapter 1: Unrequited Pleasure
lmao
Date: 12/10/07 01:32 pm Title: Chapter 1: Unrequited Pleasure
hahahah omg this was such a good story!!! i hope you do more!!
Date: 12/09/07 03:15 pm Title: Chapter 1: Unrequited Pleasure
OMG!LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL
THATS SO BAD!!!!! POOR BILL! XD
CANT STOP LAUGHING!
Date: 12/09/07 03:09 pm Title: Chapter 1: Unrequited Pleasure
hahah!
a really, really good one:P
funny, yet hot=D
Date: 12/09/07 09:09 am Title: Chapter 1: Unrequited Pleasure
Dude, that was good.
Date: 12/09/07 07:58 am Title: Chapter 1: Unrequited Pleasure
*___________* Tom always wins.
Date: 12/09/07 07:42 am Title: Chapter 1: Unrequited Pleasure
lol so funny
poor billy
he's so Philosophunculist
Date: 12/09/07 07:36 am Title: Chapter 1: Unrequited Pleasure
wow, that was brilliant! and funny! it loved it!
Date: 12/09/07 06:09 am Title: Chapter 1: Unrequited Pleasure
*laughs* this was so funny Go Tom!!! payback on Bill for the teasing... god that was so hilarious... *giggle* do continue i want more of this ::cookie::