Date: 01/29/10 06:24 pm Title: The End Is Also The Beginning
commited gay threesome wedding!! awesome!!!
Date: 01/29/10 05:30 pm Title: Are You Fucking Kidding Me?!
Double penetration powa!!!
Date: 08/07/09 11:01 am Title: The End Is Also The Beginning
Sorry for spazzing out and fangirling, btw. :)
Date: 08/07/09 11:00 am Title: The End Is Also The Beginning
I just finished reading the first story, and this one.... I didn't stop at all, haha! It was great! I gotta admit that I skipped the parts where Bill and Tom were too intimate (I'm a twin, so it's kinda awkward for me lol) BUT I LOVED THIS STORY!!!! OMG, IT WAS FREAKING AMAZING!!!! AGHGHGHGHGH!! I don't know what to say....
Date: 04/11/09 12:26 am Title: The End Is Also The Beginning
"I thought today we could just enjoy the company of one another." The light blush on his face gave Kristoffer an image of innocence. – awh he’s so cute!
Dinner was soon forgotten, halfway through Tom had dove across the table and latched his mouth on Kristoffers. Bill joined quickly – I suprized they made it that long lol
No matter how many times it happened, he could not get enough of them. - *grins*
"Bill, Tom... I love you both so much. I can't imagine my life without either of you anymore." Kristoffer opened the cases, revealing two beautiful rings.
"Will you marry me?" - *snorts* lol *shakes head*
Ok I have to say this was probably the hottest PWP I’ve ever read. To be honest there were some iffy parts the writing was sometimes not up to par, the transitions were sometimes a little lacking, and most unfortunately/disappointingly some of the sex scenes were sometimes void of detail. I only say these things because this really was a HOOOOTTTT story, OMG, and is worthy of a little constructive criticism. The sex was sometimes just ridiculously hot OMG!!!
And now thanks to you I’m going to go check out Manzini, thanks for the music reccomendation.
Date: 04/11/09 12:06 am Title: The Effect of Strawberries
Why the hell were all these people in the hall on their floor? – yes why?
He would have entered to, if not for the loud, almost painful sound he heard as he passed Georg and Gustav's room. – oh no! bad bad bad!
he took in the sight of Gustav, covered in strawberry juices and whipped cream and Georg between his legs, Gustavs cock covered in whipped topping and Georg licking it up. – ha ha oops!
They caught a quick glance of Georg dropping down and licking all the way up to Gustavs throat before the door closed. – see this deserves it’s own chapter.
Oh...my...god...was that Tom's...? Kristoffer chanced a glance over his shoulder and almost collapsed as he saw Tom's face between his ass, licking his hole, plunging it in slightly to pull it back out. – uuuhhhggg so hot!
The only thing Tom felt the need to do was yank down Bill's pants and boxers, pull out the vibrator he put in Bill before sending him for the drinks, push Kristoffer so he entered Bill, then slam into Kristoffer. - *grins* nice!
Their moans echoed around the room as they moved, quick, sharp thrusts onto one another. – awh it was so quick! *sigh*
Date: 04/10/09 09:04 pm Title: Dirty Bananas?
Nothing was more awkward, not even when Kristoffer woke up after his first night with the twins, than the morning he had breakfast with Georg, Gustav, and his beloved twins. Did they know? Did the other two band members have any clue what the twins did when they hung out with him? It wasn't likely. – ha ha I can’t even imagine!
Georg tore his attention away from his little hut he was making with toast and peanut butter. – lol!!!
And what was Bill thinking, let alone doing? – yes what is Bill doing? *shakes head*
His face flushed slightly, until he noticed that both Tom and Kristoffer had the hand closest to one another under the table, and their arms moving slightly. So this wasn't all going to waste! - *grins*
He saw Tom nearly wince, and Kristoffer lick his lips. He observed as Gustav paled slightly and Georg just tilted his head and widened his eyes as realization struck. Maybe it wasn't such a good idea after all...- I love that you get everyone’s reactions in here lol
It wasn't until five minutes later that Kristoffer finally excused himself from the table to find his beloved twins. - *shakes head*
"Finally, I thought they'd never leave." Gustav turned his eyes on Georg with pure lust. Georg smiled, lifted his hand towards Gustav and raised an eyebrow. A low 'meow' was purred and Georg chuckled as Gustav dragged him towards the elevator. – aaahhh I want a chapter on that game!!!
Tom was thrusting a bright, banana-shaped vibrator into Bill, causing him to writhe and moan until he was finally begging to be fucked. – ha ha just desserts!!!
"This is going to feel good, for all of us." There was no time to prepare as both Tom and the same vibrator which had been inside the beautiful boy underneath them, was slowly pressed inside. – HOOOOOOTTTTTT!
And while this had been, by far, the most interesting experience for them all, not one of them noticed the loud, banging rhythm of the bed hitting the wall separating their room from the room Georg and Gustav shared, and were in at that very moment. – lol of course they didn’t! *shakes head*
Date: 04/10/09 08:56 pm Title: A Glutton for Punishment.
"Bill felt he needed to...take a break. After all, he has been a bad boy...sneaking out like that. Wouldn't you agree?" Tom brought his hand up and caressed from Kristoffers cheek, down his neck, and stopped at his chest, enjoying the reaction of pure submission the younger boy displayed. - *Grin*
He couldn't help the moan, or how he closed his eyes and tilted his head back. Kristoffer couldn't even stop himself from arching into Tom's touch. – hot biscuits!
What was Bill's punishment? What would be his punishment? – probably nothing worse then last time!
He knew Tom didn't feel betrayed, at least not anymore. – that’s good!
Tom ignored his double's fingernails, which dug bloody lines into his shoulders. He placed a reassuring hand on Kristoffers waist. Tom wouldn't punish Bill or Kristoffer with anything he knew they couldn't handle. – that’s good!
"Bill and I will be here in exactly 24 hours." With that, Tom refastened Kristoffers' pants. - *giggles* soooo evil!!! *grins*
Tomorrow he would make damn sure both of them knew that no matter what punishment, what actions they took towards him he loved them both and he wanted to be fucked and to fuck them both. – awh all fluffy!!!
Date: 04/10/09 08:46 pm Title: A Change of Pace.
After their last endeavour, the twins left to return to their band, their tour. Kristoffer hadn't seen them since, but he did receive the occasional phone call. It was driving him mad, not having any other way to contact them. – awh poor Kris!
"I've missed you so much...Tom doesn't know I'm here." – I wonder if there will be trouble?
They never realized when they started moving towards the bed, nor when they fell on it. – ha ha horney boys!
Bill didn't know what to do, what to think. Tom had always rushed the process, thus making it fast and passionate. Kristoffer was doing the opposite, slow and loving. – awh all fluffy!!!
Kristoffer loved him, if he wasn't sure before just these soft touches were proof enough. – awh see all fluffy!!!
Bill's moaning never ended, not once. – hot!
"I really do love you both, Bill." Kristoffer kissed him, his arms wrapped loosely around Bill, should the dark-haired beauty need to move.
"And we love you too, Kristoffer." – awh!
Date: 04/10/09 08:38 pm Title: It's SO hard to lie during sex!
Kristoffer stared at the ominous video he held. - *flutter claps* what did they do to retaliate???
Bill stood in the shower, adjusting the temperature of the water. Tom stepped in and hugged Bill from behind.
For a moment, Kristoffer thought it would just be a regular, you wash my back I wash yours video. Then he remembered it was the Kaulitz twins. – ha ha nice!
This video war was causing him to miss the German twins more than he already did, but how could he deal with this if he couldn't even see them? – awh that’s just sweet!
"Damn, Bill, I thought this was one of our better videos and here Kristoffer is, watching it, and not even paying attention!" Tom was mocking, almost cruel, and leaning on the back of the couch. – YEAH!!!
"If he doesn't want to pay attention to our game, Bill, maybe we should punish him." – yes please!
His reaction was cut short as the younger twin suddenly impaled himself on his cock. – hot hot hot!
Bill was just ecstatic. Tom had forced him to wear a vibrator all day, it was hard to keep a straight face, because Bill had cried out Kristoffers name the night they made the shower video. He had no idea why Tom insisted on keeping him hard and horny all day, until they arrived at the hotel room and snuck in. He could barely believe he was riding Kristoffer after being away for over two months. - *giggles* this is a suprize for Bill and Manzini *grins*
Tears were forming, he was so hard it hurt. Kristoffer barely had a chance to register it when Bill had his orgasm, especially since Tom impaled himself next on his throbbing cock. – he he good punishment!
He couldn't take much more, and they all knew it.
"Oh god...Please...please let me cum...please Tom...I'm sorry! I'll never do it again! Oh god I love you both so much!" – he he you made him beg. I love it!
Bill leaned over and whispered quietly to him.
"So...you love us, huh?" – *giggles* awh!
Date: 04/10/09 08:23 pm Title: Is He Really That Innocent?
Manzini looked at his collection. – collection? As in what the Kaulitz had sent him?
When Bill and Tom recieved the tape, they just looked at it for a moment, then exchanged smirks. What had their lovely lover come up with? They pushed the tape in and hit play. What they saw caused both their jaws to drop. - *flutter claps* what did he do? O_O *grins*
There was their Kristoffer, in a white tie up short sleeved top, a red and black tie, a red and black plaid skirt, white knee socks and black mary-janes. He wore red eye shadow, mascara, eyeliner, red nail polish and...was that lipstick? Kristoffer had a lust-filled expression on his face as he looked at the camera. – he he he he AWESOME!!!
They watched his hands roam over his own ass, frustrating them as they willed him to put those sinful fingers where they would have, but Kristoffer never did. – ha ha that’s awesome!
Opening his legs, he gave the twins a full view of the underside of his panties. He was already hard.
"I've been thinking about you all day." He lightly traced his cock as he smiled at the camera. – hot hot hot!!!
"I cant do this alone Tom, Bill. My own fingers aren't enough. I need something up there." The sinful words sent shivers down their backs. Bill bit his lip, Tom reached down and touched himself. Kristoffer played with one of his dreaded pigtails. - *giggles* OMG he’s so good at this lol
They all moved in time, Kristoffer on the tape moaning loudly as Tom thrust into Bill. They were so close, eyes never leaving the screen. What happened next drove both twins over the edge into orgasmic bliss.
Kristoffer screamed their names, slamming the vibrator in to the point it was almost out of their view, and came hard into his own hand, turning his head to look straight at the camera. His eyes screamed his lust to them and shook them to the core. – OK this entire bit was sooooooooooooooooooooo fucking hot!!! OOOOOO MYYYY GOOOOODDDD!
Date: 04/10/09 08:06 pm Title: Will I Die In Seven Days?
His first thought pertained to Ringu. – ha ha I love that you put the original on there. Lol
Tom was behind him, and from what Kristoffer could see...was he licking Bill's hole? Kristoffer felt his face go hot. – nice!
The lens zoomed in on where his fingers disappeared as another finger replaced Tom's tongue. His voice was heard as Tom added a third finger. – ok where is this tape and why don’t I have a copy?!
"Oh...Kristoffer..." Bill's voice drifted to the camera as Tom pointed it down at his cock, where Bill was slowly lowering himself. "I wish this was your big, delicious cock inside me." – I like it both ways Tom or Kirstoffer!
Kristoffer groaned and moved his hand in time with the twins' erotic thrusting. There was nothing more he could do than ride this out, and he knew it. If he stopped now he would be hard in his pants for the rest of the day, and he had interviews later. – ha ha I love the logic!
If the twins wanted to play rough, he was game, and he wasn't about to let them get off that easy, pun intended. – ha ha that’s awesome!
Date: 04/10/09 08:01 pm Title: Returning The Pleasure
Thinking quickly, he set his cellphone up to record this. He pushed a few more buttons before continuing his masturbation. – lol that’s awesome what is he going to do with it?
He didn't even concentrate on the voice coming from his phone.
"Oh god, Tom...look at him!"
"I know, Bill...those hands wont give him enough pleasure. Now just shut up, and watch." - *giggles* OMG this is so much fun!
Soft groans could be heard from the phone. The twins were joining in on the fun, from the sound of it, and just thinking that was Kristoffers' undoing. - *giggles* that is sooo hot!
Kristoffer leaned forward and kissed Bill's shoulder, glad he thought of this plan. – I wish there had been a little more transition/actual planning with Bill would have made this a little more believable.
Date: 04/10/09 07:54 pm Title: Are You Fucking Kidding Me?!
Why were they all naked? Kristoffer stared blankly for a moment, unable to put the facts together just yet. Pain in ass, plus headache, add in a couple of naked Kaulitz twins and a feeling of utter fullfillment. His eyes widened comically as the answer came to him. – stupid boy…you’ve got hot naked twins in bed with you and you’re freaking out?!
"Shut up! There's no way I had sex with you two! I'm not gay! I like women!" The obvious denial caused Bill to giggle. He had been that same way the day after he had sex with Tom for the first time, of course he couldn't help but give in the second time, or the third. – that’s a cute way to put it.
You fuck a man, and be fucked at the same time, and you will always drown in the pleasure. – hot image!
If this is what true passion felt like, why the fuck was Kristoffer letting it go so easily? He couldn't, all he could do was surrender to the Kaulitz twins' manipulating movements. – wow Tom’s good!
He suddenly gasped as he felt two fingers, one from each hand, push into him. He could feel everything, the movements in unison, the contrast of each finger, but could barely concentrate as Bill's free hand wrapped around his cock, stroking, distracting, even as more fingers were added. His world went white as Kristoffer came all over the wall. – OMG that is so hot!
Tom lifting Kristoffer so he would ease down on Bill's waiting cock. Kristoffer knew that was what would happen, but he didn't expect Tom to lower him down onto his own as well. – Impossible but a lot of fun.
Even as he came again, and again, and again by the twins hands for the rest of the day. His last conscious thought was how he was going to keep this a secret at the recording studio the next day. – ha ha that’s what he’s worried about?! Fun!
Date: 04/10/09 07:38 pm Title: It Started With A Gummi?
I’m trying to wrap my head around this beginning…I’m not sure what to make of it.
Kristoffer downed the alcohol and caught the gummi in his teeth. Smiling, he revealed it to the dark-haired twin and chuckled as Bill clapped and giggled. He was unprepared as Bill suddenly leaned over, bit down on the other half, closed his lips upon Kristoffers', and moaned. As his eyes widened, Kristoffer felt all the blood rush down and pool in his lower abdomen. – ha ha nice!
Everything suddenly felt...fine. It felt so good in fact, that Kristoffer didn't even fight as both twins took one of his hands each in their own, and took him to a waiting cab. – oh it’s one of those kinds of fics…I didn’t read the warning…*grins*
"Kristoffer...I want you. I want you to fuck me." The voice which was usually so shy was bold, serious. – nice right to the fucking point! I like it!
"Bill knows what he wants Kristoffer. I'm even going to show you what he wants, and how to give it to him. Through your own body." – oh first HOT, second what?
Tight, strong heat wrapped around him. Kristoffer had to concentrate on it as the pain in his ass was all he could think about. It hurt, it really did, but he didn't want to stop it. – ah! Ok I get it…sorry a little slow on the up take.
They knew the fun was only just beginning, sharing a final kiss before curling around their new lover. – he he I want a toy too!
Date: 04/09/09 10:51 pm Title: The End Is Also The Beginning
Divine Narcissism is right. Whoo, I think I need a cigarette now...
Date: 03/31/09 03:38 pm Title: The End Is Also The Beginning
Oh my god! I liked this. It's different than others ^^ uh, loved this
Author's Response: =) why thank you!!!
Date: 03/30/09 06:31 am Title: The End Is Also The Beginning
please please please please make a follow-up story!
Author's Response: =P with all the people asking for a follow-up?! How can I refuse!!!! But I probably wont start it for a little bit...gotta get my head together about it ;)
Date: 03/30/09 04:31 am Title: The End Is Also The Beginning
Aww Loved it!!!! I really would like a follow-up ^^
xx Chi
Author's Response: I probably will! It broke my HEART to end this one!!!
Date: 03/29/09 09:27 pm Title: The End Is Also The Beginning
haha I love it. its Manzini and twincest and yumminess all balled up into one. its totally awesome. :)
thank you so much for writing this. really, thank you. :) x3
Author's Response: thank YOU for giving me my 50th review! =D I had so much fun writing this story but I knew I had to end it sooner or later, but it almost makes me want to cry now that its over!