Reviewer: longwayhome Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/10/09 03:09 pm Title: Chapter 1

that banner is fiercely hot.

Author's Response: Thank you! I tell my friend that ;)

Reviewer: firelucy Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/10/09 02:05 pm Title: Chapter 1

oh yum, this is just so good.

I really like your writing style, it's easy to recognize because you always write the twins in your own special way. I especially like your Tom, he's so big brotherly in a totally sinful way ,)

In the first scene the emotion was just described so well. And I really liked this line: "Bill hardly spared him a glance during the meal and Tom was thankful for it." it shows that they're trying to help each other resist and that's really sweet.

I think this line though: "Tom reached for the tube they always kept close. There was no telling when they would need it next time." sort of ruined some of the need to resist each other. Keeping lube close kind of indicates that they're just waiting for it to happen again and I think it just messes a bit with the wonderful way you've described how "They didn’t want this need to make love to one another." I think that it would make more sense if they didn't have the lube out already.

I'm really looking forward to more of this, you write this plot bunny well!

Author's Response: Thanks, honey. I thought that if they already have been doing it for years the lube should already be there waiting. ;) I haven't really thought about it the same way you did. Thanks for the heads up. You know I always appreciate your reviews so don't stop. Love Susanne

Reviewer: Tamara Kaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/10/09 01:11 pm Title: Chapter 1

Fucking hell that was daaayyyumm good!! More soon I hope. :P

Author's Response: Thank you so much, Sweetie. I plan to have next chapter up by next Saturday. love