Date: 04/18/09 06:38 am Title: Chapter 4
Haha! They still suck at resisting, but you know...I really don't mind. Especially with a guest appearance by Top!Bill.
The end of this chapter is damn sad, girl. The angst is just going to get worse, huh? Well, I love your stories, so I'm with you to the end. :)
Author's Response: Aww. You're with me to the end. That line warmed my heart. I hope to finish this story before the twins arrive because then who knows how much time I'll have :) Love Susanne
Date: 04/17/09 07:39 pm Title: Chapter 4
Aw, I like top!Bill, even if this one was a bit sad :(
*pets twins*
Author's Response: I like it when Bill tops too but it's harder to write. Why I don't know since he's the bossy one and therefore it should come more naturally ;) <3
Date: 04/17/09 06:52 pm Title: Chapter 4
oh gosh, this is so sad! But I'm very glad that you finally got around to this story! It's one of your bests!
I can't wait for your update!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm glad you like it despite the sadness. More soon! <3
Date: 04/17/09 04:33 pm Title: Chapter 4
That's so sad for those two. That was...sweet,,,of Tom. I have a feeling neither of them is going to like this change at all. In fact, it might make some things more obvious when they change the way they act around each other. And the jealousy? I can only imagine.
Author's Response: It's a hard story to write. I sat with my eyes running this morning, writing and wondered why I do this to myself.^^ I don't have a good answer for it yet but maybe it will come to me. Anyway, thanks for reading it. <3
Date: 04/17/09 03:23 pm Title: Chapter 4
That's so sad.. Poor Bill.. I hope they come to terms that they need to stick by each other.
Author's Response: It is sad to write as well. That's probably the reason it has been a little neglected by me. Hopefully it will be brighter soon. <3
Date: 04/17/09 01:35 pm Title: Chapter 4
This was my favourite part so far, which is saying a whole lot as they've all been amazingly good. But this, with such a heart-breaking mood, also had the most amazing love in it. I really adored the little things and details you added, for example how Bill would play with Tom's dreads, which to me, seems very realistic :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for all the kind words. They made me smile. I'm glad you like the story even though it is sad at times. Hope you will like the rest as well. <3
Date: 04/17/09 01:14 pm Title: Chapter 3
This is such a lovely story, so sad, so passionate and so loving. Thank you so much for sharing this :)
Date: 04/17/09 01:01 pm Title: Chapter 2
Holy hell, that sex was amazing X__x Yeah, words fail me otherwise with this.
Except, how Tom was thinking about the unfairness in not being able to show his lover how he feels and show the world how he feels, that broke my heart a little.
Date: 04/17/09 12:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
Whoa. This is a pleasure to read. So hot, so sexy, with angst hidden and a loving tone to it all. You have really written well how the passion is so consuming, how they're trying to resist it, but just aren't able to. Makes me almost a little sad for them, to feel guilty about love that powerful.
Date: 04/17/09 11:15 am Title: Chapter 4
it pains me that they need to end it :(
Author's Response: Me too :(
Date: 04/17/09 10:16 am Title: Chapter 4
I love this story! It's so heartbreakingly awesome. Add more soon
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I will. <3
Date: 04/17/09 09:29 am Title: Chapter 4
i like this very much :)
Author's Response: Thank you for telling me. <3
Date: 04/17/09 06:46 am Title: Chapter 4
Daaaaaaaaayuuuummmm!!!! I luurv DomBill!! HAWT!!
Author's Response: Thank you! I like when he tops too. <3
Date: 01/25/09 08:15 am Title: Chapter 3
*loves*
They have to be a little more careful in public. Or Georg might become a little suspicious.
Author's Response: So true! Thank you for reviewing, sweetie. <3
Date: 01/24/09 08:22 pm Title: Chapter 3
Mmm baby-bay-bay!! O__O
Author's Response: <3
Date: 01/24/09 07:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
this was cute =) now give us some real wangst :D
Author's Response: Sorry, but you'll have to wait a few chapters before that happens. <3
Date: 01/24/09 05:51 pm Title: Chapter 3
That was really sweet =]
They're horrible at resisting each other. But then again, who could resist a pouting, horny, naked Bill?
*cough*notme*cough
Haha. This was really good! :) I'm definitely looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: I know I wouldn't last three seconds if I had a horny, naked Bill. ;)Thank you so much for reviewing.
Date: 01/24/09 05:50 pm Title: Chapter 3
love u fiction....
Author's Response: Thank you! <3
Date: 01/24/09 05:33 pm Title: Chapter 3
plz update soon..thx=] i luvz u..hurry thx
Author's Response: I'll try for next weekend. <3
Date: 01/24/09 04:44 pm Title: Chapter 3
cute....
Author's Response: Thanks