Date: 02/11/09 12:12 am Title: Disappointment
Man i feel so bad for Bill...i hope you update soon!
Date: 01/30/09 03:59 pm Title: Enough To Make You Nauseous
Fucking life... I wonder how Bill got pregnant... I mean, I know how it works but he's still a guy and I'm sure you'll give an explanation ^^
I can't wait to read the moment when Bill and Bu will meet again !
Date: 01/26/09 07:02 pm Title: Enough To Make You Nauseous
God, this is SO SO good. I cannot wait to read more.
Date: 01/26/09 02:44 pm Title: Prologue
I loved the "no, bitch, no second chances" part. I can't wait for more!
Date: 01/26/09 02:16 pm Title: Enough To Make You Nauseous
I'm eager for more. I like this!
Bill ;_;
Date: 01/26/09 11:49 am Title: Enough To Make You Nauseous
ohhh i feel so sorry for Bill
abd Bu with that bitch (tanna) was hilarious
i hope u'll update faster
Date: 01/26/09 10:44 am Title: Enough To Make You Nauseous
Stop teasing us :p
Date: 01/26/09 09:39 am Title: Enough To Make You Nauseous
OMG! so happy when i saw this too updated along with "PD"
I think this fic is going to be one of my all time favorites.I love it so much already.I took special time to read it because i didn't ant any interruption.
I love the way you introduce things.The pace is excellent,and I get attached to the characters already.
I laughed at the bitch part lol! "Tanna follows after hm like a puppy" XD
So,this will be updated every monday too?I hope it's as long as ABH,or better yet,Makes three lol!
I can't wait to read about Bill's appointment at the doctor.I wonder how you will explain the m-preg.Is it normal in the society,like rare males who can carry a child or something else?
The last sentence was so...I don't know,makes me sad.I feel even sorrier for him just because of that last sentence.Like it has more meaning,than the the view.
thanks for the awesome chapter girls!
Date: 01/25/09 10:23 pm Title: Enough To Make You Nauseous
haha, love the last line. very bartlby.
Author's Response: ... Did you just reference Melville? Because that's awesome.
Date: 01/25/09 10:23 pm Title: Enough To Make You Nauseous
lulz
Date: 01/25/09 10:07 pm Title: Enough To Make You Nauseous
I really like this =]
Date: 01/25/09 08:57 pm Title: Enough To Make You Nauseous
Bitches really were stupid. that line was friggen amazing. as someone who lives by that line, it was funny to read it xD OH AND.. The view is a brick wall. *nods head* yea...that sucks...and it shows just how bleak life is...and may I go a little further to sayt hat I see symbolism there? ANYWHOOS, I loved this chapter, much like your other two, and I can't wait for the next chapter ^_^
Date: 01/25/09 07:48 pm Title: Enough To Make You Nauseous
What a stark, sad image. But he hasn't HIT that brick wall yet because he doesn't know what we know. I'm really excited for that little revelation.
Your character development is so meticulous and the chapter is full of little details that are so effortlessly incorporated. So wonderful, of course.
This has got to be one of my favorite stories on the site right now; I am always eagerly awaiting more. Thank you for this.
Date: 01/25/09 07:26 pm Title: Enough To Make You Nauseous
Awww. Poor Billa is a sicky-poo. *hugs Bill*
Date: 01/25/09 07:21 pm Title: Enough To Make You Nauseous
"And you totally suck for leaving me stranded, because I'm all sickly and weak or something."
Aw. :( I feel really bad for Bill. We all know what's happening to him, but he doesn't have a clue... Can't wait 'till he finds out. And Bushido. *__*
Date: 01/25/09 07:09 pm Title: Prologue
Hot. I love how Bill's totally clueless and immature.
Date: 01/25/09 07:01 pm Title: Enough To Make You Nauseous
Something about that last line was just.. perfect.
Date: 01/25/09 06:57 pm Title: Enough To Make You Nauseous
The view is a brick wall.
Feeling like your life is one big dead end must really suck. Can't wait until he finds out why he's sick. That reaction should be epic.
Date: 01/13/09 06:49 pm Title: The Various Joys of Pot
Waaa I wasn't expecting this. Brilliant as always. Can't wait to find out how this is gonna turn out..i'm intrigued :D
Date: 01/13/09 07:47 am Title: The Various Joys of Pot
FUCK I LOVE YA'LL!! beautifully written. Caught my attention from the very first sentence. Can't wait for more. :D