Date: 08/21/09 03:28 pm Title: Making Room
-flail- cliffhangers kill me lol but I love this chapter and this story overall. Looking very forward to reading more :) Great job ^__^
Date: 08/21/09 12:14 pm Title: Making Room
One quick question; should Bill be drinking coke? Caffeine is bad for pregnant ladies, is it the same for pregnant men, or is he just drinking caffeine-free soda? Or is all soda caffeine free and am I making this up?
Erm. Anyway. TOM! Where has he been all this time? D: The plot thickens!
Author's Response: Hahaha, a fine point.
Date: 08/21/09 12:02 pm Title: Making Room
OMFG!
I knew you'd bring Tom up at some point but I was really really suprised and swore so loudly XD.Bad me.I even recall asking questions about him in the earlier chapters.OMG!Now that you mentioned him,I don't even know why I'm HYPER SUPER excited!lol!
I can't wait to discover if Bill and Tom are on good terms or on awkward ones.Do they love each other still?Bill seem to care a lot about him.Why did he leave?All my questions back then return full force lol.Maybe it was because of Simone.He left Bill alone With the shit though,er,I mean the burden of a ill mother.That is of course only my guess.
Now,the reason why he's a Bill's doorstep.Yeah BILL's.Don't tell me he's in deep trouble too?OMG Bushido won't ever accept him in O_O,and talking about him,he'll be so suprised to know that Bill has a brother,but he'll be more than that when he discovered that Bill's a twin XD.
That means Tom can conceive too *_*.Does he prefer girls or boys,or both? Oh sh*t,something just crossed my mind,like ...Tom's preggers.O___O That's why he's in trouble,that's why he's at Bill's doorstep.Right,that was farfetched.Or not :p
He's there because Simone's dead,I guess.At least,that's the most eligible possibility.
This sentence was freaking cute I melted fast:
"He flips ahead quite a few months and circles a date. The day he's gonna meet his kid."
AWWW! Bushido is always thinking about his kid and Bill and he already thinks of them as his family.Well,he didn't voice it out loud yet and didn't let his thoughts go there but he's so thinking that.When he does something,he thinks about them first,and then decides.How cute is that? *_*
Good relationship he has with his father also.And Mohamed is such a kind hearted guy.No doubt he taught his son well enough.Bet he'll cry when he learns he's gonna be grandpa.
I really enjoyed this chapter.That was awesome,cute and surprising.Nothing too bad happened YET.But knowing you two,it won't be like this forever,that's why I love you guys.Your stories are always believable in their own logic and rules.
I hope you won't make Tom a bastard,like in "Negotiable affections" XD.Maybe he'll get to work with Bushido?I love the heavy and sinister atmosphere we get when reading this fic,sometimes.It's really addicting,like everything else you srite anyway.
And I start to repeat myself like an old broken tape so,I'll just shut up.
Merci beaucoup pour le nouveau chapitre ^_^
*HUGS*
Date: 08/21/09 09:25 am Title: Making Room
Oooooh. I wondered if Tom was going to have a place in this story.
Great chapter! :D
Date: 08/21/09 04:50 am Title: Making Room
That is a dirty trick, stopping there. >:|
Date: 08/21/09 04:08 am Title: Making Room
oh my fucking god...
you leave it there??!!!??!?!?!?!?!
GAH...
*exhales deeply* I'm okay...
*growls under breath* rusha-fusha-usha...
Date: 08/21/09 02:53 am Title: Making Room
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaarrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr.
You just ended there to hear of scream of frustration. Don't you?
Oh my! Tomi is in the scene. I'm dying to know that happends.
And the bill/bu moment is sweet. It's so cute to see busido doing all these things for bill while trying to keep his cool.
Date: 08/21/09 01:55 am Title: Making Room
Ohooooo! >:D
Finally, Tom shows up. I can't wait to see what happens, now =]
Date: 08/21/09 01:34 am Title: Making Room
Ooh, I'm anxious for the next update now :D This story keeps getting better ^_^ Love it.
Date: 08/21/09 12:55 am Title: Making Room
UGH.
This is the second story where I wish Tom wouldn't be here. XD
I love Tom, don't get me wrong. He's my baby. But UGH when he ruins cute things, like Bushido and Bill. >:O
I loved this, by the way :)
Date: 08/17/09 07:25 pm Title: An Offer You Can't Refuse
It was a great gesture from Bushido to take that job thinking about Bill and the baby. An the end was amazing x)
I love this :D
Date: 08/16/09 10:33 pm Title: An Offer You Can't Refuse
You go, Bu. LOL. I looove this! Can't wait for more!
Date: 08/16/09 06:02 pm Title: An Offer You Can't Refuse
Bushido's career path makes me a bit uneasy...I smell trouble...
But I'm very happy that Bill will no longer have to deal with his creepy landlord. :D
Date: 08/16/09 02:32 pm Title: An Offer You Can't Refuse
I love you guysss *_*
Date: 08/16/09 02:32 pm Title: An Offer You Can't Refuse
I love you guysss *_*
Date: 08/14/09 08:35 pm Title: An Offer You Can't Refuse
I'm so glad I'm not poor. I never really think about how shitty some people have it.
Date: 08/14/09 03:41 pm Title: An Offer You Can't Refuse
Bushido is my hero *swoons* lol. I love this story to bits. It's a tad slow but it gives it more intensity.
Date: 08/13/09 11:28 pm Title: An Offer You Can't Refuse
I've just gotta say, I'm loving Bushido. :D