Date: 10/26/09 11:20 pm Title: Serial Monogamy
I absolutely LOVE this chapter! The kiss at the end was so perfect. One of my favorite parts is when Bill is talking to Georg at the bar and is thinking "He didn't do this to himself for shits and giggles." LOL! Awesome.
Date: 10/26/09 11:02 pm Title: Serial Monogamy
awww this was so cute even though my mouth dropped when Bushido punched Georg.
Date: 10/26/09 10:57 pm Title: Serial Monogamy
serial monogomist *snorts HARD*
dudesssssssss. Jealous Bushido is Jealous. & I HEART him muchly.
ok, so i SHOULD be writing a proper review, by my head is KILLING ME & i battled off my migraine for a couple minutes so I could read this....if i remember i'll leave a proper review. if i don't, you guys get the stuff from before and:
BWAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAAH. yea.
Date: 10/26/09 10:47 pm Title: Serial Monogamy
Awwwwwwwww!!! Right now I'm grinning like a maniac (a very, very happy one XD)
Date: 10/26/09 10:41 pm Title: Serial Monogamy
Aww :] that was cutee :]].. How are you darling??
Date: 10/26/09 10:04 pm Title: Serial Monogamy
Awwww, I love this! I love how you updated relatively frequently, too. Thank you!
Date: 10/26/09 10:03 pm Title: Serial Monogamy
Awwww, I love this! I love how you updated relatively frequently, too. Thank you!
Date: 10/26/09 09:32 pm Title: Serial Monogamy
UGH. I love you guys so much I just wanna hit you in the face.
That makes no sense :D
Date: 10/26/09 06:03 am Title: Burnt Eggs
this story... is amazing. that's all i can say, really. i can picture Bill leaning over the pan perfectly, expression and all. XD i'm wondering if you accept fic suggestions? you might have the story completely planned out but i have something in mind that i can see Bushido doing for Bill so if you're interested let me know and i'll reply with it. this story deserves a feature, tenfold.
Date: 10/20/09 10:59 pm Title: Burnt Eggs
Looveee every update to this :)
Date: 10/20/09 03:54 pm Title: Burnt Eggs
Every chapter makes me 10x more glad I favorited this, and this chapter was no exception.
I love how Bushido is all-gangster, through and through; it's something I have yet to achieve and I really admire you guys for it. Thanks :)
Date: 10/20/09 10:22 am Title: Burnt Eggs
Glad to see updates.
Bill is still so insecure. I wish he can trust Bu a bit more.
Date: 10/20/09 02:12 am Title: Burnt Eggs
this is good! update!
Date: 10/20/09 01:53 am Title: Burnt Eggs
LOL. Super hot. How'd I miss the last update? Or did you post two chapters today?
Date: 10/20/09 12:52 am Title: Burnt Eggs
ok, proper review, on time, this time. Lol.
As always, I love the undercurrent of how real this is. I'm not reading a fanfic, I'm watching my sister deal with her baby father, my brothers with their baby mothers. I'm watching my cousin, struggling with work, tryna find her identity, without always having to depend on a man that'll get 'tired' of her.
I don't ever think i'll get over that feeling, as it rushes over me, every time I open this story. It's so realistic, down to the ways they talk, interact, the expressions ad thoughts that you two give us while they're struggling so hard to keep from drowning in this thing they call life.
So yea, I'm just talking out the ass now, but as always, I really do love your work.
Date: 09/30/09 12:33 am Title: Mutual Interest
That was, in a word, hot. And I'm not just talking about them screwing. So happy to see they're getting somewhere with their relationship now that Tom's gone again and his friends seem to be MIA. Cuteness, cuteness.
Date: 09/29/09 04:19 pm Title: Mutual Interest
That last scene is damn near priceless. (^_^)
Date: 09/28/09 10:46 pm Title: Mutual Interest
YES! SEX! I mean... this chapter was great. In all seriousness, you both have this way of personifying Bill and Bushido that's different from their real-life personalities but yet still fits them so well. I love it. Its like a whole new Billshido. I like that this chapter made more progress on their relationship, but it wasn't like "wham-bam-we're in lurve!" Great job, I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
Date: 09/28/09 10:39 am Title: Mutual Interest
Wow, this chapter came so quickly after the last one. Wahoo!!!
This is my favorite chapter so far... I love Bushido's dream about the deer hitting him. LOL!!!! I couldn't stop laughing after reading that. Awesome. Yay, I'm so excited that they are getting somewhere in their relationship. Love this story!
Date: 09/28/09 10:36 am Title: Closure
"... There's a baby in there." LOL! That is so stinkin' adorable. Oh Bill. I love that Bushido went to Bill's appt with him. And he is so good to Bill... driving him to the doctor, bringing him a thermos of tea, buying him a coat. So cute! I absolutely love this story. My only hope is that Bushido can get discovered and start rapping instead of dealing :)