Date: 01/30/10 11:35 am Title: Fitting Pieces
Awwwwww. I love this story. It makes my day every time it's updated. :)
Date: 01/30/10 09:24 am Title: Fitting Pieces
I love this chapter, it's the little things they do, little moments of life that made them so real.
I found Georg such a lovable guy in this. Although I can't help to suspect he'd fallin a little for bill.
Bill and his fear of ugly maternity clothes. haha.
I wish I can see a next button to this. Please update soon.
Date: 01/30/10 06:13 am Title: Fitting Pieces
Damn I love when these two actually have happy moments like this, it warms my heart. Though it also makes me dread the shit that's bound to hit the fan.
Date: 01/30/10 05:33 am Title: Fitting Pieces
Sweet- Bill should be able to construct the crib on his own..it would be funny to see that...
Date: 01/30/10 01:06 am Title: Fitting Pieces
awwwww fluffy :-) i have been waiting for this chapter to come out for ages! thanks for posting the chapter!!!!!!!
Date: 01/30/10 12:20 am Title: Fitting Pieces
awww..... sooo cute :)
Date: 01/29/10 11:59 pm Title: Fitting Pieces
OH! And I forgot to mention the part when Bushido calls Bill "baby"... a;lskdjf;aslidjf!!! *dead*
Date: 01/29/10 11:55 pm Title: Fitting Pieces
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG!!!! a;sldkfjas;iegjd;lkj!!!!! YAY!!! Bushido won the battle and got a business card - good things are going to happen, I just know it!!!! I'm sorry for all the exclamation points, I'm just so happy about this chapter. (I'm a freak, I know) AHHHH!! And the putting together of the crib with his pops!!! OMG!!! I'm flailing all over the place. THANK YOU, GUYS!!!! Gonna go back and read this chapter again right now. LOVED IT SO MUCH!!!!!!
Date: 01/29/10 11:42 pm Title: Fitting Pieces
Aww!I'm melting *_*
For once I'm on time with reading and reviewing.Isn't that cool?I know,no one cares and it's not even important.
This chapter is like an introduction to "part three" of the story.Well for me anyway. Part one is Their separate lives.Two people who happened to fuck one night and we got to know more about the two of them individualy.Bill struggling with his miserable life and his burden of a mom.Bushido with the weed he sells after quiting his work and the record deal he's dreaming of never comes.There was NO hope at all in this part.I loved it!
Part two is when they start to get together because of the baby and something starts to build up between them.It's a little bud,almost invisible but it's growing little by little.Bill get to know about Bushido's "work", and Bill won back his work at the restaurant.Tom made an appearance and it helped us to know more about Bill and understand him.And Mohammed is freaking AWESOME!
Part three:enter Georg in the picture Anis has clearly some issues about him.Maybe he's right. And Bill seem to be almost okay with Georg making a move on him o_O.I hope it's only he hormones.Of course it's only the hormones :) Since a few chapters back Georg was kind of trying to be closer to Bill so this is not very surprising plus it adds spice to the sauce!
Add Benjamin.Heartless businessman and a bastard of first class. If Bushido tries to dump him,things are going to get messy.I worry already.
Now,I have a feeling that the guy at Bushido's battle was THE guy he's been waiting for so long.There is HOPE, but the way to get there is so full of obstacles.Thinking about Bill gives Bushido courage and strength he didn't know he could summon in him before.But what if he's angry at Bill(catching him with Georg?) and does something he regrets?Like...Throw him out? =O_O=
Also, maybe Benjamin will take pregnant Bill as a hostage?*oooh!That sounds exciting and frightening at the same time*
In this chapter you merged the fluff with the angst.How you managed that,is mystery, but please don't stop being amazing,it rocks!
I know my review is a little messy.It's revealing my personality?I'm f*cked up! XD. Oh and one more thing, I hope we will encounter Tom again in the future even if it's near the end, and that everything's going to be alright 'cuz he's an uncle now and it would be like a fairytale if Tom went back to Germany to live there,because without him, Bill isn't FULLY happy.Ill' steal Jost's words and say that "Bill carries that brokeneness within him",well, THIS Bill is like that.You want to constantly help him,hug him,pet him,take care of him...Man, Maybe Georg does want to do just that.Just hope for his own good that Bushido's gun is not in his pocket the day Georg makes a mistake.
Thank you girls for the chapter,that made my whole night better!(sorry for any typos, mistake and dumb grammar in this review,it's almost six in the morning,I need to sleep lol)
Date: 01/29/10 11:01 pm Title: Fitting Pieces
Yes, My B-day is tomorrow and this update has to be the best present! I love love love this story, and I hope it doesn't end when the baby comes. Reading this is like being a fly on the wall in the lives of real couple. The writing is simply superb. :)
Date: 01/29/10 10:49 pm Title: Fitting Pieces
aaaaw. that's so sweet. good job! I want more!!! :D
Date: 01/26/10 02:11 pm Title: Fatherly Advice
Umm... I don't think I left a review for this chapter the first time I read it. Oops! Anyway, LOVE it! Anytime Bushido's dad makes an appearance, I am happy. He is a very wise man and I'm glad Bushido has him to give him some advice on how to talk to Bill.
I especially love the part when Bushido is talking to Bill's stomach :D So damn cute... and then when Bill thinks he's talking to the baby but Anis is actually talking to Bill and saying he wants Bill to trust him enough... oh god, I can't handle how beautiful that scene is! Perfect chapter; I can't wait for the next one. I start to miss the story and go back and read through past chapters to tide me over until you two update again, which is what I'm doing right now. LOVE THIS STORY!! LOVE YOU TWO FOR WRITING IT!!
Date: 01/25/10 04:13 pm Title: Fatherly Advice
Finally catching up with this one too. Mohammed is freaking awesome!He rocks!It was so adorable when he offered Bushido's baby clothes.
I really like it that you build up this story little by little giving precious little details that warm my heart or tighten it depending of the situation.I see every scene clearly and it's a feeling I adore.Anticipating what you will write next because frankly, out of 10 guesses I made in each story you wrote, only 3 or 4 at best were right or a bit close to the truth.LOL.I love the fact that I think I might be right because I MIGHT know your writing style by now, but I always end up in the very wrong and you suprise me with new twists in your story.Did I make any sense at all?Thank you anyway girls!
Date: 01/18/10 10:56 pm Title: Fatherly Advice
Oh my god, I fucking LOVE bushido's dad. He outshines everyone whenever he appears, in my opinion. I hope you guys know how much I FUCKING LOVE this story. Pardon my swearing but no other words are strong enough to expression my infatuation with this story. I squeal every time I see it is updated! Thank you for bringing all of us pregnant Bill with Bushido, cause we all know there just isn't enough of that here at THF!
Date: 01/18/10 06:44 pm Title: Fatherly Advice
Yes yes yes amazing! *___*
This is my fave fic atm x) please update soon! :)
Date: 01/17/10 11:52 am Title: Fatherly Advice
love it right more
Date: 01/17/10 07:51 am Title: Fatherly Advice
oh gott. gimme more please XD
Date: 01/16/10 06:43 pm Title: Fatherly Advice
Yay indeed (^_^) Bushido and Bill are making such progress, Huzzah for Bushido's Dad.
Date: 01/15/10 06:58 pm Title: Fatherly Advice
I'm so happy to see this updated! This chapter really was sweet, and I love that Bushido is willing to listen to his dad and try to work on his relationship with Bill. He's so tender when he lets his guard down.