Date: 05/14/10 05:50 pm Title: Anxious
i got one thing to say 2 u...moar!!!!!
Date: 05/14/10 08:54 am Title: Anxious
OMG can't wait to know
Date: 05/13/10 10:24 pm Title: Hello, Goodbye
" Bill doesn't seem him right away"
Anyway, I thought for sure something was going to happen between Bushido and Sarah. I like this chapter though, it's simple and not so drama like =]
That review was supposed to be from me but I accidentally did it on my boyfriend's account because I forgot I was logged into his. So yes, I fixed it.
Date: 05/13/10 01:57 pm Title: Anxious
Great chapter. I never really been a fan of mpreg but I really like this story.
Date: 05/13/10 11:21 am Title: Anxious
how can you forget this? I'll still waiting for the day bill bears baby twins.
Date: 05/12/10 05:15 am Title: Anxious
im getting anxious now!! Great chapter!!update soon.
Date: 05/12/10 04:24 am Title: Anxious
I enjoy this story a lot. Your characterization is wonderful and I really appreciate it. Oh and wow, 6 weeks from now, that's soon. I can't wait for another update, I'm really excited.
Date: 05/11/10 11:20 pm Title: Anxious
When ever you start bad news like that, people inevitably get upset! Duh!
Date: 05/11/10 09:55 pm Title: Anxious
Oh no! I was enjoying the reading so much that I screamed when I realized that the chapter was over, you guys need to make them longer!
As cruel as ever, why did you end it there? Please don't take too long to update T.T
Date: 05/03/10 02:30 pm Title: Friendly Neighbors
I really enjoy following this story. Your characters are not only very human but also very lovable.
But I just can't shake off the feeling of unease every time Anis leaves for "work"...
Date: 05/02/10 04:34 pm Title: Friendly Neighbors
Bushido had to kill someone this time :/ poor him. I'm still loving the story too =] it's so fun and unique to read, with all the drama and everything included at times is great.
Date: 05/01/10 06:31 am Title: Prologue
OMG! I'm hooked to this story. It's cute that Mohammed (spelling?) and Mildred were caught pashing...
Date: 04/30/10 02:10 pm Title: Friendly Neighbors
I absolutely LOVE this story. I just finished reading what you've posted and I'm sorry I didn't have time to review each chapter (was reading at work... shhhh) but I will from here on out. I really want to know what happened with Bushido... I'm so glad he has Bill to kiss and hug him. Hopefully he can be what Bushido needs right now. I'm so worried that Bushido has killed someone and will have to go to jail or something! He can't leave Bill! Not when they're about to have their babies!!
Date: 04/29/10 07:57 am Title: Friendly Neighbors
After so much delaying I finally have the time to read this chapter properly. Everytime I decided to start it, something always came up.
I like the addition of new characters.Plus Mildred could be really helpful with Bill's pregnancy.And you're right, they are just three guys after all, a feminine and motherly presence could make things easier.
It was funny reading about Mohamed and Mildred. Those two flirting like teenagers was hilarious.I guess it spices up their lives a little, a bit of change in their lonely routines.Having someone to embrace that way again can be nice.
I'm sure Bill left an impression on those kids. He handled them quite well actually. He was confident and made himself clear without scaring them. Since a few chapters, Bill's character evolved into a more confident one. In general I mean. Before he was so insecure about anything and everything even the food. Now he's more relaxed even if he didn't comletely change. That moment with the kids was showing some of his confidence. This is his home and he demands explanation of what's going on.Right at that moment,he was THE boss.
I like how he clearly told Anis that they would be discussing again after the others leave. He stands his grounds, yet he is gentle and caring. After whatever happened at Anis'work, it's so natural for him to seek comfort. He looked like he needed to be reassured and pulled back to where he belongs:with his family.
Judging from Anis' reaction to his still warm gun, I take it he never truly had to use it before because whatever transaction Benjamin had went smoothly. But this time things went downhill and adrenaline kicked in when they had to use their guns. He could have died there.That could be what he thinks about when he embraces Bill and their kids in him. What would they become without him?
Or the reason why he shakes is that he had killed someone. Or at least had some people badly injured.
Enough of my speculations.That was a good chapter. Kind of emotional towards the end :)
Date: 04/28/10 11:36 pm Title: Friendly Neighbors
Omg wat happened!!!!
Date: 04/28/10 11:15 pm Title: Friendly Neighbors
Gah im so excited! Did Bushy kill someone!? I cant wait to find out!
Date: 04/28/10 07:27 am Title: Friendly Neighbors
Oh no Anis, what did you do? D:
The chapters are too shorts :P
Date: 04/27/10 07:10 pm Title: Friendly Neighbors
UPDAAATE!
Date: 04/27/10 07:03 pm Title: Friendly Neighbors
:( uh oh. bushido had to do something bad. i keep saying it, but get him outta there! and i want twin billshido babies to come right meow plz!