YES! He did it! Fuck you, Benjamin! But shit, this is gonna be bad for Bu. I'm so conflicted.
THE BABIES ARE COMING! THE BABIES ARE COMING! So excited for next chapter... and babies! This is why I love mpreg soooo much - who wouldn't love little babies that look like Bill and Bushido :D Bill's dream was so heartbreaking. It made me wonder if Tom will even come meet the babies at some point.

Speaking of Bill's coworkers... did Bu ever tell Bill that Georg couldn't hold his job at the restaurant? Surely he would've done it somewhere along the way, but I guess I was waiting to see if Bill would be upset at that bit of news. I was kind of hoping to see more of Bill interacting with his friends too since he hasn't seen them much lately. (That and I like reading about the other guys too, hehe.) Thanks for all the updates; I love this fic!

sooooo goood!

God Bushido! Get out know! Bill's going to KILL you dammit. *facepalms* but I'm glad Bill realizes the whole love thing xD

Hi guys, it's 02:24 am and here I am, finally reading every single chapters I missed. You don't know how it itched just thinking about the stories you want to read but you can't because of the stupid-not-so-stupid final official exams.
Anyway, the last chapters were really good. They have that feeling to them, like foreshadowing the future. It was some angst cleverly wrapped by light fluff and the reader I am is almost distracted by the happy stuff. Almost. Because in the middle of it all, I am not really comfortable reading the chapters sometimes, because you're showing me that something's going to happen, but it will be when I least expect it. That results in me wringling in anticipation and reading carefully every words, sometimes reading them twice, afraid that I misunderstood.

Reading about the "pregnancy fart" in the previous chapter was kind of embarassing lol. But it was hella funny, I actually re-read the part just to howl in laughter all over again.

Those light moments in the story are making up for the angst, and the balance is so beautifully put together.For me, they are not randomly put there, because most of the elements put in a story serve a purpose(at least, yours.In my opinion.) These are there to enhance the very anticipated climax of the story, maybe? I think, they help the readers to attach themselves further with the characters, and this far, we're all so hooked and love them so much.

How very clever indeed, to make us all feel that way. because when all hell break loose, we'll be shattered and suffer too. You know, that feeling of despair when you read about the characters suffering. I know I feel so anguished when that happens, and it makes me feel so much for that character I learned to love.

The real power behind one's writting, is when one make the reader feel like they can put themselves in the character's shoes, and forget momentarily who they are and instead focus on that universe shaped and created by words. Words well put together, full of thoughts and feelings, that can be real.

Bill is such an interesting guy. I was never able to guess what he'd do next. Be it his words, his thoughts or his actions. He's so unpredicable,the opposite of Bushido. When he offered his savings to Anis, he was in such a state of...Vulnerability? He appeared to be so helpless. But then, he put himself together and tried to be strong. I like everything about him.

I know I sometimes repeat myself about your writing guys, so I'll just shut up about it, lol.

Back to the story, this last chapter was rather long compared to its peers so thank you very much. It was full of new information. Bushido's so lost. Benjamin's display of power was very intimidating, and the scrariest part is his knowledge of Bushido's private life. He has more amunitions against him now, making Bushido's project of quiting the job rather difficult. The man's trapped because now he has started the infernal machine of lies towards his loved ones.

Benjamin can hurt them anytime he wants. That only, is like Damocles'sword over Bushido's head. I have the feeling, the scheduled date will be a key moment, and that day, lots of important stuff will happen.Not necessarily good stuff.

Now, the bit that squeezed my heart harder was Bill's wish to name his baby "Tom". Gosh, that was so painful to read. And it brings the question about Tom in the end. Is he a bad guy or just another guy making the "wrong" choice?(depending on whose point of view, ne?). Is it wrong of me to wish that Tom be redeemed? Probably in the end.Tom's Bill's last living family after all.Then again, it's not as if Tom would spit on any chance he's got to pull himself from misery and poverty. Yes, he did it by himself, leaving Bill and their mother behind, but maybe he thought of helping them when one day he'd earn enough to do that. But he saw Bill was taken care of, and didn't see him in that sh*thole of a home, starving and miserable. He, himself can barely manage it seemed, when he visited Bill. His own life is probably as difficult as Bill's. I'm stangely mellowed by his character.

Maybe I'm thinking way too much in this story and appear ridiculous in the end,lol. Well, I gladly do it, because I'm soooo hooked!

I think I better go to sleep before I type more rambling. Thanks for the update. And, oh, Happy belated B-day Meg, I just saw it in the news on the homepage.

:)

Aww... to name him Tom... that'd be lovely.
Should be.
It's better than "Matthew".

(:

UPDATE!

This is probably one of my favourite stories. I'm so glad you two are taking your time with this, not rushing anything, so there's real development in their relationship. Oh, and Theodore is too cute for words.:) And when Bill gave his spare money to Bushido that was a really moving moment. No wonder Bu felt 'more than just fond' of him.

<3 Those crazy kids.

I think they're gonna call him back... I just know it. Bushido will get his recording contract for sure... or he'll use Bill's money to release his own record? I dunno, I dunno - I can't wait to find out, though :D