Such a wonderful story. I'd actually forgotten about him giving that demo to Hahn. The ending was just lovely. :)

lulz. so is his name tumor or phil?...

hi, baby!!!
-gulps-

this is getting too cute.

seriously ashamed that i haven't read this yet, but i'm definitely loving it.

"But correction -- there is never a time too early for head."

SOOO TRUE.

:). That's all I have to say.

And I hope Bushido does get signed because that would just be the icing on top of the cake. I wonder how Bill would deal with being with a rapper who is always on the road. Or mabye Bushy will propose! I cant wait to see what happens next!

Wow. I don't even know where to begin. That was...Unpredictable. Yes, definitely. I mean, the Benjamin and Chakuza part. So, things went downhill, thank god Bushido left because no matter how good he was at his job, it was dead dangerous and it could have been him instead of Chakuza. While Chakuza's an idiot, I was shocked and I find it sad that he died. But he knew that the job was not for kiddies, and he knew the risks and the consequences so I don't really feel for him either.
(Will Bushido feel 'grateful' towards him for what he did to Bill's drink that night? After all, it led them to fuck and now he has a family. But then again, I don't know if Bill and Bushido would've done it anyway without the little 'liquid help'. I like to think they'd fuck anyway :)

And Benjamin was a jerk anyway, and was one little boss dealer killed among others. Unsurprising for the people in the trade, and probably a frequent thing to happen.

Now, time to squeal! Phil's name is TOM! Yay! I re-read again and again the parts that mention the babies in it *_* I can't get enough of them. Matt and Tom are melting my heart and drowning me in a jar of fluff. I almost died of excitement and squealing too much when Bill and Bushido said "I love you" to each other.

So much stuff in this chapter. I can hear the ending bells getting nearer. Please, tell me it's not ending at the next chapter. Tom still needs to meet his precious nephews, we still need to see the babies saying their first words and "watching" bits of baby videos with Mohamed and Bill lol. Note the excessive use of the word "need". Come to think of it, it can all fit in a single chapter ;__;.

So, Bushido didn't get a deal, but he's happier. I'm so happy for him, because he had too much on his shoulders. I feared for his life, but Benjamin's dead so all's good. I'm positive he will confide in Bill when he feels too much pressure, when the little guilt he feels resurfaces, without actually telling him what happened. I must say, Bushido's one courageous soul.

This chapter moved me so much. Nothing is perfect, but when you look back at what they went through, their life is close to perfect. They might struggle in the future for little things, but nothing Bill and Bushido can't face and I have faith in them :) They didn't become insanely rich or anything, and they just continue to just...Live. Continuing the story in my mind, I think Matt and Tom are growing up to become the best in whatever they will do later. They'll become so great and make their parents proud. Because I have faith in this Bushido and this Bill to teach them the right things, see them develop strong personalities and raise them to know how life is.

I cross my fingers and hope that you still have several chapters in store before this ends, because there's NO author's note announcing the end lol. One can always hope, right?

early babies!!! But i kinda feel horrible for chazuka :-S

Wraaah! You guys are freaking me out! Everything is so awesome and perfect and I'm loving everything about it, and that's exactly what makes me get this panicy feeling that something BAD is going to ruin everything any moment now. God I hope I'm wrong! Still love love love the story :)

This was such a cute chapter!
I absolutly loved it!
I am so happy everything seemed to work out, I was thinking that they were going to have some problems with Benjamin, thank goodness they didn't! =)