Date: 07/22/11 11:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
not to fond of the "yes, Mistress"...but the ending is nice ;-)
Date: 07/30/10 03:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was cute at the same time as it was hot :D Loved it!
Date: 06/05/09 10:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow I thought that was amazing! I love the way you ended it too; that made me gasp and smile. I'm still blushing from reading and that is a wonderful sign dear, awesome job!
Date: 04/12/09 12:25 am Title: Chapter 1
WOW That was really good you should write another one and make it longer.. but GREAT story my favorite so far...
Date: 01/16/09 05:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
Keep up the good work. Lets see what you do next.
Date: 01/11/09 02:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
Niice Niice!! Very hott!!! =)
Date: 01/11/09 10:44 am Title: Chapter 1
It was amazing! I loved it! Please write more, you’re good at it :D
Date: 01/11/09 09:53 am Title: Chapter 1
...*brain is a puddle of goo* ...holy...hell! *fans self* that was...WOW!!!! *waits for brain to start working*....... yeah I don't think my brains coming back for a while, so sorry if this review is ramblely.
This is by far one of the BEST smuts I've read, and I've read my fair share. Its also fics like these that make me wish I had a boyfriend ;)
But great job! You have a talent for smut fics if this is any indication :D and I'm SOOOO adding this to my fav list! Can't wait to read more from you. *goes to read again with brain only half there*...*drool*
Date: 01/10/09 08:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
Gawd, this is HOTTT !!
I loved it!
*is speechless*
*adds to favs*
Author's Response: Thank You! This was a tester because I have another story that I've made the readers wait oh....30 chapters for Bill and the girl to get together and I didn't know if I was nervous about writing the scene. I mean the pressure sucks. So thank you so much for reviewing! I feel much better about it now. You Rock!
Date: 01/08/09 10:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
0.0 I......Love this story! This may make me sound like a pervert but i haven't read any good smuts in a while. This story however was different!
Author's Response: THANK YOU! I didn't know if I could do it. You're reading Your Dream or mine... so you know that I've made everyone wait forever for Charity and Bill to finally go to it... I just want to make sure I'm up to the task. Thank you so much hunny. I really value your opinion.
Date: 01/08/09 08:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
awwww!! you sgould do a sequel...like the wedding or something...
Author's Response: You really think so? Thank you! It would be really different for a simple smut piece to spawn a whole story. I might just do that.
Date: 01/08/09 08:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
I agree with RockChickSinger. This fic should be punished for being so DAMN HOT! I love it!
Author's Response: I only hope I can do this and MORE for Charity and Bill.
Date: 01/08/09 07:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
AWWWWWW!
Author's Response: Thank you Hun! I appreciate that you shared your reaction.
Date: 01/08/09 07:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was fucking awesome. I need a cold shower now! Way to hot to be legal! 10/10 :))
Author's Response: YES! Just what I wanted to hear from you. In Your Dream or Mine? I've made everyone wait so long for Charity and Bill to go at it.. I am goign to have to move mountains with their scene...LOL. SO I was writing this to see if I thought I could do it. THANK YOU SO MUCH! I'm glad you liked it.
Date: 01/08/09 07:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
I am not a fan of het smut, but this was funny. It's not your writing nor your style, it's me and my weird sense of humor. XD This was interesting though, I LOVED The mistress part! It's like when you parents are scolding you and you just say 'yes sir. yes ma'am' XD Just automatically saying it without really listening to it! XD The very last line was cute, but where Tom was screaming "mine!" I laughed my head off! It just reminded me of a little kid being all protective of his favorite toy! ^^ It was very entertaining and well written. Pretty good for your first one, I'll tell you its WAY better than any smut I could write. ^^v
Author's Response: Thank you so much! This was mostly a test to see if I could do it.. I have another story that eventually is going to end up in the bedroom, but I've made the readers go so long that It's going to HAVE to be awesome... so I had to see if I could do it.
Date: 01/08/09 07:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh my god, that was awesome. Great for a first smut atempt.
Author's Response: Thank you! I was nervous. I know that for my other story I'm going to have to write a very HOT scene to make upi for the fact that I've made my fans wait for 30= chapters for them to finally do the deed, so I was just trying to see if I was up to it.