Date: 01/09/09 07:50 am Title: 2: I missed you
:O
Oooooh, this was so icredibly cute, so sweet, just perfect! :'D
I love all the dialogues this time, they were just too touching, :)
And I liked the palpable enthusiasm in the previous chapter, when he was about to be home, and I like the romantic quietness of this new one, and most of all, I like how these two wonderful chapters are put together in the same story, :D. They just suit one another, :D
I truly loved this! (L)
Author's Response: Oh me god! That is so sweet of you! I'm seriously so glad that you liked it! I'm so glad that you did reviewed! Though you had forgotten it! But you hadn't! Lol, thank you soooo much sweetie!
Date: 01/08/09 07:46 pm Title: 2: I missed you
The ending was really cute and the first part was good too. I wasn't nutty about the dialogue, it felt fake, and it didn't flow w/ the rest of the peice. But it was good over all.
Author's Response: Awww thank you so much... Sorry... lol thanks <3
Date: 01/08/09 07:00 pm Title: 1: I'm coming back home
This was so poetic. I thought it was beautiful. There was something really cute, sweet, and sad about it that just really grabbed me!
Author's Response: Awww thank you so much! I'm so glad that you liked it! Lol, thanks for reviewing!
Date: 01/08/09 05:19 pm Title: 1: I'm coming back home
awwe that was so fucking good, i love it so much!!!!!!!
you did an amazing job here!!
at first i thought tomi wasn't gonna be there but then there he was!!!!that was so cute=DDD
*huggles*
Author's Response: Awww thank you so much! I'm so glad that you liked it! rnI was going to make him... not come there... lol, glad I did anyway;D Thank you so much sweetie! *cuddles you*
Date: 01/08/09 05:13 pm Title: 2: I missed you
awwwwwwwwww CIGI, this was so FUCKING cute. that's it, I'm in love with you, and you're having my twincest babies xDDDD
Author's Response: Awwww thank you so much Shelly-Belly! Lol, I accept;D lol. Thank you sooo fucking much Shelly girl, this means a lot to me!
Date: 01/07/09 01:15 pm Title: 1: I'm coming back home
ARGH!!!
:D
:'D
Dude, this was absolutely fantastic! I love it... and... I can't even say why! I just loved the dialogues absence (not that I dislike dialogues, indeed, it's just that this absence really suited the story!), I loved how Bill pays attention on details, like Tom's pasta, and Gordon's music, and their cat, I mean... lovely, XD. More than lovely.
I think I can say it was lovely yet very, very powerful. I fucking liked it. :D
*adds to favorites (so I know when you'll update next)*
Just... lovely, XD. Kiss kiss.
Author's Response: Awww, you always make me smile and you've reviewed to my stories! You are very sweet. I'm so glad that you liked it that much! Thank you isn't enough for this sweet review! I think I have to go through the next chappie, so i know you will like it(hopes) Thank you so much sweetie!rnrn*blows kiss*