Date: 01/09/09 02:41 am Title: Pieces
I want to rip David to shreds! Bill doesn't deserve any of this! It's lyke Bill doesn't have a choice. And his breakdown was awful. ;_;
Author's Response: -hands tissues- -sniffles- i feel just awful for doing this to poor billa...-sighs- but at least i'm letting him have his tomi! ^_^ danke for the review! n holy cow, the chapter i just posted went thro like immediately! 0_0
Date: 01/09/09 02:32 am Title: Party Up
Everytime you mention David, I start grinding my teeth. Bill gotta get away, but I doubt it with David owning him...
Author's Response: oh, hunni, don't grind ur teeth, that's bad for you...chuck a pencil at someone...that's what i do! ^_^ thnx 4 the review n i'm about 2 post again...man i'm on fire 2nite..er, this morning...gah! i need sleep!
Date: 01/09/09 02:10 am Title: Falls on Me
plz update soon....thx..luvz u
Author's Response: aw thanks hunni! luv u 2! n i might update ONE more time b4 i go 2 bed...whoa, a lot of updates in one day
Date: 01/09/09 02:04 am Title: Falls on Me
Aw man... poor Bill. I'm glad they both love each other. Post soon. I want to know what's going to happen next.
Author's Response: :D thanks so much for the review! i'll post soon...possibly once more before i go to bed!
Date: 01/09/09 01:56 am Title: Falls on Me
hope bill can make the show so he can get the contract for his clothing line then he could get out of david's claws.
glad that tom's got through little of bill's armor he puts up maybe little more trusting in bill believing that tom is their for him no matter what he'll tell him about the sexual abuse david subjectifies him to in the future chaps. *hint*
then david go to jail for underage child prostitution.
Author's Response: :D thanks for the review hunni! n it's long! i luv long reviews! ^_^ n as 4 ur luvly hint there @ the end...i'm still trying to decide what i want 4 david @ the end...bcuz idk if i want to do a DUN DUN DUN sequel! or not...lol...some input on this dilemma would be nice -hint, hint, nudge, nudge- ^_^
Date: 01/09/09 01:36 am Title: Pieces
so I hate david for prostituting bill out to the highest bidder.
bill has emotional problems because of the way his body is used.
hopefully he'll confined in tom about what's really happens in the industry to get ahead
Author's Response: whoa, bam! u just threw that right out there didn't you? ^_^ thnx 4 reviewing...n i'll have another chapter out soon!
Date: 01/09/09 01:26 am Title: Falls on Me
i hope that bill gets to do the show, and get out of david's grasp! im glad him and tom is together. update more when you can!
Author's Response: only time will tell what'll happen...:D i'm glad you like it, i'll update soon!
Date: 01/09/09 01:24 am Title: Falls on Me
........ :'D They are soo cute ...
this is amazing
Author's Response: :D thanks so much hunny!!!
Date: 01/09/09 01:14 am Title: Falls on Me
Hopefully the abuse will shed some light soon, and I'm assuming Bill is being sexually assaulted/used....?
Author's Response: You'll find out more in the next chapter promise!!!! :D
Date: 01/09/09 01:04 am Title: Falls on Me
Goody. Now Bill passes out cause he's overworked and malnourished. I agree with the letting him rest, but I hope they let him do the run-way since it seems so important to him. However I do wonder why it's so important.
Great chapter!
Author's Response: :D thanks so much for the review! Bill will explain a bit in the next chapter why it's so important...though not completely...ah, the crypic riddles! don't u luv them?? npoodle, thnx again 4 the review!
Date: 01/09/09 12:55 am Title: Falls on Me
Jesus this is getting intense but SOOOOO amazing. I have to admit, I was hesitant, at first, about reading this story because I thought it would be cliched and overdramatic but your work here is phenomenal. The characters are very real and the scenario is highly believable. Great job!
Author's Response: thank you sooooooo much. it means a lot to me to hear this. it made me smile bunches and bunches! ^_^ -huge big plate of cookies handed your way-
Date: 01/09/09 12:26 am Title: Pieces
:'(
O my god Im crying! Please give me more.
I can't finde anything in your story that i don't like so please give me more.A new favorite of mine :)
Author's Response: awww...thanks so much hunni! i'm sorry i made you cry -hands tissues- -hands cookies- i'm glad you like it though!
Date: 01/09/09 12:24 am Title: Pieces
I bet his breakdown had something to do with that Caleb guy! But he didn't seem to be gone that long. I don't know. I hope Bill will be alright.
Author's Response: :( poor billa...rnrni've just posted the next chappie, but idt it's been accepted...yet
Date: 01/09/09 12:08 am Title: Pieces
i hate david! poor billa! update soone again
Author's Response: i'm getting ready to update right NOW! ^_^
Date: 01/09/09 12:03 am Title: Pieces
aww Tom is so sweet to Bill!!! loooooove thiiiiis :)
Author's Response: ^_^ danke hunni! i'm glad you like it!
Date: 01/08/09 11:51 pm Title: Pieces
so yep, it official, I'm gonna kill David. I have my plane ticket to Germany ready xD....good chapter. His breakdown was intense, I hate caleb, and he's next on my hitlist AND AND i love that Tom helped him through the breakdown
Author's Response: :D thanks so much hunni!! when i had anony read it she hid under my desk o_O she then told me she was scared bill was gonna throw something at tom...lol there'll be more soon!
Date: 01/08/09 11:49 pm Title: Pieces
Aw poor Bill. I think i know what's going on but i'm going to wait. Update soon
Author's Response: ^_^ i'm getting ready to post the next chapter...just waiting for a few more reviews first! ^_^
Date: 01/08/09 11:47 pm Title: Pieces
ouuuhh.. god, this is so fuckin awesome x)...
This could sound awful, but I love this kind of stories... hell life, nobody knowing, the other one finds out and oh-so-fuckin-good... but of course, it has to be a happy ending... yours will be, right? ¬¬..
i hope so x)....
well... I was expecting the time you would update another chapi...
I want Tom to find out what's wrong with Bill... or his mom!! o.o... she will be so uh.. dunno the word... but she will feel sick as hell, y'know...
living the way they do coz of Bill, believing the industry is a honest one and that David want the best for his son.. she will de destroyed.. if she ever finds out...
well. that's it...dunno what else to say.. x)
Author's Response: i'm so glad you like this story! and thanks for the amazing long review! it really made my day! -hands big plate of cookies- ^_^ there'll be more soon!
Date: 01/08/09 11:25 pm Title: Pieces
Awww... poor thing... I really want to know what's going on in his head... kudos for the fast updates... I love you and I love this.. keep it up! *much love*
Author's Response: aw thanks so much!!! there'll be more soon -much love back- ^_^
Date: 01/08/09 11:20 pm Title: Pieces
T.T ... whens the next update?? x,x i love this like there is no tomorrow
Author's Response: :D aw thanks so much hunni! there'll be another update soon!!!!