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Reviewer: AdventPhantom Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/10/09 03:20 am Title: It Only Hurts When I'm Breathing

Oh Em Gee, Bill's gone off the deep end! :O I'm starting to get scared... *cowers in fear* Continue cuz this story is awesome and, of course, you're an awesome author!

Author's Response: :D thanks so much hunni! i'm glad you like it...n maybe billa isn't as far gone as u think he is ;D

Reviewer: AdventPhantom Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/10/09 03:11 am Title: You and Me

And now Bill's having new nightmares?! David better not be behind this! I already want him eliminated LOL! I love this story so much! Even if you put an evil cliffie at the end LOL!

Author's Response: i'm glad you like it hunni!!! i'm finally done posting for the nite, i feel a lot better, i can breathe again n get decent sleep!

Reviewer: AdventPhantom Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/10/09 02:52 am Title: In Die Nacht

Yea, I kinda thought Tom would freak LOL! But he didn't, so all is good! Isn't it?

Author's Response: :D yea, tomi didn't freak!!! yay for billa!

Reviewer: harajuku bill Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/10/09 02:32 am Title: It Only Hurts When I'm Breathing

Oh mein gott...stupid, stupid, STUPID TOMI! well, I can't blame him all the way, but. Why didn't he just go home and wait for Bill there!? Ghaaa! I hope Bill's going to be okay. OH NO! He's not gonna try and kill himself again, is he?! HE BETTER NOT!!!!!!!

Author's Response: no, tomi can't be completely blamed...n i'll have more soon, it's almost ready!

Reviewer: BabyBird89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/10/09 02:28 am Title: Gives You Hell

I really love your story and I think that you are a very talented writer. With this chapter I can't help but feel like Kimmy is placing to much blame on Tom. I mean it kinda sucks for Bill but it's like had he kept his promise and actually been at the talent show the whole girl kissing Tom thing would have never happened. Update Soon Please!!!!

Author's Response: thanks so much...and in kimmy's defence, she doesn't KNOW tom's side of the story, just Bill's. n i'm working hard on the update right now!

Reviewer: leahq Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/10/09 02:24 am Title: It Only Hurts When I'm Breathing

*gasp* OH NO! He's gona hurt himself again! no no no no no.... ooh god... you have to update soon and get me out of this suspense! It's KILLING me!!! EEEE!

Author's Response: i'm fixing up the next chapter right now!!! i've got to post it b4 i go 2 bed or it'll kill ME!!!! ^_^

Reviewer: mon1652 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/10/09 02:19 am Title: You and Me

I don't think your evil just creative.
well I think I could see saki as a grizzly bear.
I think andreas has something to do with the bad vibes I forgot how much he likes being mean to poor bill or maybe david's going to running his new contract poor bill does he every get a break guess not or it be a boring story plot.
I forgot about the talent show is tom going to write a song for bill to sing with him that would be cute.

Author's Response: aw well thanks hunni! saki = grizzly bear GRRRR!!! okay, maybe i do need sleep like now...but i can't sleep, n no i haven't had a caffeine patch...yes, i have watched "Meet the Robinsons" one too many times! ^_^ i luv that movie...n uh, idr what else i was gonna say! but thanks for the review, lots of hugs!

Reviewer: parallelheartz Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/10/09 02:12 am Title: It Only Hurts When I'm Breathing

scheisse.......mother fucking scheisse....i still don't hate you...i've written worst plot twists xDD TRUST ME i liked it, and i really do hope that everything goes alright. ^_^

Author's Response: whew...at least u don't hate me! anony still does i'm glad u liked it though! there'll b more soon! maybe not until later tomorrow night...or tonight, depending on how you look at it...schisse...i've got to get up early...n it's 1:18 am n i can't sleep!

Reviewer: faerylxjae89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/10/09 02:12 am Title: It Only Hurts When I'm Breathing

I really dont know what to say... so i wont say what feel cuz I cant explain so next update be really really GOOOOOD!!!

Author's Response: well, at least you tried! i give you major hugs and cookies for just leaving a review! -hands over cookies- -hugs tightly- XD

Reviewer: Yuri Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/10/09 02:07 am Title: It Only Hurts When I'm Breathing

Post NOW!!! I need more... okay now i sound like a junkie that in need of their next hit...lol. You see what your fic does to me.

Author's Response: if i get this chapter perfect i'll post it before i go to bed...if not, it might not be until late tomorrow until i can post again

Reviewer: mon1652 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/10/09 01:58 am Title: In Die Nacht

I knew tom loved bill so much he would understand I just thought he be more verbal about his hatred towards david.
nice to see that tom wants to help bill and I agree with him I don't think bill will fully recover from all his trauma.

Author's Response: i've always pictured tom as not being someone too good with words, so i wanted it to be that he couldn't explain his hatred enough so he just didn't...

Reviewer: harajuku bill Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/10/09 01:51 am Title: You and Me

Tom damn well better not hurt Bill! The whole part with Saki being a grizzly made me giggle!

Author's Response: awww yay! i'm glad someone besides me got giggles out of that line! i'm getting ready to post the next chapter now!!! so it'll be ready in a few minutes...hopefully it gets sent straight through again! ^_^

Reviewer: parallelheartz Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/10/09 01:35 am Title: You and Me

lol. you're not evil. you just have awesome plot lines xDD and they really are adorable lol. them making out was cute, i was like YESSSSSSSSS sex xD and and and....protective simone is always good. i just want Bill to tell her what happened so she can kick David's ass xD

Author's Response: o trust me, u'll think i'm evil after the next chapter...anony wants to kill me rite now -tries 2 hide from the death glare- :D i'm glad you liked that...i never like going into too much detail in sex scenes, rather leave that to the reader's imagination ;D n protective simone will rear her head in an upcoming chapter

Reviewer: faerylxjae89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/10/09 01:32 am Title: You and Me

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Anyways I love this .... I have feeling its DAVID. xc

Tom  is like amazing, I want someone like this TOM my gawd I T,T 



Author's Response: tomi is amazing here, isn't he? thnx 4 the review...i'll update at least ONCE more b4 i get off for the night...XD

Reviewer: yorutya Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/10/09 01:28 am Title: You and Me

omg plz update soon.i luvz u soso much hehe=]

Author's Response: -hugs- i'll update soon i've almost got the next chapter fixed 2 perfection!

Reviewer: Yuri Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/10/09 01:26 am Title: You and Me

What?? You can't stop there... i need more... now... please. *pleading on my knees... i don't do that often so you should pity me.*

Author's Response: awww....sorry hunni...i don't have the next chapter completely ready yet...but i WILL post it before i go to bed...maybe two more...depends on how much i write...n when i get tired!

Reviewer: parallelheartz Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/10/09 01:18 am Title: In Die Nacht

lol. i loved the confession and tom's reaction AND AND AND now they just need to have make up sex to make me happy and things even better xDDDDDDDDDDD

Author's Response: :D glad you liked it hunni! n guess what, i just posted the next chapter! it's up! ^_^

Reviewer: yorutya Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/10/09 12:50 am Title: In Die Nacht

omg plz update soon...thx..i luvz u=]

Author's Response: :D i'll update at least ONCE more b4 i go 2 bed...maybe 2x more...as always, i luv u 2! ^_^ thnx 4 the review hunni!

Reviewer: harajuku bill Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/10/09 12:15 am Title: In Die Nacht

Awww...Poor Billa. *Sniffles* I'm really glad Tom doesn't hate him too! And Kimmy is totally right about the whole trust thing. Am I sensing some cuddling coming up? ^^)

Author's Response: :D thnx 4 the review hunni! isn't kimmy smart? she's based off/named after my bff kimmy! ^_^ n cuddling is a definite possibility! XD

Reviewer: Iserith Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/10/09 12:11 am Title: In Die Nacht

awww... finally told him!!! x3

i really think that if Tom reacted bad, there'd be no way Bill could handle that... now, now... they're all alone at home 1313... though i dunno there could happen somethin, the posibility still is there...

uhmm.. you are so mean... you told me you were going to update today again.. and i was checkin over and over again, but you still wouldn't have upload de 12th chapi T.T... and then I was out and when i came back.. still nothin!. thought you weren't going to do it u.ú...

but here it is!!- justaas awesome as always-- fuckin amazing x3

well, that's it...

oh, a questio.. in you reply to my last rr-- you said somethin that i just couldn't get... i mean.. wtf is bff? o.o.. ja, so I'll keep getting wide my vocabulary x)

pretty awesome x3

Author's Response: thanks for the long review! like always it made me smile! n sorry it took me so long...my mum took over the internet...then my sister...but i've got one more chapter 2 post b4 i go to bed...which won't b 4 a while, it's not completely ready 2 b posted but it's close enough...and bff = best friend forever! ^_^

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