Date: 06/06/15 11:07 am Title: Chapter 8
Don't forget, cos i've noticed it in every chapter, you are = you're. Your = possessive.
Date: 06/06/15 11:03 am Title: Chapter 7
I'm confused, what happened about Tom an those test results? They havent been mentioned since the first chapter..
Date: 04/19/10 06:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! wait there is no major charactor warning , is there still hope that Tom's alive.
Author's Response: Hmm, I didn't think about that. I came up with that chapter just today, that seems like a good twist though. If I end up keeping him, ill give you credit forsure:]
Date: 12/17/09 11:56 am Title: Chapter 13
I finally found this back! xD I still love it all :D I really hope you continue soon!!!!!!!
xx Chi ^^
Date: 05/03/09 06:00 am Title: Chapter 13
OH FUCK! I was soooo into this story when BOOM! You haven't updated yet... This story is really good you know? PLEASE UPDATE SOON BEFORE I COMMIT SUICIDE!!
Date: 04/14/09 10:05 am Title: Chapter 13
YAY!!! After so long!! More soon?
Date: 04/13/09 08:51 pm Title: Chapter 13
no tom!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! plz make it!!!!! bill and the show needs u!!!!!! im sad now :(. plz update!!!! i hate good cliffhangers.
Date: 04/13/09 06:55 pm Title: Chapter 13
oh mein gott.... DON'T YOU DARE MAKE TOMI DIE!
Date: 04/09/09 09:04 pm Title: Chapter 12
LLLOOOOVVVEEE it lol, hm.. it needs more tom drama. like a life death thing and the chances of living are like lower cuz of the HIV or like he colapses... idk but its good lol update pllllz
Author's Response: omg i was ttly gonna do a dramatic tom chapter tonight anyways so im glad u said that ^_^
Date: 03/25/09 01:43 am Title: Chapter 12
WOW wow wow WOW......I love it!!!! Its an awesome story and I can't wait to read more!!!
Date: 03/04/09 10:16 am Title: Chapter 12
update!
don't take too long or i might die =O
Date: 02/26/09 07:10 pm Title: Chapter 12
OMG KELLY. I love this story! *-* It just keeps getting better! I can't wait for you to update. And lol @ you using the street Schoenherr in here. XD
Date: 02/24/09 11:28 pm Title: Chapter 12
You shouldn't be angry that others draw inspiration from your idea unless they're directly quoting or something.
I'd be honored if somebody was inspired by something I wrote.
Date: 02/24/09 07:39 pm Title: Chapter 12
poor george :(. i guess he just has to move on. thanks for a great chappy!!! :D.
Date: 02/24/09 07:16 pm Title: Chapter 12
oh goodness.... PLEASE UPDATE!
Date: 02/24/09 06:56 pm Title: Chapter 12
wowness
I want more.
Date: 02/24/09 03:58 pm Title: Chapter 12
ty for uploading moree im loving itt xxx
Date: 02/24/09 03:08 pm Title: Chapter 12
AW! The memory was so sad! But I'm glad you updated!!!! Short but good! update again please!
Date: 02/24/09 03:07 pm Title: Chapter 12
Awww little Bill was cute! This was a nice chapter
but one thing though. You wrote "Once, she told me one day I’ll see her again. And my Daddy and Oma too!" Shouldn't you write Granny or grandma instead. I understood what it means but I don't know if others will seeing this is a English site and people from everywhere visit this.
And I have read a couple of other dance-stories. Maybe one or two something but it happens often that when someone comes up with something quite new other people take inspiration from it to write their own stories