Date: 01/07/09 04:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
Thank you, it was a yahoo address in there, I've changed it to the gmail one. The issue was just about capitalizing in your speech tags, like: “Good Morning Mr. Kaulitz,” The driver said, taking Bill’s bags and placing them in the trunk. Since there is a comma at the end of his speaking, there is no need for it to be The driver, it's just the driver. :)
Author's Response: ohh I didn't know that. I'm terrible at grammar, I usualy leave it up to my friend to check for mistakes, thanks for pointing it out=]
Date: 01/07/09 04:42 pm Title: Chapter 5
Hello, I tried to contact you regarding some small issues with your story, only the email was bounced back to me saying that your email account has been disabled or discontinued. It's important to have a valid email on the site for admins to contact you with, because if we continuously try to get hold of you about something and can't, your account may get locked.
Author's Response: It did? I'm sorry I didn't know I had registered under a different email, my current email is KikiKaulitz@gmail.com
Date: 01/07/09 11:52 am Title: Chapter 4
update it more soon!
Date: 01/07/09 09:16 am Title: Chapter 4
What happened? D:
You like... lost all your chapters O_ø
Author's Response: D= i knowww i deleted the whole story by mistake so i have to re-post everyyythinggg
Date: 01/06/09 11:50 pm Title: Chapter 4
Haha I never review and I've just realized how much that must suck ^^;; I write and I hate not getting reviews...
anyway, I didn't get the chance to read this story the first time it was posted, but I'm happy to get to read it now and I really like it so far and I hope that you continue to update even though it must be horrible after losing it once...
but I really liked this chapter and I can't wait to see how all of this ends up ^^
I'll be looking for the next update!
Date: 01/06/09 11:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
i really like this! it's really good! keep it coming!! =]
Date: 01/06/09 09:34 pm Title: Chapter 4
Oh god, that has got to suck. *hug*
So, I knew I HAD to let you know just how much I love this story! I'm rereading the whole thing as you post them, and I'll definitely still be around, no matter how long re-uploading them takes. This is a wonderful story, beautifully written, and more than deserves to be out here in the interwebs for everyone else to cherish, so don't give up! Luff!
-Ami
Date: 01/06/09 09:09 pm Title: Chapter 4
this is amazing story
Date: 01/06/09 08:39 pm Title: Chapter 3
heehee tomi sexy now...
*giggles*
Date: 01/06/09 08:39 pm Title: Chapter 2
He most deff. will!! *hugs you*
Date: 01/06/09 07:17 pm Title: Chapter 2
love it love it love it!!!!
Date: 01/06/09 07:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
oh my gosh I am SO SORRY!!!!!! can't u update all the chapters though?
UPDATE SOON I LOVE THIS STORY!
Author's Response: no i can only update one at a time D=rnthank you so much for the review though =D
Date: 01/06/09 07:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow, (that is a good wow)
Author's Response: thank you very much=]
Date: 01/06/09 06:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
hey i'm sowi bout that...i would hate myselfmayb slit my wrists ....so i'm prayin ure nt as crazy as me
did u save the story??? i hope u did bt if u didnt its ok cause i've been saving it...i like the story so much to the point where i just had to have it
u really have a way with plots...if u need help then just hit me up
my email address is amanda4life_getoverit@hotmail.com
i'll send it if its not saved and i'll be happy to help u :DDD gud luck
Author's Response: thank you so much!rni will definitly email u if i get stuck on the upcoming chapters!!
Date: 01/06/09 06:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
Omg! it will be alright. sometimes things happen. i love this story so much! just maybe repost them again. i wouldnt mine reading them over again. i cant wait to find out what happens, when georg get to see bill again for the first time, and when Tom and Bill get to the college..
Author's Response: thank you! im going to try and get everything reposted tonight
Date: 01/06/09 06:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
aaawww. i so sorry! i'll reread everything too because i really like this story! my internet crapped out and i was getting mad, and thought thats what happened. but this is much worse!
Author's Response: aw thank you! i didn't even realize i deleted it untill like 5 minutes after i did it n like it was just tunnle vision D=!rn(im a bit dramatic lol)
Date: 01/06/09 06:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
=[ That sucks! But if it makes you feel any better Ill reread everything you put up.
Author's Response: aw thank you =DD
Date: 01/06/09 06:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
Holy crap!
*holds you*