Date: 09/11/18 09:07 am Title: Why All The Problems?
please update soon
Date: 02/07/13 12:35 pm Title: Chapter 8
Please update!!! Its been 4 fucking years!! dont abandon this story, im hooked! please just finish it, lissa? for a fan??
Date: 09/25/11 11:35 am Title: Chapter 8
this is a really good story!!
i cant wait tell u update it!!
Date: 01/02/11 05:13 pm Title: Chapter 8
Aww poor Billa! Please update soon
Date: 03/25/10 04:22 pm Title: Save On Kill Another
Where's that knife come for???
Date: 03/25/10 04:09 pm Title: The Secret Cave
NOOOO!!!C'mon Tom you're stronger than that!!
Date: 03/25/10 03:47 pm Title: Damn It All To Hell
That's what happened when you put two instable person together.
Date: 02/24/10 12:01 am Title: Chapter 8
awesome fic so far................will this ever have an ending????
Date: 12/06/09 12:08 am Title: Chapter 8
are we allowed to know what happens next? i really got into all of these stories today and read all of them, including the prequel! i hope you'll update! :)
Date: 10/09/09 04:47 am Title: Chapter 8
write mooore!!! thats a fucking mean cliffy!!! plzz plz write more!!
Date: 07/20/09 02:48 pm Title: Chapter 8
You need to finish this!!! I gotta know what happens!!!
Date: 05/16/09 04:05 am Title: Chapter 8
mohr bitte lol this is awesum story
Author's Response: Thank you sorry i havnt updated in so long ive been very busy! Ill update soon! Promise!
Date: 03/14/09 09:43 am Title: Save On Kill Another
HE CANT DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NO!!! PLEASE YOU CANT MAKE HIM DIE! MAKE ELAINA DIE!!! :P
Author's Response: Youll have to wait and see! Thanks for the review!
Date: 03/14/09 03:26 am Title: Save On Kill Another
No I don’t know what to say to this chapter. First I was like yes Tom got saved or stopped by Bill like I wanted. But then you make a beautiful confession on both parts. Both boys professing their undying love and everything seem like it was going to be wonderful. Then when they were going to get rid of Elaina all hell breaks lose. I couldn’t believe my eye’s as I was reading. She took a cheap shot and stabbed Bill. I didn’t see this coming and I was the best unpredictable move in the chapter. I hope that this isn’t the character death already. How can you do this argh right when everything was going so well. She totally needs to die she never takes rejection too well. Oh the part about the soul mates and wanting to live for each other and die for each other was phenomenal because I painted a beautiful picture of a happy future for them but just to be taken away by your brilliance of drama. So looking forward to see where this goes and what will happen to Elaina and Bill.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! This is the type of response i was looking for!
Date: 03/13/09 06:40 pm Title: Why All The Problems?
OMG, that fuckin' bitch!
NOO! Don't let him die! Please..
Author's Response: Im so sorry you will just have to find out what happens!!!
Date: 03/12/09 05:34 am Title: The Secret Cave
......I know you're not going to let this happen.....so Bill is going to find him or Tom has better get whacked in the head.
Author's Response: I dont know what to tell you. Youll just have to wait and read the chapters to come. Thanx for the review!
Date: 03/08/09 03:52 pm Title: The Secret Cave
wow reading this chapter changed my mind about the character's death.
I really loath elaina. she's rude and selfish bitch. her true colors come out as she feels threaten or not in control.
I felt so sad for tom's dilemma...he tries to do not hurt anyone's feelings and also disregards he's own happiness just to please people. I just want everything to go great for him but I doubt it will.
poor bill trying to recindle their relationship just to find out that he has someone else and getting married to her. all the heartbreak going on in this chapter.
the secret cave was great. I love how tom's reminiscent of the past. and the things they did in the cave was somethings happy to add to this sad chapter and sequel. the writing on the wall was wonderful it created a sanitary for their love and feelings. tom's last words were really important information I thought. it showed that tom didn't want to live anymore. he was devestated over the news about bill's problems and bein institutionalize. this makes me love your tom figure more he has depth and a story to tell.
wow hope it doesn't end soon and he doesn't go through with it or bill comes and stops him.
Author's Response: I absolutely loved your review! You really gave me some insight into what my readers are thinking and i thank you for that. I acctually dont think that you will be to unhappy with the chapters to come and dont worry...it probably wont end soon! :]
Date: 03/07/09 11:55 am Title: The Secret Cave
noooooo!!!! he cant do it!!! he most leave elaina and get together with bill again, not kill himself!!?!?!?
Date: 03/07/09 10:49 am Title: The Secret Cave
no!!!!!!no!!!no!!!!no!!!!no!!!!!no!!!!no!!!!!!no!!!!! Don't do it......PLEASE!!!!!!!
Date: 02/15/09 03:18 am Title: Interesting Relations
oh you should get more review's I'm sorry that your story is unappreciated.
well now I'm confussed but in a good way. I don't seem to know how this is going to plan out. tom's back and forth between bill and elaina. then trying to keep both wonder why there's a character's death.
well want to see what tom tells bill. what will happen when elaina comes. so looking forward to next chapter to see what tom's doing.