Date: 04/25/21 08:32 am Title: The day that changed the ritual
this was a really good story!!
Date: 01/08/10 02:06 pm Title: The day that changed the ritual
Awww. the ending to this really made me smile :) this was truly amazing
Author's Response: Aaaw, thank you!!
xx Chi ^^
Date: 03/01/09 10:28 pm Title: The day that changed the ritual
Okay yeah. This is extremely cute and very kinky! You are a very well and entertaining writer. You got me all blushing and awkward during the kink scene LOL!. but thats how I am. ANYWAY! I love it! one of my favorite one-shots!
Author's Response: Thank you! :) rnxx Chi ^^
Date: 01/06/09 12:05 am Title: The day that changed the ritual
This has potentil but it's kinda choppy. No offence. The idea is cute but thing don't line up like I don't know who Tom would come out to if he's been living on the street for a year, or how people would know if he came out before that and then his parents just ditched him. Or how they got away w/ ditching him... get the picture? Or the speed of their relationship. I think you were going for true love at first sight but it felt kind akward.
Am I being mean? Sorry. Beta's are amazing btw. lol.
Author's Response: It's okay :) I have to thank you, for giving me advice xD Yeah, I have a beta, but this was originaly with other characters etc. so I guess that's why. And I have to agree, I'm not a great writer or anything and English isn't my native language xD You're not mean, just honest ^^rnxx Chi
Date: 01/05/09 09:31 pm Title: The day that changed the ritual
it was good, i liked it!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you ^^rnxx Chi
Date: 01/05/09 06:33 pm Title: The day that changed the ritual
it was good I liked it tho it went a little fast for me
Author's Response: Thanks ^^ Well, I wanted to keep it short, since it was for a challenge :)rnxx Chi ^^