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Reviewer: Burntsienna Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/14/10 10:53 pm Title: Chapter 1

Awww I love this!

Reviewer: icynow Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/18/09 02:12 am Title: Chapter 1

there is an Americanism you use that I couldnt find the second time through. It was three words the middle word was 'a' and should have been 'of'. It was near the beginning.

Reviewer: Beisl Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/06/09 10:01 am Title: Chapter 1

so sweet...
I love it:)

Reviewer: Chi Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/05/09 05:41 pm Title: Chapter 1

Great story :) I loved it ^^ Bill is superly cute ^^ And David too :)
xx Chi ^^

Reviewer: Nessax Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/05/09 05:17 pm Title: Chapter 1

I like how sweet David is. Bill is pretty aware of what's going on, he wants David, and David is being responsible yet more than a manager. Amazing! A little sweet one-shot for a better day :)

Reviewer: MysticalMayhem Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/05/09 04:06 pm Title: Chapter 1

There's not enough sweet Bill/Jost fics on around, and this one is beautiful. I remember writing half of one once but never finishing it. Something about the way you wrote this is very intriguing. I loved it. Great job. :)

Reviewer: Steinsgrrl Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/05/09 04:04 pm Title: Chapter 1

Beautiful, as always. Your phrasing is always magical to me.

Reviewer: bmccray Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/05/09 03:53 pm Title: Chapter 1

i liked this.....there isnt alot of sweet jost/bill fics...good job

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