Date: 01/08/09 11:45 am Title: Chapter 6/9
ahahaha sneaky little gustav XD
Author's Response: XD
Date: 01/08/09 08:52 am Title: Chapter 6/9
LOL!!! I LOVE IT!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 01/08/09 08:28 am Title: Chapter 6/9
Oh, I love them too :P
But jeez, Bill, you should've played a little more! XD
And damn Gustav è.é
Can't wait for more! Why does it have to last just three chapters longer? ç_ç
(and why am I lolling at the number of this chapter? :P)
Author's Response: Thanks! And I hadn't even minded the chapter number before you pointed it out XD
Date: 01/08/09 06:42 am Title: Chapter 6/9
damn.
Author's Response: XD
Date: 01/08/09 06:06 am Title: Chapter 6/9
OH!!! Keep it coming. I like want... no need to know what going to happen next.
Author's Response: Next part in the evening ^^
Date: 01/08/09 05:39 am Title: Chapter 6/9
Hmm, on second thought, this war might just be a close call.
*dirty thoughts* :P
Author's Response: XD who will win this war is the 1 million dollar question ^^
Date: 01/08/09 05:33 am Title: Chapter 5/9
If Bill's declaring war, then Bu is definitely going to lose. :P
Date: 01/08/09 05:12 am Title: Chapter 6/9
i love it too
but i hope that they won't be disturbed anymore when they'll do serious business *nasty grin*
Author's Response: Don't worry about them, they'll be alright XD
Date: 01/08/09 04:50 am Title: Chapter 6/9
BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA. that was fucking perfect. you had me on the edge of my seat cuz it was so fucking sexy and then BOOM Gustav walks in. Scheisse. you little tease xDD
Author's Response: XDDDDD
Gustav is a party pooper, everybody knows that ^^
Date: 01/08/09 03:17 am Title: Chapter 5/9
wahhhhhhhhhhh. loved this chapter. Tom is so silly....Bushido won the battle xDDD oh wow. i woulda just said ignore him xDDD. the battle xDDD oh lordy, this war should be HILARIOUS xD
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 01/07/09 07:10 pm Title: Chapter 5/9
Bushido should be afraid. I likey some teasing!Bill. XD
Author's Response: I like teasing!Bill too ^^
Date: 01/07/09 07:06 pm Title: Chapter 5/9
LOLO
Author's Response: XD
Date: 01/07/09 05:05 pm Title: Chapter 5/9
OMG, I loved this chapter. Your story has got me so addicted.
Author's Response: Thank you! You'll get you next fix tomorrow XD
Date: 01/07/09 04:58 pm Title: Chapter 5/9
Oh this is going to get interesting very quickly! I love the whole idea of the war. And the whole thing with Bill and the finger was very hot!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 01/07/09 04:22 pm Title: Chapter 5/9
Muahahaha...I bet Bushido is ;) I loved it!!! Damn...this story gets shorter and shorter O_O *fuck fuck fuck like rabbits, hahaha!* that be my spontanious burst of pervertness xD I hope you continue soon!!!
xx Chi ^^
Author's Response: Thank you! The next part is for tomorrow!
Date: 01/07/09 04:00 pm Title: Chapter 5/9
Oooooo!!! Things are getting tense... good chapi. Update soon!!!
Author's Response: Thanks! upadate tomorrow!
Date: 01/07/09 03:25 pm Title: Chapter 5/9
ahahah xD
hell yeah! bushido shouldn't only be afraid, he should be friggin shitting his pants by now! =0 bill declairing a sexual war? if that doesn't spell DEFEAT for the other party, i don't know..
but please update soon? i absolutely LOVED this!!! *squeels*
pretty please? (A)(A)(A)(A)
Author's Response: Thank youuu! update is tomorrow!
Date: 01/07/09 01:54 pm Title: Chapter 5/9
:'D
I think I'm gonna love you forever and ever and ever for writing this. It's gorgeous, amazing, lovely, perfect, fantastic, super and so on and so on and so on, XD.
And thanks a lot for making this chapter last a bit more, even though that meant you have to sacrifice the general lenght of the story. But it doesn't matter, this last one was a very nice reading.
Why? God, I truly love Bill. :) He's not exactly like the usual diva (that, let me say, it's my favorite of Bill's attitudes XD), he's more bitchy, XD. Haha Bill declaring war!! I can't even imagine right now who's gonna be the winner, the both have a large amount of victory chances, XD. But still, I hope Bill's gonna lose, don't ask me why, lol.
And I love the twins' relationship. When you said it was just more than brotherly love, I just thought, "Okay, let's see this Billshido", and I think I was a little bit too distracted by the interest for Bushido, that I didn't pay enough attention on Tom, XD. Indeed, I pay too little a bit of attention, that they 'kiss' totally caught me off guard, lol. Really, that was a total surprise. I love their teasing attitude, as I've said 1000 times, but I can't stop talking about it, it's awesome, XD. It's such a nice idea, so original, XD. Very PWP, XD.
And Bushido (L).
Thanks, I said thanks for not making him OOC. It's very difficult to write the ideal Bushido to me (MY ideal Bushido, of course, because maybe someone else prefers a sweet Bushido), but your character does really suit the picture I have of him. So, thumbs up for this, XD. J' aime ta fanfiction, xD. Et bien sure, J'espere que Je vedrais le prochain *update* bien tot... Oh whatever, XD. I mean, can't wait until tomorrow, :)
Kiss kiss.
Author's Response: Thank you a lot for your review. My eyes bulged out when I saw the length of it! I'm really happy you like all the caracters :D
The twin kiss was originally just on the cheek, but I decided to spice things a bit, so yeah, that's what we call "un piou" in French ^^ Nothing too serious, people that aren't together can sometimes kiss this way (especially German people I think. I remember a German guy from a school trip who greeted in this way everybody that was okay with it XD)
And nice try at French, by the way ^^ that was not bad ;-)
Thanks again!
Date: 01/07/09 01:07 pm Title: Chapter 4/9
Who-hoa, Billa.
*wOoot*
Author's Response: Yes, he kind of... slipped ^^
Date: 01/07/09 01:04 pm Title: Chapter 1/9
I love this plot idea!
Author's Response: Thanks!