Date: 01/10/09 04:23 am Title: Chapter 9/9
A very amazing ending to an amazing story! ^^ I really did enjoy this throughout and can't wait to read more from you in the future.
Author's Response: Thank you very much, it means a lots :D
Date: 01/09/09 10:32 pm Title: Chapter 8/9
....*fans self* Oh dear, I totally needed this chapter after such a long day. It made me feel better. Much better. Aw @ only one chapter left. :(
Author's Response: I'm glad I could make your day better! Thanks!
Date: 01/09/09 09:14 pm Title: Chapter 8/9
After that chapter, I'm so adding this to favorites ;)
Author's Response: *_* Thanks!
Date: 01/09/09 05:20 pm Title: Chapter 8/9
This chapter blew my mind. you did a wonderful job, i simply loved it.
Author's Response: Thank you!!!
Date: 01/09/09 05:13 pm Title: Chapter 8/9
Oh mon dieu! c'etait trop chaud! I feel like I need a shower now...
Author's Response: Haha, merci ^^
Date: 01/09/09 01:45 pm Title: Chapter 8/9
Hot bathroom scene!! awww 1 chapter left! I can't wait!
Author's Response: thank you!
Date: 01/09/09 01:26 pm Title: Chapter 4/9
Bill just does most about anything to prove his point, eh? I like it though
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 01/09/09 01:14 pm Title: Chapter 8/9
*pants*
*collapses on the floor*
Ooooh, I'm so glad I mananed to review this chapter before the last one would be updated! I would have reviewed before, but I had a lot to study - even if I have to admit it's pretty much complicated to study when you know a new chapter of such a fiction is up ;) - but still, I'm extremely sorry for the delay.
Ah, one thing first. I just read the response you left for my previous review. Yes, I know Bushido somehow had more control than Bill. What I meant, is that it was Bill who teased him into jumping literally on him XD (what a memory, what a memory!!). So, in the end, Bill's a little teaser, XD. And I love that you said Bushido was heavier and stronger; I don't know why, but I always like when the differences bewteen the two of them pop up. So, sorry if what I previously said wasn't clear, X). (But I couldn't answer just then, at once, because I would literally fulfill this page of comments, XD).
So, about this chapter, I can say I still was like---> 0.0
Haha, I've never reflected too much over the title, but now I know what it probably means, lol. It's... just sweet, as the title says. I wonder if this surrender has already taken place in this chapter, or if I have to wait until ... that, XD. I can't help but wonder who will really surrender. I think more Bill, but maybe both of them. Yeah, that's more probable; they both took a part in the war, so, XD.
I simply loved it. For several reasons, and I want to let you know all of them. XD.
Number one, the shower. OMG, under the running water. I can easily imagine Bill in the shower, all wet, his hair all glued to his neck... *-*. Just way too much wow! XD.
Number two, Bushido's items. Seriously, when I read about them, I didn't know if I had to smile or just keep reading (needless to say I did both) with my mouth half open, and I'm getting too confusey wordy if I think about Bu's tools, XD. I really liked how he decided to fight this part of the war. So sure of himself. Roar.
Number three, Bill's feedback. He is amazed in the beginning, but then he likes. He likes! :D. He kind of... surrenders, XD.
And number four, I love the atmosphere between them after the b**w j*b. It's cute, but more than cute, it's relaxed, they aren't teasing one another for once, they finally took a break, XD, and it was so amazing that they were just staring at each other without repenting, or, I don't know, without saying something like "I knew I could make you do what I want" in Bu's case, or "I'll show you who's the best, you'll pay for it!!!" in Bill's, to save their dignity. I just like the way they accepted each other.
And once again, even if this fiction is not over yet (and I already know how I'm gonna miss it!), I noticed that you were right when you said Bu's not OOC. Phew. Thanks a lot for not making him literally unbelievable. The only nice Bushido's character is the most realistic one. I do like this Bushido, :)
Woah. Can't wait for the last part. :D
Author's Response: First, O_O at the long review!
I don't know why, but I thought your last review was about this chapter (and that's why I said that Bushido was in control), but in fact, you were right for #7, Bill is the one pulling the strings in that one.
About the surrender, don't worry, you'll know when it happens. Even if Bushido comes to Bill in this one, it's more an offensive move than anything else (and it's further proven by his behaviour). Bill is clearly the dominated one there, but he fights back, war is still raging XD
Thank you for all your reviews, they really make me smile :D
Date: 01/09/09 10:51 am Title: Chapter 8/9
HOLY FUCK!! *spazzes*
Can't breathe!!
*convulses*
SOO FUCKING HAWT!!
*orgasm*
Daayyyum. You really know how to write some exceptionally sexy smut. Imm'a definitely have to read this again. :P
Author's Response: =D Thanks!
Date: 01/09/09 10:08 am Title: Chapter 8/9
bwahahahhhhhhhh. just woosh. that was fucking amazing, and we didn't even get to the actual sex part. just wow. I was like O.O "lemme read that part again* *drool* xDDDD You always know how to make my libido happy xD.
Author's Response: Haha XD glad you liked it!
Date: 01/09/09 09:58 am Title: Chapter 8/9
Oh my...
That was... that was... it was FREAKING HOT!!!
I want more, I can't wait!!! Please, update soon! (and more than just one chapter, pretty please with a cherry on top! *puppy eyes*)
Author's Response: Thanks! unfortunately, there's only one chapter left, so I won't be able to update by more than that ^^
Date: 01/09/09 08:52 am Title: Chapter 8/9
Loved it :) FINALLY dirty stuff xD Lolz xP I really hope you continue soon! But only one chap left O_O
xx Chi ^^
Author's Response: Thanks! Yes only one left. But this stoy is supposed to be an OS after all XD
Date: 01/09/09 08:10 am Title: Chapter 8/9
damn! This was good! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 01/09/09 08:08 am Title: Chapter 7/9
0.0
OMG. *-*
That was teasing so far, lol. I had my eyes glued to the screen from... like, the first word to the very last one, XD.
Bill's truly a personality, let me say, XD.
I can remember that in the previous review, I said that no matter how sexy and attractive he is, but he had better remember Bushido's older than him, so Bu has got more experience. Okay, WRONG!! XD Well, not that it's not true, I just mean that Bill can hold Bushido literally by the balls if he wants, XD. I really, really love the power he has over Bushido. It's such amazing to see the younger keeping the older under control (don't ask me why I care that much of their ages, I couldn't answer, *-*).
Not that Bushido was caught off guard this time, never. But he should wake up, Bill's gonna win the war, XD. I definitely know whose side I'm by, now, XD. Bushido's, lol. ****, he's amazing.
And Bill had seriously better to change his purpose - "Perhaps he would give in to Bushido eventually." Perhaps? XD. Let's remove off this "perhaps"!! Perhaps!!! Such a word, it doesn't suit all my plannings, lol. XD.
BUT it suits the whole situation, and Bill's mental projects, XD.
Haha, Tomi and his threesome, XD. I smiled, (L)
Author's Response: Bill definitely has power over Bushido, but in this chapter, Bushido was the one in control. Bill could only play along ^^ But he's got more than one trick up his sleeve, Bushido is far from having seen the last of it *evil grin*
I'm happy you enjoyed this, I hope you'll like the last chapter as well!
Date: 01/09/09 06:54 am Title: Chapter 8/9
HOT is such a lil' word for this
omg i can't believe that they're gonna do it
YAY
please have mercy and post ASAP
Author's Response: Thanks! ^^ I'm happy you liked it and I hope you'll like the next one as well.
Date: 01/09/09 06:43 am Title: Chapter 8/9
Once again, HOLY EFFIN CRAPPP!!! x].
Author's Response: XDDD
Date: 01/09/09 05:41 am Title: Chapter 8/9
Woah... oki Bill finally did it... huh..Good Chapi. Can't wait for the last one.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 01/08/09 11:49 pm Title: Chapter 7/9
God, I love the way they dance around each other. This is the first story that Billshido that I kept reading so far in. O:
Love Love Love.
Author's Response: Thank you, that makes me really proud!
Date: 01/08/09 10:58 pm Title: Chapter 7/9
Truthfully, I wasn't expecting much at the beginning of the fic, but the past few chapters have been insanely *hot* -- you are an evil, evil tease ;)
Author's Response: I'm happy the fic grew on you. Thanks!
Date: 01/08/09 09:57 pm Title: Chapter 7/9
Daayyyum. That's some mental image. :P
The sound of Billa moaning like crazy will probably send Tomi a-running.
Author's Response: Oh yes it definitely would ^^
