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Reviewer: longwayhome Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/06/09 05:10 pm Title: Chapter 3/9

Out of curiosity, why have you broken this down to such incredibly short chapters? I remember this from the secret santa exchange and I sort of assumed you would post it here in two parts like I think you did there as well. As you've split it up now, it just sort of feels very halting and abrupt. Don't mind me though, I'm just passing an opinion. If there's a reason for it you can shut me up right now.

Author's Response: I've considered posting everything in one go but the fic is quite long. That's what I did the last time with "A Penny For Your Thoughts". Even if I had split it in chapters as well, I had posted everything. Someone got surprised that I did it that way then, so I thougt that this time I would let some time pass between the chapters (not long though)... I think some people like to expect the next chapter, to imagine what it will be like, I don't know... So that's what I did this time. There's no specific reason. As for the way I've cut the fic, I made a scene = a chapter. Maybe I should have put several scenes together. Oh well, I've started this way now, I'll finish this way ^^ Next time I'll do differently, maybe.

Reviewer: MysticalMayhem Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/06/09 05:00 pm Title: Chapter 1/9

Bu was awesome. This chapter was great, there's already chemistry between them. And I have to say, I do love a blushing Bill :P This was really, really good, honey. Can't wait for the next. :)

Author's Response: Aaw, thank you, that's sweet. Next chapter tomorrow! (why is you comment on the 1st chapter?)

Reviewer: more_than_dreams Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/06/09 04:59 pm Title: Chapter 3/9

*dies*
moreeeeeeeeeeeee

Author's Response: *resurrect* More tomorrow hon ^^

Reviewer: Chi Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/06/09 04:58 pm Title: Chapter 3/9

Loved the chapter :D I wonder why Bill is always the shy one and blushes ;) Ah well, really really loved Bu in here too xP I hope you continue soony :D *early early early* xD
xx Chi ^^

Author's Response: Don't worry, Bill won't stay shy for long XD

Reviewer: Sara Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/06/09 04:56 pm Title: Chapter 3/9

yay things are starting too well between them

i hope that anis will make the next step quickly *grins*

Author's Response: Aaah, but Anis is a shy guy, deep down XD

Reviewer: harajuku bill Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/06/09 04:41 pm Title: Chapter 2/9

Oh goodness. The twins' antics crack me up! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thank you! I've just poster the next chapie!

Reviewer: parallelheartz Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/06/09 12:48 pm Title: Chapter 2/9

bwahahahaha. i love the twins closeness xDD i wish they were paired, BUT it's col. they're funny as all hell. I can't wait until Bushido comes....all hell is gonna break loose xDD

Author's Response: Thank you! I love the twin's relationship too. They're a pair of little teases ^^

Reviewer: MysticalMayhem Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/06/09 12:07 pm Title: Chapter 1/9

Oooo...I'm so looking forward to the next update. I can't wait for Bu to turn up. It's nice to see the twins in a platonic relationship like this one, it's unusual with the whole teasing thing. I love it. Nice chapter. :)

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

Reviewer: businessofmystery_ Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/06/09 10:20 am Title: Chapter 1/9

I love it!
Really looking forward to the next chapter, I wonder where this is going [:

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: dubblebubble Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/06/09 10:03 am Title: Chapter 2/9

Still awesome. I have a question though, um are the twins kinda a couple here??

Author's Response: Thanks a lot. The twins are not a couple, they're just messing with Georg. They each have affairs with other people : boys for Bill and girls for Tom. They're not fucking each others, just playing.

Reviewer: Beisl Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/06/09 09:56 am Title: Chapter 2/9

can´t wait for Bushidos appearance*_*
and I like that the twins relationship is platonic, but still close

nothing wrong with a short chapter, you´re updating every day after all

Author's Response: Thank you!!!

Reviewer: demonicangel04 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/06/09 09:39 am Title: Chapter 2/9

lol i can't wait for Bu's appearance XD

Georg: Those darn kaulitz Twins! *shakes fist* hahaha

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: donpixe Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/06/09 09:19 am Title: Chapter 2/9

You have no idea how much I love this story already. I mean, goddamn! Please update soon or I'll go beyond crazy. ;] Much luw!

Author's Response: Thank you very much! Next chapter this evening (for me, meaning in a few hours ^^)

Reviewer: himisoko Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/06/09 09:17 am Title: Chapter 2/9

I love totally love that -- shocking, inappropriate, on-the-verge-of-twincest twins who are still actually platonic -- it's different and I can wait to see Bushido's reaction to it ;)

Author's Response: Thanks! I love teasing twins XD

Reviewer: Chi Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/06/09 08:41 am Title: Chapter 2/9

I love this :D I have always thought so, the twins are both sex-additcs xP Lolz xD I hope you continue soon ^^ *aka early in the morning xD*
xx Chi ^^

Author's Response: Thank you very much! Could be even earlier than that ^^

Reviewer: Dylan Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/06/09 07:25 am Title: Chapter 2/9

Ooooooh, :D
I don't think I have ever been more ecstatic to see the update e-mail, :D
I squeaked like a mouse, XD.

By the way. I love this chapter, no matter how short he is (if this can be called short); it was sooo funny, I smiled all the time while reading (it's morning here, and I just woke up and checked my e-mail, this is a very good wish of good morning :D).

I like the twins' relationship/friendship/love, or whatever you want to call it, you warned us, XD. No, it's right, I wouldn't call it twincest, but this teasing attitude of their is something I've never read. :D
Twincest to shock other people... XD.
Sounds good, lol. And I don't agree with Georg when he thought they wouldn't "be able to pull that kind of shit" in front of Bushido, XD. What if Bushido will be another of their victim, lol? Ohhh my, I can't wait until tomorrow!! *-*

And I know in the last response you told me Bushido would appear in the third chapter-another reason why I can't wait, lol.
Seriously, if I happen to think about the next update, I look like this---->
=DDDDDDDDD
Hehe, I'm in love with this story, XD.
Can't wait, can't wait, can't wait!!! :D

Author's Response: Thank you sooo much! You just put a huge grin on my face ^^ This is my first Billshido and I couldn't help myself, I had to put some twiny moments in there. I'm glad you liked their kind of relation! (My next fic is all about this "twincest to shock people" thing by the way, but it's in French, like most of my fics). Seeing this chapter was really short (and yes it can definitly be called short ^^) I think I'll post the 3rd one in the evening. It's 1:45 pm here right now, so I think it will be in the afternoon for you (You're from the US right?) Thanks again for your comment! Küsse

Reviewer: Saol Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/06/09 07:25 am Title: Chapter 2/9

Haha, I like the twins cuddly teasing. I'm intrigued to see where this is going :)

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: more_than_dreams Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/06/09 06:21 am Title: Chapter 2/9

and pleasepleaseplease tell me it will be soon!!!!
Because I am going to Fangurlie you like NO OTHER!!! *dies*

Author's Response: Yes it will be soon XD. This chapter was really really short so I think I'll post a new one in the evening ^^ Thank you so much!

Reviewer: Sara Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/06/09 06:16 am Title: Chapter 2/9

this is quite interesting
so the twins are realy fucking each other?

Author's Response: Thanks. No they're not, they're just fucking with everybody's mind ^^

Reviewer: Yuri Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/06/09 05:47 am Title: Chapter 2/9

HAHAHAH!!! The twin are so funny!!! AH!!! Good chapi. Post as soon as possible

Author's Response: Thanks! Maybe I'll post next chapter before tomorrow. This one was really short.

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