Sometimes, holding out and teasing readers with the idea of sex can be more exhilarating than actually going at it all the way. The rooftop scene seemed a trace out of place for me.

Otherwise, I love where this fic is going. I'm beginning to wonder if either of them will start developing a conscience or if they're even capable of one. You continue to amaze me with your ability to emphasize the extremity of the twins' attachment to each other. I'm also very intrigued by this obsession Bill seems to have with keeping a pet.

Keep the updates coming! You really surprised me this time, Miss Speedy :)

Author's Response: Icemint, I love how you spot the little things, I truly do. Thank you and thank you for your review!

HAHAHAHAHHAAHAHAHAH They're psychos. This is awesome, it's like a movie, you know what I mean? It's freaking kewl.

Author's Response: ROFL... um... lol Thank you, and thank you for your review!

O.o they like it risky don't they..... god
*goes to read it again*
it stays so hot and awesome, I love it, really really love it. The way you portrait the twins is just.... *shakes head*.... of this world! Not to mention the writing skills you have, damn....

'But Bill had a built in defense mechanism; Tom' *nods* that's so true, you can't get it any truer
*squeals* please update soon *pouts extracutely* please?
::huge cookie for a job well done::

Author's Response: Thank you so much Elle_Chan! *takes cookie and bites it greedily* I think I'll have another chapter up tonight!

OMG!! i swear you're killing me with this fic :D it's like so i dunno, amazing!!! amazing!! amazing!!

Author's Response: Wow, thank you and thank you for your review!

Hello, my beautiful online bride. I wanted to commend you on another excellent chapter.

I love your Bill and Tom. They are so wonderfully fucked up that words fail me. Oh who am I kidding? Words never fail me. Bill...the way he switches between deadly creepy and childlike innocence blows my mind. I love the way you described him as an "alabaster angel of death" and Tom is a rougher version..."The same package wrapped two different ways." Excellent descriptions! As soon as I got off from work, I called my BFF, T, so we could chatter on about the new chapter. She was all like: "OMG." when she answered the phone. Completely speechless. LOL!

Georg...please don't get yourself killed. This is what I kept muttering to myself during this chapter. But I'm sure he gets the message now. Bill pressing a knife to his throat all while telling him he would like for him to be his new pet was so disturbing and cool that I think I need to go take a cold shower. *swoons*

Tom IS the baddest motherfucker in the jungle and I'm sure the other men will soon start to realize you don't fuck with him OR Bill. Not if they want to live.

I know we, as rational people, shouldn't be rooting for the twins, but you really can't help it. It's like rooting for Dexter. If you have Showtime, check out that series too. Kick ass.

Let's see, what else? Oh! I forgot to mention how much your characteristics of Tom and Bill are consistant and spot on. Tom is methodical and pretty much straight forward. You always know what you're getting with Tom--at least most of the time. But with Bill? He's fucking deceiving. You'll let your guard down because he appears sweet and innocent--and then you're lying in a pool of your own blood.

Did I mention that I love you?

I don't know if you're a Harry Potter fan, but your story totally reminds me of SNITCH written by Alex Malfoy. Not because the stories are the same, mind you, they are both completely different. But they both have their main characters as sociopaths, in love, and the whole gritty, underbelly crimelord scene revolving around them. I keep picturing Tom and Bill as Harry and Draco-except Tom has a smoking gun (or two) in his hands and Bill is standing back to back with him and holding his knife.

Why is this so fucking hot?!

You and I are going to have to be married in the shrink's office. Maybe they'll be nice and give us a discount since it's our wedding day. What do you think? Then I'll ravish you on the doctor's desk. So, to answer your question, I think I'm capable of handling you quite well. *wiggles eyebrows*

Yep. Nothing like a good story to make me come on to the author. LOL! Uh...not that I've done this before, mind you. Okay, I have. But you're the real thing this time, I swear! You can't hold my whorish past against me! *frets*

If you are a Harry P. fan I would suggest that you go and read SNITCH, but the author went nuts and he never finished it. *pouts*

Oh and T says: "God...I just want to lay this story down by the fire and...do you think she'll update again tonight?"

Make of that what you will. Heh.

Groping you through the computer,
Rashida

Author's Response: *breathes* Oh chickadee... *melts into a puddle of goo* It was really wrong to read your review and listen to AFI's Kiss and Control... lol

amazing

Author's Response: Thank you!

“It’s just when you die, it will be me pulling the trigger.”

I feel like that's foreshadowing something in chapters to come. You already know I think you're brilliant. Don't ever lose your style and I won't ever stop reading your fics. =)

Author's Response: :D Thank you icemint, I love your reviews!

I'm reading this and seeing it in my head like a movie - one of that spectacular movies where there's action and love - perfect for both the sexes,lol

For some reason I loved the beginning - mostly the scene when Georg see them kissing in the garden.

And I'm so bad that I want Georg to want Bill so we can see him getting shot by tom.*morbid thoughs*

My favorite scenes were when Bill put Georg in his place( we see he has some of his own brother blood and is not as innocent as it seems - what makes him even more hot) and when Tom shoots the guy who hurted Bill - it's kind of interesting and amazing that he did it without even have to think, without even look at Jost first

I liked to see Tom waiting for Bill at the stairs even knowing he would have too go to his missing

I already sais this seems like a movie lol - and that's because of the way you make This organization to work - they had to prove themselfs first and would be killed if they didn't pass.It makes sense, really ;)and i think i saw a movie like that somewhere

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“No. You seduce them, and then leave them.” Georg laughed - I have a feeling this guy will suffer for messing eith Tom's little brother

Are you scared?” Georg teased as he moved in front of him, causing Bill to back up against the door. “Not for me.”
-best part ever

He watched Tom pull Bill around, the younger twin laughing so hard he could barely follow, until Tom picked him. He could see Bill’s long legs wind themselves around Tom’s waist, pulling his brother into a deep kiss.
- you keep making the most sweet scenes between them...and I keep replaying this one in my had -then I remenber the end, when Tom specify how they kill each other of they need to.And you knoe what? It makes me love them even more

so...I wrote this all to tell you I'm in love - don't know yet if by the twins relationship or by the story itself

when will you update again?

ps:right now I think i need to take my mothers pills - i'm turning slowly in some kind of morbid person

Author's Response: lol I'm glad you're in love Lipa, I truly am. Maybe you'll figure out with what in the next chapter. Thank you for your review!

Love it!

Author's Response: Thank you!

This would make such a fantastic screenplay i'm so tempted to just change the names and make a film (siteing you as authour of course) I spend far too much time telling you how fantastic this is don't i?

Author's Response: Dude, if you can do cool. *shrugs* I would love to be able to write a screenplay but my brain doesn't work like that. It comes out in fanfiction. Thank you for your review!