Date: 07/03/10 02:14 am Title: Fool Me Twice...
They get attacked by Jost's men what is Jost thinking? He has a death wish. Piss off the twins over work them and then separate them to try and kill them. Way to underestimate your own men.
Date: 07/03/10 01:00 am Title: Fool Me Once...
Buying out their contract is genius but jost will never go for it.
What's up with someone trying to buy their loyalty?
Splitting them up to get killed...did he set them up to kill each other?
Date: 07/02/10 07:00 am Title: Epilogue
Okay I thought of more stuff I wanted to say. XD
I loved that they weren't heartless. Like that they didn't kill the baby and they spared the people who were nice to them.
...also... well okay, I have nightmares of Tom [sometimes with Bill] trying to kill me. It's not like once, I have them kind of often, but anyway... this story, it didn't freak me out like the dreams do. It actually made me smile the whole time, like... something about the way you wrote it made them not so scary and I'm hoping that sticks with me for the next time I have another nightmare. Thanks. :]
This was a really amazing story, thank you so much for writing it. :D
Date: 07/02/10 06:54 am Title: Epilogue
Oh wow I loved this. :D
...is it wrong of me to be happy that the two main "bad guys" in the story lived? XD
I seriously loved this chacterization of Bill and Tom though. x]
It was great.
Amazing story. :D
Date: 06/27/10 04:43 am Title: Epilogue
Oh. My. God. I freaking loved this story. The twins were complete sociopaths and I must admit, there's nothing sexier than killers who love their jobs.
Date: 06/26/10 09:26 pm Title: Define... "Own"
Whoa their trip to Tokyo sucked. Getting attacked, having to ditch their stuff; man that's a lot of suckage!
Date: 06/26/10 04:36 pm Title: If You Have To Wonder, You Never Had It
Awes they're so tired. David should have waited until he had the man power before he took over you can't run your men ragged because you'll be worse off then you were before you took over
Especially with pissed off overworked twins.
Date: 06/26/10 11:19 am Title: Like Oil Before The Fire
The nail gun murder made me laugh so hard. I'm really enjoying their psychopathic behavior. I'm still surprised at this story it really isn't what I expected.
Date: 06/26/10 02:21 am Title: The More Things Change
Oh my that's a lot of change in a very short time. The writing on this story is a little stilted but the story line is totally up to par.
Date: 06/25/10 04:56 pm Title: Scraping By
Are twins so cute or what? Hot sex in the bathroom yum!
Date: 06/25/10 01:11 pm Title: Preempted
Okay this was what i was expecting. I don't know what I was expecting but this is awesome.
Date: 06/10/10 09:42 pm Title: Epilogue
I wanted to read the entire story before I gave a review. I was very impressed (the last chapter had me sitting on the edge of my chair and my face two inches away from the screen)! I love how it's so violent, but so funny and has a little romance! It's one of the most original TH fanfics that I've ever read. Great job! :)
Date: 05/15/10 01:57 pm Title: The More Things Change
awsomeawsomeawsomeawsome
Date: 04/14/10 01:37 pm Title: Preempted
I'm happy Corrine didn't die.
I love the way you write. Simple and straight to the point. You never use too many words to describe something, yet we can see it right in our minds.
It looks as if nothing is missing and nothing could be added.
Simply fascinating.
This story is so twisted, yet so amazing, I'm impressed a human mind could think of something like that!
I love how you portray Bill and Tom and their relationship. They're not just a couple or brothers or twins, they're everything to each other in any way there is.
I'll definatelly reread this and I'm sure I'll feel the same goosebumps as I did the first time.
Date: 04/03/10 08:51 pm Title: Epilogue
I love the story, but Jesus, it's creepy. I'm never gonna look at Bill and Tom the same way...
That is a compliment, though. I love their attitude throughout the whole story.
Date: 03/22/10 05:45 am Title: Preempted
I don't remember if I reviewed this fic back when I read it several months ago or not, but I think this was a masterpiece. I still remember it and it's still one of my Top5 favs on this site.
The imagery in this fic was haunting and brilliant, and the plot is so well crafted. Simply amazing. :)
Date: 03/13/10 05:57 am Title: Epilogue
I loved it O.O It sounds weird to say that such a gruesome thing is great, but... I'll just blame it on the fact that you write that perfectly well ;D
xx Chi ^^
Date: 02/21/10 07:00 pm Title: Epilogue
This should be a movie. Seriously. I mean, they'd probably have to tone down the twincest for the big screen, but I could definitely see this being the next Quentin Tarantino film. You are a wicked awesome author and your stories never fail to impress me. :)
Date: 02/13/10 04:02 pm Title: Epilogue
My God... When I read this story I feld like I watch some film. It was amazing! The best murder story which I read. I still can't belive it, how awsome it is. I can't finde any words to discrabe it. It's... wow! When I'd read it my mouth were open - it was 4 last chapters.
God. You wrote awsome. I... I must copy this in my PC and when I'll end translate "Don't tell Mum" I'm goig to ask you, that can I translate it in Polish.
The best sentences:
"So here they were, twin brothers, twin souls, two hearts beating as one with one goal." - You have any idea how beautiful this sound in my launguage (Polish)!
- “They thought they could separate us.”
“How unfortunate.”
The moment when this minitalk is are... the best in the all history, I'm thing.
But other side - in your story I have to many "bestmoment", becouse all 10 chapters are wonderful.
- "You cannot stop the Kaulitz twins" - Yeah, this Autor's note are... so good. When I'd saw this I thought "God, this chapter will be awsome. When I can't read faster?!"
Yea... Thanks for wrote it.
And sorry about my bad English :P I read in this launguage, but write... :D
Author's Response: Yes, you can translate it into Polish! All I ask is that you let me know how it goes, if you have any questions about something that needs clarifying before you translate, and to keep me posted on how people like it! Email me at Majestrix@aol.com
Date: 10/31/09 09:18 pm Title: Scraping By
the scene where the twins kiss in front of jost
the hottest ive ever read!
seriously