Date: 02/04/08 09:49 pm Title: Preempted
just curious, how old are they in the beginning? Really good series. This is my second time reading it. Lmao. Keep it up!
Date: 02/01/08 01:50 am Title: Preempted
... Wow.
I think this might be the first review I've left on a fic on here, I usually only read on LJ - I tend to forget about this site a lot :/ But I'm so happy to make this my first! This was absolutely brilliant. Exactly the kind of fic I've been craving, and evil twins get me like nothing else can. Your characterizations in this were amazing... you wove in so much realism, and the references here and there were awesome (Jumbie
Date: 01/27/08 04:16 pm Title: Scraping By
I've loved rentboy fics since I don't know when. But I can't touch a TH rentboy fic to save my life. I thought this was one of those when I read the summary.
I'm so glad I went to the forum and discovered from some of the posts there, that it wasn't. The idea that it could possibly be a prequel to 'Snowball...' had me scrambling.
So, so glad to finally read this ^^
Date: 01/27/08 03:19 pm Title: If You Have To Wonder, You Never Had It
i just started reading this now because i was bored but HOLY FUCK. i cant even begin to describe to you how much i freaking love this fanfic! will you marry me? please?! o_o
Date: 01/24/08 04:19 pm Title: Epilogue
That has to be one of the most fucking disturbing stories I have ever read. I like it!
Date: 01/16/08 04:17 pm Title: Epilogue
oh oww ohh! first of all...AMAZING fic! one of the best i red great job!
and second...sorry i didn't realy get it...whos the baby girl at the end?
well again...Amazing! your vety talented ^__^
Date: 01/14/08 07:49 am Title: Epilogue
I know I've already reviewed this but I was taking a break from revision. *cough*
and I was just flicking through stories I like and being the slightly odd and very curious person i am with the word count you have and and with the average word count for a page in a novel being around 240/250 you've written a 170 page Novel.
Are you a writer? because if you're not you should be.
How did you get the inspiration to do so much of this?
tell me when to shut up because i have a really hard time doing so.
Date: 01/05/08 06:22 pm Title: Preempted
Already now, I can understand why this is SandyClaw's favorite fic!
I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: *bows* thank you and thank you for your review!
Date: 01/04/08 06:07 pm Title: Epilogue
Haha! I knew something was up about Gustav. Damn, I really liked him but he turned out to be such a...good guy... what a turn off XD
well, I dont quite know what to say. Everything was just so perfectly perfect. I particularly like your choice of names. This story had me hanging off every word and the ending was truly....*mwah!* Oh god... my eyes hurt from the radiation of my laptop, but it was so worth it! I wish I could give you more then just 5 stars...
Author's Response: lol I can't fool you, can I? Thank you for bathing in that radiation to read my fic. It means a lot to me. :D
Date: 01/04/08 05:32 pm Title: Fool Me Once...
omg no...its can't be....NOT GUSTAV! I really liked Gustav...like favorite-character liked Gustav...is he doing a double act with David? *bites nail*
Author's Response: You'll have to see. :D
Date: 01/04/08 09:44 am Title: Define... "Own"
ah, so they wen't to Shibuya... great place :)
Author's Response: lol :D
Date: 01/03/08 08:19 pm Title: Preempted
wow gory killings Bill.
Author's Response: yep!
Date: 01/02/08 06:05 am Title: Epilogue
That was like the best story i've ever read! It was amazing, i love your language and it was both easy and hard to read.
I love that you described everything so good, like the weapons, instead of just saying "he pulled out his knife" your saying what kind of weapon he's using, and that's making it much easier to imagine how it looks like. And even if i don't know that much about knifes and guns, I can just google it :)
In almost every story i read that's about twincest, Tom is always unsure if he wants to be with Bill, and he's always sleeping around. And that is also one of the million things that i liked in your story, Tom and Bill is in love and nothing can come between them. It's cool that they can be so open with their realtionship and just don't care a shit about anyone else.
I loved the epilogue, I was reallu scared that Bill and Tom was dead, and know i don't have to worry.
I could continue like this forever, but I'm gonna save you the time and just gonna say that i LOVE your story! And hurry up with that sequel, i hate that this one is over, so I need another one!
Author's Response: lol thank you, and thank you for your review!
Date: 01/01/08 12:43 pm Title: Epilogue
I hate talent, for I have none. So I hated reading this; and please, take it as a compliment. It is.
Author's Response: *bows* thank you and thank you for your review.
Date: 01/01/08 10:25 am Title: If You Have To Wonder, You Never Had It
God. Your Bill is the most enticing, dangerous creature I've ever laid my mental eyes on.
Author's Response: Thank you, I try. :D
Date: 01/01/08 07:41 am Title: Preempted
Ok, I'll try to give a good review but I really suck at it.
Usually it's very difficult for me to like an AU, seriously...most of the time the characters are just fucked up or the events are just illogical but I REALLY loved this one. All the details, all the description are just...wow.
You did a really great job and I'm really happy that Tabata is translating it and posting it on our LJ.
And I LOVE the idea of the sequel!
Five stars
Author's Response: Thank you, and thank you for your review!
Date: 12/23/07 02:21 pm Title: Epilogue
So I just finished reading your story, I split it up over a couple of days since I have some problems with concentrating but I have to say eventhough I was not reading I was still wondering. This is a very good story and it is very well written. The cruelty of the twins is actually endearing, it captured me right away. Eventhough they seemed soulless I couldn't help but think that dep down inside something touched them so I was glad to see that I was right (Corinne) I wondered if he would have killed her, seeing that Bill had been quite attached to the blind girl in the orphanage.
But this is really a masterpiece, the details are amazing, there is not one time while reading this that you didn't seem to know what you were talking about, both scary and perfect. You described everything as if you have personally tried it which make it mroe real. Very nice job.
By the way I like that you specified the car, admitted I am a sucker for cars so I had to google it but it was nice. I loved the details. Thumbs up and fice stars.
Thanks for the heartfilled and yet extremely cold story, it was wonderful :D
Love Loui
Author's Response: Thank you, and thank you for your review!
Date: 12/22/07 06:59 pm Title: Epilogue
BEST ENDING EVER.... this is seriously my favorite fic of all times, it's amazingly good
Author's Response: lol thank you, and thank you for your review!
Date: 12/22/07 11:04 am Title: Epilogue
wow, fantastic story. I loved every mintue of it. It's nice to see Bill and Tom being sedistic for once.
Author's Response: *blushes* thank you for your review!
Date: 12/22/07 07:52 am Title: Epilogue
I'm starting to fear for my mental health for thinking that this story is highly entertaining ...o.0
Author's Response: lol Thank you for your review!