Date: 07/17/09 06:08 pm Title: Little Talks & Not-So-Sweet Dreams
Duuuude! UPDATE SOON YEAH??
Date: 07/17/09 06:08 pm Title: Little Talks & Not-So-Sweet Dreams
Duuuude!
Date: 07/10/09 05:58 pm Title: Little Talks & Not-So-Sweet Dreams
How did I miss this update? This is getting SO GOOD. I'm so antsy with this one.
Date: 07/10/09 03:16 pm Title: Little Talks & Not-So-Sweet Dreams
hey saint XD wow... this storie is really sad... poor tomi.. or poor billa? god now im cnfused who is hurt the most? U__U
Date: 07/07/09 06:04 pm Title: Little Talks & Not-So-Sweet Dreams
Aww :D I wanna se what happens next!
Date: 07/05/09 05:17 pm Title: Little Talks & Not-So-Sweet Dreams
aww so cute give me more
Date: 07/03/09 10:53 pm Title: Little Talks & Not-So-Sweet Dreams
*bangs head on desk* You're killing me with endings like this...great chapter though!
Date: 07/03/09 07:45 pm Title: Little Talks & Not-So-Sweet Dreams
Poor conflicted Tomi... :(
Date: 07/03/09 05:47 pm Title: Little Talks & Not-So-Sweet Dreams
AWWW =] i lovvve itt! omfg update SOONER!!!
Date: 07/03/09 04:11 am Title: Little Talks & Not-So-Sweet Dreams
AWH o.o.
Date: 07/03/09 03:47 am Title: Little Talks & Not-So-Sweet Dreams
oh.yay.ohmygod!~please.update.this.soon?and.please.let.the.twins.get.more.intimate?i.love.you.for.this!!!!
Date: 06/30/09 04:15 pm Title: Coffee Cups & Awkward Talks
AH! YOU DID NOT JUST CUT OFF RIGHT ON THAT PART!!! XD
You just seriously killed me. I am going to have to make threats so you update sooner ;) hehe
Please please please update sooner!!!!!!
Author's Response: hahah im sorryyy hun. but dont worry. next chapters already written out. :D im gonna make a few changes then itll be up in a few days!
Date: 06/29/09 11:49 pm Title: Coffee Cups & Awkward Talks
Uh-Oh... old habits die hard I see... lol
I am really intrested to see where this is going. Great job on the story so far!
Date: 06/20/09 11:43 pm Title: Coffee Cups & Awkward Talks
This cliffhanger is killing me...see? over there on the floor, dead...all cuz of your cliffhanger =)
Update soon please?
Date: 06/20/09 01:08 am Title: Coffee Cups & Awkward Talks
I loooove this story!! Can't wait for more!
Date: 06/19/09 09:41 pm Title: Coffee Cups & Awkward Talks
Yeah they do. What's going on in Bill's head for real, I wonder?
Date: 06/19/09 04:16 pm Title: Coffee Cups & Awkward Talks
i love this story.
Date: 06/19/09 12:13 am Title: Coffee Cups & Awkward Talks
I need to know how the talk goes between Tom and Bill.
Please update soon.
Date: 06/18/09 09:19 pm Title: Coffee Cups & Awkward Talks
Well, well, well... This is a quite of story here. And I love it more and more on every chapter! I just red it till this (11th) chapter and now I'm frustrated to see that there is NOT anymore next-buttons :D
Where to start, hmm... The first chapter made a huge impact on me. The part of the cas crash was so terrible that even if I knew it was coming, I still shocked a little bit. You wrote it so realistic way, that it made me shiver... Everything about Bill reaching for Tom and Tom's cap with blood on it etc. *shivers again*. It remind me of my friend, who died on a car crash few years ago. I hated it, how you made me feel right at the beginning... and yet that's the reason I kept reading forward. Very powerful chapter, I have to say... Also the second chapter was amazing and really sad. I guess that would be some sort of twin-thing to feel each other while sedated and I also think, that it expressed perfectly their bond. Lyrics of Recue me almost made me cry. It was way too touching. So good job there.
I have to say, that I found the other chapters placed on hospital little bit difficult to handle. On the other hand they were emotional, but still I missed something there. I don't know exactly what it was. Maybe there could have been little more details about their injuries and explanations (for example of the reasins causing Tom's amnesia. Was it some kind of brain damage or what?)?
But when you got them on plane, the fic started to grow bigger and bigger on every chapter and I was so fascinated about it. The way Bill was taking care of Tom, watching after him, comforting him, being the strong one there. I think, it's little unusual to see Bill like that on fics. And I felt so sorry for Tom. He seems to be so lost and so vulnerable there. Yeah, it is really hard situation in real life too, when everything is strange to you and you're trapped in the middle of unfamiliar people and places, so you did good job describing it on this fic. Scenes, where Tom remembers little things (like in his dreams), fights against his fears or tries to figure out, who he is, are heartbreaking.
I also love the way you are developing twins relationship slowly and gently. The kiss on a plane was breathtaking and I surely didn't expect to see that kissing to happen on a video. I found two dimensions from this story: first Tom's amnesia and it's effects on him and his environment and second is the groping relationship between Bill and Tom, when they are feeling things they should not feel. You are talented to focus on both of them.
Oops, long review! Anyway, I love the way you are growing this fic and I'm going read your updates on this one on future for sure :)
Date: 06/18/09 08:07 pm Title: Coffee Cups & Awkward Talks
always leaving us hanging with the important talks ready to happen. And from Tom's reaction I can't wait to see what he has to say about the tape. It's crazy how they forget about their kissing in their past it must be repressed because they got caught.
