Date: 02/08/09 04:30 am Title: Forgetting & Guardian Angels
Yeah, it took you kinda long, but it was worth waiting. :D
And don't you dare to say ever again that this chapter is horrible, you liar! XD
It's really cute. You rock. :]
So, please update soon, I can't wait. ^^
Author's Response: Thanks (: Hahah and I'm sorryyy. You rock too, and don't worry, more will be out soon!
Date: 02/07/09 10:51 pm Title: Forgetting & Guardian Angels
it isnt horrible...I like nthi story.
Author's Response: Thanks (:
Date: 02/07/09 08:21 pm Title: Forgetting & Guardian Angels
omg wow... *stares*....
Date: 02/07/09 08:11 pm Title: Forgetting & Guardian Angels
wow I still think you write with such detailed ways that I can picture everything from the people, scene, to the emotions their protraying.
I even had a flash back of when I was at the hospital finding out that my father wasn't going to make it. it seem so real that I cried.
you really were so sincere in their reactions. it just seems so realistic. I just can't explain enough for it to be exactly right way to put your work into how much it truly is exceptional.
sorry so emotional right now. so I can really write you a proper review. lets just say I kind of reacted the same when the doctor's and my mother finally told me what's happening to my father. and it just seem so heartbreaking to see it again and relive that experience.
so I want to say that I really appreciate your story. keeping writing it. I like that your detailed and it takes long to write. don't stop it's really great. I want to see how it goes for them.
oh ok so um the scene where bill's breakdown is was the best part.
I like that know bill has to take care of tom now. he seem to take the role willingly.
I love that tom's not pushing bill away when he needs him the most. well they both do in a way.
when they hug it just seem like they started to feel the connection for eachother again but tom seems so sad for not being able to remember bill.
Author's Response: Awe thank you so much. This is the best review I've ever gotten. (: Reviews like this are what keep me going in this story.
Date: 01/19/09 05:22 pm Title: Four Days & Waiting
omg... noooooooooooo.. tomi member him.. hugs.. you made me so happy to mention me in your thingy...
Author's Response: awe *hugs back* im glad i made you happy huns(: thanks for reviewing so much :D
Date: 01/19/09 01:31 pm Title: Four Days & Waiting
Ohmygod! :o
It's so sad T_T
You really know how to write a good story! ^^
Please update soon, can't wait for more.
*adds to favorites*
Author's Response: aweeee *hugs* thanks soo much!(: rni'll update as soon as i can!
Date: 01/19/09 10:48 am Title: Four Days & Waiting
Awww but Billi was so excited to see Tomi!
please update soon!!!
Author's Response: thanks(: and don't worry i will!
Date: 01/18/09 09:30 am Title: Four Days & Waiting
tom doesnt remember anything or ... just bill??
so this is starting to be exciting :D:D
please update soon
Author's Response: thank you so much(:
Date: 01/17/09 11:42 pm Title: Four Days & Waiting
...Woah. This is really good! Update soon, and I'll be on the lookout for it. *favorites*
Author's Response: Yay! thankies(:
Date: 01/17/09 10:22 pm Title: Four Days & Waiting
omg, plz update soon.i luvz this and i luvz u.....plz hurry thx=]
Author's Response: kay don't worry, next one's on the way!(:
Date: 01/17/09 10:13 pm Title: Four Days & Waiting
I felt like I was in that hosital room witnessing all of this. your words paint a picture in my mind so I can see this story like if I was watching a movie.
I'm glad to see that bill's emotions seem realistic in the situation.
I can't wait to see what's going to happen with tom's amnesia. how will there relationship evolve when it's like starting all over again to build there connection. love your story it's not boring your just paining your picture which takes time to make it perfect with all the details.
Author's Response: ohmygod *hugs* you're sweet thank you soo much! your reviews mean so much to me!(:
Date: 01/13/09 07:40 am Title: Remembering & Sedated
you mentioned me... aww.. *feels all warm and fuzzy inside* i love this story its plays on emotions very well
Author's Response: awee *hugs* thanks!(:
Date: 01/11/09 01:29 am Title: Remembering & Sedated
this is so cute! i love it! little bill and tom are so adorable. can't wait till the next chapter!
Author's Response: awe thank you! it should be coming out soon! (:
Date: 01/10/09 06:42 am Title: Remembering & Sedated
this is great, one small thing. when you say “Where’s Bill, mom?” do you mean “Where’s Tom, mom?” cause that would make more sense.
aside from that, I'm looking forward to seeing an update
Author's Response: thanks i just fixed that(:rnand don't worry, if people keep reviewing like this, there's going to be an update real soon!(:
Date: 01/10/09 04:59 am Title: Remembering & Sedated
wow that was the best description of twin link when they are sedated.
love how tom and bill are young again in their minds.
that was great chapter but one typo you wrote bill instead of tom when bill woke up he asked his mom where bill is instead of tom.
well love your first story you have a eye for details and pulling the reader into the story
Author's Response: awe thanks(: rnand i'm going to go fix that typo right now, thanks for pointing that out!
Date: 01/09/09 11:37 pm Title: Remembering & Sedated
awww poor billi and tomi =[
please update soon!
Author's Response: thanks(:
Date: 01/09/09 09:49 pm Title: Remembering & Sedated
awwwwwwwww. i loved that they were happiest together and ewww about the lung thing. that makes me all tearful and such
Author's Response: awe thanks(:
Date: 01/05/09 09:24 pm Title: Motel Rooms & Car Wrecks
wow bad accident
Author's Response: yeah i know):rnthanks for reviewing though!(:
Date: 01/05/09 04:31 pm Title: Motel Rooms & Car Wrecks
its worth continuing!=D
Author's Response: thanks, i'm def gonna finish it! (:
Date: 01/05/09 09:42 am Title: Motel Rooms & Car Wrecks
I think that it's totally worth it ;) so plz update soon:)
Author's Response: thank you so much!(: