Date: 05/11/09 03:41 pm Title: Childhoods & Superbabies
AH xd cute little twins kissing ^^ luv 'em!!
just.. who's lily?
I'm looking forward to reading the next chappie!!
Author's Response: Heheh me toooo. (: and lilyyyy i wanted to make her sound like their grandma or aunt or something... not really specified. :D thankk youuu i'll update sooon!
Date: 05/11/09 03:09 pm Title: Childhoods & Superbabies
*Gasp* Oh noes! Tom's about to find out the truth of him and Bill....can't wait to see.
Date: 05/05/09 12:12 am Title: Home Sweet Home & Samy Deluxe
Noo! You can't end it here! I'm going to die! nooooo! =(
I love this story so much! It's amazing. Please please please please please please please please please please please Update soon!
Author's Response: You can do it hun! (: i'll update as soon as I can!
Date: 05/03/09 04:35 am Title: Home Sweet Home & Samy Deluxe
Ah!
Suspense! More soon? :D <3
Date: 05/03/09 04:19 am Title: Home Sweet Home & Samy Deluxe
oh cliffhanger in a way leaving us without knowing what Bill was going to say and then intrupting them as well tisk tisk. Love how they are affectionate and close to each other without really realizing it still. They are always finding themselves wanting to be intertwined. The beginning with the hand holding was sweet it kind of seemed like they needed each other to be strong. And Tom is already trying to be protective and to be the rock for Bill already. You can see that Bill means so much to Tom in this chapter. The intimate bedroom scene was so innocent and it’s nice to see how you bring this awkward attraction gradually without forcing them to fully understand what’s coming natural to them. Everything that was happening to them in the bedroom scene was very second nature and love how it flowed naturally. And I think the words that Bill was going to say was “ Tomi, I think we need to talk about us” or “ Tomi, I think we need to talk about your feelings for me”. I hope they will finally talk about the kiss Bill has been brushing a lot of things under the table and maybe he wants to put everything out there now. But I really love where your going with this very slow with the attraction and letting them bond again. And everything you write seems so real it just draws you in with the characters and the storyline.
And before I forget thanks for dedicating this chapter to me that was sweet and very nice and glad you love my reviews. I try to give the authors what I think is the strengths of their work and my opinion about what I got out of the story. And I appriecate that you love them as well.
Date: 05/02/09 10:03 pm Title: Home Sweet Home & Samy Deluxe
*sets up tent and begins to camp out* I'll wait for the next button.. Though if I fall asleep, play some Samy and I'll wake up.
Date: 05/02/09 08:47 am Title: Home Sweet Home & Samy Deluxe
aww come on tell us
Date: 05/02/09 02:24 am Title: Home Sweet Home & Samy Deluxe
Oh God... Why did u leave it like that?!.. You were mean... Now I'm going to be like crazy waiting for a new chapter! XD
Love this Story Update soon please!
Date: 05/02/09 12:54 am Title: Home Sweet Home & Samy Deluxe
:O
Cliffhanger!
bill was gonna say: " I like cheesecake!" haha jk
update soon, i'm tracking
Author's Response: *gasp* how did you know?? hahah just kidddinggg. and don't worry, I've already got an idea of what's going to happen next so it'll be up soon.
Date: 05/01/09 11:35 pm Title: Home Sweet Home & Samy Deluxe
Ah I want to know what Bill was going to say.
Looking forward to another update soon
Date: 05/01/09 10:59 pm Title: Home Sweet Home & Samy Deluxe
Ahhhhhhhhhh! nyu... please tell me? I love this so much...
Date: 05/01/09 10:07 pm Title: Home Sweet Home & Samy Deluxe
Wow, this is amazing!
Date: 05/01/09 09:25 pm Title: Home Sweet Home & Samy Deluxe
OMMMMGGGG i hate u! dont leave me ahngin lol update soooooon plzz love it!!!!!
Date: 05/01/09 06:53 pm Title: Home Sweet Home & Samy Deluxe
I've just read it all, and in the beginning I was really about to cry. The whole thing were so sad, and when I was nine years old a buddy of mine, which was like an older brother to me, lost his memory in a car accident. And since I was so young it did get into me. But Tom was several times luckyer than my bud, cause he were unconcious for six weeks. It is eight years since the accident now, and he still isn't a hundred percent health, he probably never will.
You probably think it's weird that I shared that, but I'm a person that shares my experiences so that people learn it without doing to big mistakes themselves.
It is a good fic, really good. I love it, and for me it's even better because I can kind of relate. I really feel sorry for both Bill and Tom. Bill because he have a brother without a memory. Tom because he is the one without a memory.
But if you wanna make the story seem even more true, you could add some other health-problems caused by the accident. Because I bet that he wouldn't be in this good shape, just a few days after beeing in coma. But it works the way it is also, because there is so many psychical conflict going on.
I just wanted to tip you, but as I said; It works this way also.
Author's Response: Aweee I definately don't think it's weird! I'm glad that you told me, I love to hear what everyone has to say and it makes me feel happy that people can relate to what I'm writing. I wish the best to your friend and I'm glad he's doing fine. (: Thanks so much anddd I honestly have never known someone where this has happened to them so what I'm writing about is off of what I do know already. If you want to, email me (my email's on my page) and maybe you can help me out with the "side-effects" since I don't know what they'd be like. Thanks again! *hugs*
Date: 05/01/09 05:48 pm Title: Home Sweet Home & Samy Deluxe
well i want you to know i didnt leave you... i just couldnt find your story forever... i sware the one day i leave my computer you update.. lol. hugs your doing great i love the way this is flowing keep it up
Date: 05/01/09 05:23 pm Title: Home Sweet Home & Samy Deluxe
oh my gosh!!! waht is he going to say!?!?!?!?
Date: 05/01/09 03:39 pm Title: Home Sweet Home & Samy Deluxe
Dammit what WAS he going to say?! That was mean. How? Why? Oh fine. Just leave me with that. That was so cute, what Tom was saying to Bill and all. Ah! I love Tom with severe amnesia.
Author's Response: hahahah i am crueelll. (: and thank youu!
Date: 04/14/09 02:58 am Title: Deja Vu & Screaming Fans
I like your story, it's different. Please update soon.
Date: 04/12/09 08:02 pm Title: Deja Vu & Screaming Fans
Oh that was so sweet. I hope Tom starts to remember more. I hope Bill opens up to him a little bit. He's doing a great job, though. Best brother ever!
Date: 04/12/09 01:34 am Title: Deja Vu & Screaming Fans
awww that was so cute lmao
espically the ending
awww they were holding hands the whole time