Date: 01/05/09 02:51 am Title: Chapter 1
I read the pairing and summary and was all ohemgee bu/kaulitz and then after I clicked it I realized it was your story and the one you wrote for me haha which made me ohemgee even more of course! So that being said
dsjnflkasf I loved it and can I totally vote for a "sequel" in which we get to read the sexiness that follows?
thank you bby
Author's Response: I'm so happy you liked it! I should have told you that I was going to post it anyway, but I kinda just wanted to get it up. Anyway, thank you! <3
Date: 01/04/09 10:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
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That was hot, and it just kept building, slowly building. I loved the pacing and then Bushido went all noble on a girl and allowed the twins to take each other.
Brilliant. Another awesome job.
Author's Response: Oh, thank you! You and Little Muse write some of the most amazing Billshido on the site. To me, it's a standard to live up to, and knowing that you liked this, that you felt it? It means an awful lot to me. I can't thank you enough. <3
Date: 01/04/09 10:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
OH.
MY.
GAWD.
*convulses*
*sufficates*
Soooooo fucking good!!!!
Author's Response: LOL Thank you :D
Date: 01/04/09 09:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
*breaths deeply* Oh dear....Oh dear. This might just be the best smut I've read in a long while. I was entranced a few lines in and most of the time I was out of breath. That takes skills right there. Oh lordy....
I recently got into Bushido and this story definetly made me like him alot more. I'm not even kidding you.
Oh dear, this is making me want to start reading every Bushido/Tom/Bill fics there are.
Author's Response: What a wonderfully sweet review. I really do appreciate the kinds words, and I'm so very glad you liked this. Thank you so very much. :)
Date: 01/04/09 09:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
I used to hate Bushido, and I'm trying not to, because there are many Billshido fics out there... and yours was amazing, even if it was more twincest than Billshido... this story goes to my favorites... and thank you for not making me freak out about Bushido being here... I think stories like this are what I need to start accepting him. Thank you, thank you.
Author's Response: I'm very happy to help you start to accept Bushido. I think his motives are often misunderstood, and he's really a good guy. I love that you enjoyed this enough to put it in your favorites, thank you so much! :)
Date: 01/04/09 09:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh Mel, you just about killed me. This is pretty much the hottest thing I've ever read. The. Whole. Freakin. Thing. My heart is going so fast right now, haha. The intense twin longing and, oh god, the rimming, not to mention the amazing dialogue. I'm going to fav this and read it over and over. *dies happy*
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I loved writing it, I swear it flowed out of me like it was meant to be. You just can't turn your back on that.
It really makes me blush and grin so happily that you enjoyed it that much. Thank you again. <3
Date: 01/04/09 09:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh holy fuckety fuck OO
I…I…I love you, so goddamn much
This was absolutely amazing and Tom’s character was just the best EVER. I loved him, so…big brotherly! Bill was so cute and innocent and Bushido was very sweet, just like I knew you’d write him ,)
Couple of nitpicks, just ’cause I know you’re a perfectionist:
Bill(missing an ’s no?) armor cracked, and he gave Bushido a shy smile.
and it seemed oddly rude to look at(maybe ’so’ not ’at’) closely at Tom’s body when Tom wasn’t the one he wanted
The(’this’, ’that’ ?) was wrong, so very wrong, and Bushido didn’t give a shit.
I really, really, really should be asleep right now, but I just had to read this before I turn in for the night. I cannot tell you how much I loved it, everything was just so…heavy, if you get what I mean. The whole mood just made my stomach ache pleasantly.
But you do realize cutting it off there was very cruel, right? But you did it because that’s where Bushido’s part in their story ended, so I get the symbolism. Still mean place to cut it off though…
And as you know, I have a thing for Bill’s thighs, so this was like…heaven!
Much love, gonna mail you some stuff real soon (maybe now if I manage to keep my eyes open long enough to read through it)
Author's Response: Holy cow Lucy, I thought you'd be asleep!
I'm so happy that you liked this and that it lived up to your expections. Thank you so much for convincing me not to scrap it. You caught my errors this time! lol I went over this damn thing so many times, but I'm fixing it now. Thank you, babe.
Yes, I questioned whether to cut it off there, but it had to be done. I knew it would make you crazy, though. ;P
And honey, Bill's thighs were nuzzled just for you. Thank you so much for reading this and for being there for me when I needed you. I love you so. <3
Date: 01/04/09 09:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
wow. started off good, got better, and then it just turned into deliciousness. this was really, really, really, really (really times infinity) good. now I have to go catch my breath.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Your review is awesome and means a lot to me :D
Date: 01/04/09 08:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aw, Mel, I'm sorry but I... I can't. I want to, because it's you and I love your prose and your smut but I just... gah, I can't. So sorry. :'( I'm sure this is excellent, anyhow, because you just don't have it in you to write anything mediocre. :)
Author's Response: Ah girl *hugs* It's okay. I know you get weirded out by Bushido, and it's okay if you don't read it. Thank you for the sweet words. <3<3