Date: 02/21/09 08:33 pm Title: Chapter 8
*Gasp* Ooh that almost made me cry... I feel so awful for him but ooh clues are good.. I'm quite stoked that they're starting to unravel this one!!! I love the characterization and how Tom is sort of losing it over Bill :P It's cute. Keep up the fabulous work!
Date: 02/21/09 05:01 pm Title: Chapter 8
It's Mr. Brenson, isn't it?
It better not be!
I'll fiction kill that bastard.
Date: 02/21/09 04:56 pm Title: Chapter 8
Oh wow I wonder whats going to happen I hope they find Bill before anything else goes bad.
Date: 02/20/09 09:25 pm Title: Chapter 7
Ooh gosh! That was one hell of a cliffie... *Gets suspicious* Very intrigueing! I love the hell out of this. The mystery just keeps getting deeper and deeper. I love you for this. Keep up the fabulous work and have fun in NYC!!! It's a blast.
Date: 02/19/09 07:51 pm Title: Chapter 7
oh my god! dudeee, such a cliffhanger!!
have fun in New York. it's ma place.
Date: 02/19/09 06:41 pm Title: Chapter 7
you can't leave without an update ! that would kill me ;) ... nice chapter! i can't wait to know what she had to say!
Date: 02/19/09 04:49 pm Title: Chapter 7
I like this story don't stop the updating
Date: 02/19/09 04:05 pm Title: Chapter 7
awww plz update soon..i luvz this and u thx=]
Date: 02/19/09 04:01 pm Title: Chapter 7
AH!!!! Update soon. I want more. I like it. How could you end it like that??? That's mean.
Date: 02/03/09 05:48 pm Title: Chapter 6
i miss your story :(
Date: 02/02/09 07:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
Tom must be some one, hot, detective!!
Date: 01/26/09 08:00 am Title: Chapter 6
Moooore!
I totally LOVE it. ^^
I hope you'll update soon, 'cause I can't wait. :D
*adds to favorites*
Date: 01/26/09 02:24 am Title: Chapter 6
Aww, you had to stop there. You are mean. Please continue.
Date: 01/24/09 09:46 am Title: Chapter 6
OMG!!!!
Go on, go on, GO ON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*kicks that sick bastard* If you dare to touch him, you'll find a baseball bat somewhere the sun never shines!!!!!
Date: 01/24/09 02:59 am Title: Chapter 1
omg poor bill
update soon i like this a lot =]
Date: 01/24/09 01:28 am Title: Chapter 6
*cringe* Poor thing... i was wondering what was hapening to him.. ooh i hope Tom finds him soon! Love it!
Date: 01/23/09 10:55 pm Title: Chapter 6
yeah :) i'm so glad we could read Bill's pov :)
Date: 01/23/09 09:15 pm Title: Chapter 6
o noes poor bill plzzzz update soon ur a rlly good writer
Date: 01/23/09 08:56 pm Title: Chapter 6
aweeeeeee sadness
Date: 01/23/09 08:26 pm Title: Chapter 6
I hope this guy rots in hell & Tom can find Bill.. So Bill can be safe.