Date: 02/23/09 09:14 pm Title: Chapter 5
thiss is sooo good!
Date: 02/23/09 09:09 pm Title: Chapter 4
poor billa...
Date: 02/23/09 09:00 pm Title: Chapter 3
dun dun duuuuun!
Date: 02/23/09 08:32 pm Title: Chapter 10
EEEP! This is so good. Ooh such a good mystery! But it's all raveling down now... or is it... you could just be pulling our dicks... I can't wait to find out XD
Date: 02/23/09 06:48 pm Title: Chapter 10
Hm...I wonder if it's him. Is it? Are we supposed to be confident that it's Paul? Or could it possibly some creepy teacher at school?!? I hope not. Poor Bill. Tom needs to get his head in the game.
Date: 02/23/09 06:19 pm Title: Chapter 10
Oetker?! isn't that like, baking products?
I'm worried about poor Billa.
I'm looking forward to an update.
Author's Response: Yeah... Lol. I couldn't think of a last name. Feel free to suggest another one and i'll change it.rnrn& There will be an update soon hopefully. x
Date: 02/23/09 05:39 pm Title: Chapter 10
I hope Tom can find his beloved Bill, so nothing happens to him.
Date: 02/23/09 04:00 pm Title: Chapter 10
I like it. Would looove to kick Paul's ass lol. Hope they find Bill fast!!
Date: 02/23/09 03:44 pm Title: Chapter 10
Uh. Please update soooon!!! I need to know what's gonna happen!! Pleaseee!!!
Date: 02/23/09 03:21 pm Title: Chapter 10
awww poor bill.....very nice chapter. (as always)!!!! :D
Date: 02/23/09 04:45 am Title: Chapter 9
Beautiful story very sensitive and so real..unfortunatly for the rape and kidnapping thing
Author's Response: Thank you so much. :) x
Author's Response: Thank you so much. :) x
Date: 02/23/09 03:06 am Title: Chapter 9
I wonder if its Bills biology teacher.
Date: 02/23/09 12:33 am Title: Chapter 9
This was a tad short, but maybe that's just because I really like this story and want there to be more every time. this really is such a mystery. I've got no idea who this guy is and I want to know. Poor Bill; how did he get into this mess? And, again, hurry up Tom!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! You will find out who it is... eventually. :) Lol. x
Date: 02/22/09 09:53 pm Title: Chapter 9
wow!! if feel like watching 24 O.O, your story is so good!!
Date: 02/22/09 08:38 pm Title: Chapter 9
I really think Tom is crushing on Bill who knows whats going to happen next....
Date: 02/22/09 06:54 pm Title: Chapter 9
Ooooh *gets creepy feeling* so we know who the man is huh... well then. Really there is nothing I love more than a good mystery sooo now you've got me all caught up in it and well I've found myself trying to figure it out randomly during my classes and such. You're such an amazing mystery writer! *Squee* Liebe it!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! That means the world to me :) Glad you like it! There will be plenty more chapters this week before i head off. x
Date: 02/22/09 06:23 pm Title: Chapter 9
ooh this is good=] i hope they find bill soon=[ plz update soon thx
Date: 02/22/09 06:06 pm Title: Chapter 9
Finally some information is being brought to light! Now if only Tom can come to grips with his emotions.
Date: 02/22/09 02:04 pm Title: Chapter 8
omfg...plz update soon thx=]
Date: 02/21/09 10:11 pm Title: Chapter 8
I say talk to Melina THEN Mr. Brenson. I'm worried. I'm getting a sick feeling in the pit of my stomach from this. How did you get mixed up with this guy, Bill? Hurry the fuck up, Tom.