Date: 03/09/09 03:38 pm Title: Chapter 15
Me loved it. And now me want's more.
You know; ME is a person, that needs so much.
Yeah me is me. :D
Please give me some more. :D
I read those chaps before with my cell, though, but I couldn't review from there. So now I'm covering it. ;)
Well, yeah. Like I said already; ME WANTS MORE!!!
(Dunno what's wrong with me and the 3rd person thing I have lately. xD)
Date: 03/09/09 03:32 pm Title: Chapter 15
SHE HAS TO TELL TOM AND GEORG WHERE BILL IS!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UGH!!!!!!!! STUPID STUPID STUPID GIRL!!!!!!!! NO OFFENSE.... PLZ UPDATE!!!!!! T.T
Date: 03/09/09 03:10 pm Title: Chapter 15
Oh, Jesus, Melina! How could she not tell the detectives? This is frustrating.
Date: 03/08/09 11:31 pm Title: Chapter 15
uh oh!!!!! i scared now....wat gonna happen? no one gonna die iz they? they gonna get bill okay? r they? pleze say they do.....they are, *gets out bazooka* right? *aims*
Date: 03/08/09 10:10 pm Title: Chapter 15
I hope Melina tells them so they find Bill without him being hurt again by who ever is holding him captive..Love these chapters can't wait for more my dear.
Date: 03/08/09 09:57 pm Title: Chapter 15
Hmmmm... I'm glad she decided to tell... Thanks for the duel update today! It was fabulous and this was niiiice and long... Keep up the fabulous work... Im still dying to find out exactly who is keeping bill there...
Date: 03/08/09 09:28 pm Title: Chapter 15
she has to tell !!!!!
Date: 03/08/09 08:56 pm Title: Chapter 15
This is a very interesting story. Hopefully when they get to the biology class, they don't find greg because he is down in the boiler room, but have Melina tell them what she knows. Post more soon. I really want to read more.
Date: 03/08/09 08:52 pm Title: Chapter 15
Wow! I got so behind in this story. I can see psychologically where Bill is coming from in not wanting to leave his prison.
I'm assuming next chapter is where Mel tells Tom and Geo?
Date: 03/08/09 06:15 pm Title: Chapter 13
Please don't leave us hanging...Did she finally find Bill?
Date: 03/08/09 05:42 pm Title: Chapter 14
*Gasp* Bill doesn't *Want* to leave? That threw me for a loop... That was an interesting insight into both their minds, very well written. The Tom bits per especailly vivid... Great job and keep it up XD
Author's Response: Thank you! And no, Bill does want to leave, of course he does, but Bill knows that things would be much worse if he did escape if you know what i mean. It'll be explained more in upcoming chapters.
Date: 03/08/09 05:39 pm Title: Chapter 14
so is she gonna tell them were he is so they can rescue him? cos if she dun than she stupid!
Date: 03/08/09 05:37 pm Title: Chapter 13
OMG!!!! I WAS ROGHT!!!! wait....the mean dude is in there too aint he....uh oh!!! RUUUUN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 03/08/09 04:36 pm Title: Chapter 13
Oh godness! I still cant survive it. And I have to leave computer now.
*cries her eyes out*
WAA! I HAVE NIGHT HERE!!! WAAAAAAH :'(
But I'll stay up all night and read in my mobile.
Cuz if I wont I wouldn't survive the night!!!
CUZ ME LOVES THAT STORY SO MUCH!!!
x33333333333333!!!!
Sorry I went crazy (A) :)
Author's Response: Haha thank you so much. :) I'll post the next update now and the one after that in an hour or two. x
Date: 03/08/09 04:22 pm Title: Chapter 13
OH GOD, OH GOD!! I NEED MORE!! SO MUCH MORE!!! EVEN MORE MORE!!!
WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH!!!!!!
Author's Response: Haha. Thank you. There will be 2 more chapters tonight so don't worry. :) x
Date: 03/08/09 04:16 pm Title: Chapter 13
omfg..plz let them find him since she saw him..i dont want them getting caught hurry and update plz thx=]
Date: 03/04/09 02:35 pm Title: Chapter 12
i have absolutely fallen in love with this story, i dont know what it is with Tom being a detective and saving Bill, but it is quite sexy...lol...im retarded....cant wait to read more, please update soon!!!
Date: 02/28/09 10:46 pm Title: Chapter 12
PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ WRITE MORE AND UPDATE!!!!!!!! I HAVE TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!!!!
Date: 02/26/09 05:14 pm Title: Chapter 12
Yay, Tom has feelings for a guy he's never met. Poor Bill having to go through that torture. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 02/25/09 11:28 am Title: Chapter 12
its gtaa b greg :L
IS IT GREG?
i mean he kissed him
nd tht melina srta recognised him :)
AND BILLS IN THE BOILER ROOOM D: :D
if dats not true then i feeel stupid :L
ITS GOTTAA B GREG!