Date: 04/13/09 09:50 pm Title: Chapter 24
It may have been a little fast, but it was still realistic. I mean, who could turn away a wanton Bill or Tom? . . . Other than me XD
Date: 04/13/09 09:40 pm Title: Chapter 24
Yeah, Tom! You are so fired! What the hell got into Bill? Jesus, he's like an emotional wreck or something or just, I dunno. Who recovers that fast? What? Well, moving on with this relationship could be awkward. I can hardly imagine how Bill's parents feel about it. Does Bill even care about Tom? Well, hell. And you updated that very fast. I'm amazed.
Date: 04/13/09 08:57 pm Title: Chapter 24
I think this should be a dream or some sort of Tom's wild imagination. It's kinda weird how Bill trusts a grown man so much, despite Tom saving him. I mean, it was a man who raped him and stuff. If I was Bill I wouldn't let any man come near me... or fuck me haha. So yeah, just my thoughts. No offense, but that situation might ruin such a perfectly-written story
Date: 04/13/09 08:51 pm Title: Chapter 24
Oh. My. God!
TRACKING THIS ONE!
Date: 04/13/09 08:50 pm Title: Chapter 24
finally it happened!
I do think it was a little rushed, to be really honest.
I mean, I've been waiting for them to kiss goddamnit, and that was good,
but I don't think they should've had sex right after their first kiss.
after all, they don't even know eachother
and Bill's only a kid.
still, I don't think it was bad
I'm looking forward to maybe some lovey dovey feeling discussions in the next chapter.
Date: 04/13/09 08:48 pm Title: Chapter 24
Oh. My. God!
TRACKING THIS ONE!
Date: 04/13/09 08:31 pm Title: Chapter 24
I dunno what to say... It was good I was waiting when that was going to happen.
Date: 04/13/09 07:04 pm Title: Chapter 23
Oh God, Choke me to death. WHAT A CLIFF! Seriously, I just might die. I read this story in one day, and I was amazed. It was so good! It's almost two parts. Time for some TomiBilla love now, huh? Update sooner!
Author's Response: Haha Thank You! :) I'm just about to post the next chapter.
Date: 04/13/09 06:53 pm Title: Chapter 23
OMG OMG Bill went to Tom's place, I'm so excited.
Date: 04/13/09 05:23 pm Title: Chapter 23
ahhh...the cliffhanger!
this is great.
Date: 04/13/09 05:17 pm Title: Chapter 23
man what a discussion! I get what Bill means, but jane is just too worried unfortunately.
nice update.
Date: 04/13/09 05:08 pm Title: Chapter 23
Oh, my God, I can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 04/13/09 05:02 pm Title: Chapter 23
Oh my gosh! *GLOMPS* SQUEEEAA!!!
Update soon! I love this story so much! It's my favorite!
Date: 04/13/09 04:44 pm Title: Chapter 23
OMG, I can't believe that....Please do send the next chapter I need to know what happens next...Lots of Love.
Date: 04/13/09 04:25 pm Title: Chapter 23
Way to stop just at that part. Rude! But oh so good. So...Bill came to Tom. Interesting.
Date: 04/12/09 08:09 pm Title: Chapter 22
Interesting. It seems we're moving somewhere. Wow, I didn't know Tom's crush was affecting him so much. Georg is even willing to tell him "Go for it" as opposed to telling him to just ignore it. I have no idea which idea is smarter at this point. If I were Tom I would keep ignoring it. Hell, Bill doesn't even know the guy and I think he needs a break from relationships.
Author's Response: Thank You. :)
Date: 04/11/09 11:00 pm Title: Chapter 22
Pointt if fact...as fas as my reasearch has taken me....in hospitals around the world, when a patient is released, it is mandatory that they are wheeled to the hospiital front door in a wheelchair and helped into whatever waiting vehicle is there for them. It's a liability thing and usualy the patient is indeed weak after a hospital stay.
Now there could be hospitals somewhere in the world where this is not the case, but it would be rare...
Author's Response: Thanks, i didn't know about that. I'll edit it when i have time.
Date: 04/11/09 03:04 am Title: Chapter 22
awww.. poor tom, I really don't know how he's going to go about this... I really hope it does have a happy ending though... it would be sad if it didn't... *duh that was really obvious but yeah i'm tired* so yeah, can't wait to see where this goes, keep up the fabulous work! XD Good luck with the WB.
Author's Response: Haha thank you. My WB is slowly going, i have some ideas on whats going to happen and i'm off to write another update now so that should be up tomorrow! xo
Date: 04/10/09 10:38 pm Title: Chapter 22
I like i wanna see what happens.. I hope Tom can finally come clean & tell Georg, then Bill how he feels then maybe having a cop in love with Bill then he wouldn't be in any danger... Keep up the good work my dear can't wait for more.