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Reviewer: BillsFreak Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/08/09 06:53 pm Title: Razor Red

Weird and gross, but i liked it.

Author's Response: Thank You~

Reviewer: extraORDINARY Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/06/09 01:08 am Title: Razor Red

i want a cookie! =)
Bill's character gives me
ideas. Haha no I'm kidding.
But I loved it. Bill does
seem like the type to just
kill off people and then
get creative with the remnants,
while Tom just sits around and
watches. Great. :)

[can I have my cookie pleaseeee?]

Author's Response: Oh my, I shall give you a cookie right away~ *Hands you huge cookie* :) Bill is amazing when it comes to being creative, and Tom's laziness makes him sexy- somehow o.o

Reviewer: cabaretgirl7711 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/05/09 09:06 pm Title: Razor Red

*sniffle*
I loved this.
It was so...good.
And I know that's an oxymoron, seeing as The Brothers Kaulitz were killing people, which is pretty much the most ungood thing you can do, but still.
You wrote it so well, too! I just - I can see the boys killing and Billa, the little sadist, making art from the corpses and bodily fluids. It just makes me happy, you know? And I promise, I'm not that sick in the head...well. Maybe I am. But. Whatever.
This was amazing.
-Rachelle

Author's Response: Wow, you really made my day. I'm so happy someone can enjoy my story. Yeah, I love Bill's artistic side, and I'm probably going to do so much more with that later on in other stories. The pairing with forever be Tom/Bill of course. :) Thanks so much~

Author's Response: Wow, you really made my day. I'm so happy someone can enjoy my story. Yeah, I love Bill's artistic side, and I'm probably going to do so much more with that later on in other stories. The pairing with forever be Tom/Bill of course. :) Thanks so much~

Reviewer: lena_hiyasaki Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/05/09 09:20 am Title: Razor Red

Awesome... Bill got his revenge and he also got to play with mannequins... you're such a great writer.. *-*
Can I get my cookie now?

Author's Response: You flatter me too much~ but of course! *Gives Cookie*

Reviewer: laughingatyourface Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/05/09 07:06 am Title: Razor Red

aaaw n_n

Author's Response: gahhh :)

Reviewer: Akasha Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/05/09 06:10 am Title: Razor Red

YAY! COOKIE!...I liked this kinda creepy but it's still awesome. ^-^.

Author's Response: *Gives Cookie* Creepiness names the world go round, my dear :)

Reviewer: classicDOA Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/05/09 05:47 am Title: Razor Red

I F^%KIN" LOVED THAT o-o......

May I ask for your Fic's hand in marriage? :D

Author's Response: of course of course :) be careful though, my Fic is a little sadistic o.o

Reviewer: slicedtopieces Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/04/09 11:13 pm Title: Razor Red

very nice I wasn't expecting any of that

Author's Response: glad you liked it :)

Reviewer: kartoffeln_leben Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/04/09 10:34 am Title: Razor Red

Eek. It's...creepy.
But I like it. >__

Author's Response: I'm glad :) thanks for reviewing~

Reviewer: Ryuu Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/04/09 09:02 am Title: Razor Red

Wow. That was fun! Well done.

Author's Response: thanks~ :)

Reviewer: pppoynter Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/04/09 03:25 am Title: Razor Red

*Speechless* That was damn good. I swear. :OOOO Gave me a little shock for a while but whoa, SWEET. 8D At first I didn't really get it, heheh. I even thought Tom was unaware, too but it turns out he's part of it! NICE. XD
I like! Awesome job.

*waits for cookie*

Author's Response: *Gives you gigantic cookie* If you get fat, it's not my fault xD Thanks for the review :)

Reviewer: mon1652 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/04/09 02:48 am Title: Razor Red

like the idea of series
love the part about go to hell-only if ur coming made me laugh and say how cute
sorry but gore films make me laugh
love the serial killer aspect
but it's funny and cute well I guess I'm sick but that's the truth
my friend reads serial killers autobiography so I think that u captured their personalities perfect

Author's Response: Yeah, I don't think it's strange to see humor and cuteness in a Horror Story. Well, maybe a LITTLE, but oh well :) Thanks for the personality comment, they would make brilliant serial killers won't they?

Reviewer: cutupdreams Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/04/09 02:23 am Title: Razor Red

that was great. I got it right from the beginning. It's late here in the states (2:30 in the morning) so I can't remember what movie...WAIT! I remember now...Interview with a Vampire...yeah, it reminds me of the Claudia days from Interview With a Vampire. Anyway, amazing job. I loved Bill's deceptive innocence and Tom's indifference.

Author's Response: Ohh, I promised myself I needed to see that film, but I haven't yet :( Thanks for the review~

Reviewer: Diglossia Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/04/09 02:21 am Title: Razor Red

Please do NOT make another chapter. This is so good that it stands well on its own. I think another chapter would ruin it or at least diminish the novelty of it.

Author's Response: Alright :) I see your point. I was thinking more one chapter stories like this, then making them into a series.

Reviewer: Diglossia Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/04/09 02:19 am Title: Razor Red

I have noooooooo confusion. This is very light, not dark at all for a serial murder story. I like the bit about drinking a shitload while I was high. Maybe I've read the Encyclopedia of Serial Killers too many times (seriously, my sister has it) but this was funny. You also managed to capture the voices of the newscasters really well. And, I like the juice boxes. I have no idea why.

Author's Response: Oh my, thanks so much. I tried to make it light, just for the hell of it- Since I didn't know if people would be offended if it was dark humor. You need to lend me that Encyclopedia~ xD Haha

Reviewer: Yin8 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/04/09 02:03 am Title: Razor Red

....wow lol that was actually pretty awesome :D its kind of strange bill would keep corpses as mannequins but hey his choice XD

Author's Response: Ahh~ he can still be cute when he's creepy though :)

Reviewer: kailey_khaosx Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/04/09 01:28 am Title: Razor Red

That was wonderfully twisted, I loved it

Author's Response: Thanks :)

Reviewer: spreadxthexiubesc Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/04/09 12:12 am Title: Razor Red

This is really, really cool.
I like the idea of Bill being the criminal, instead of the victim.
It's kind of sexy.

Author's Response: Tchyeahh~ I agree with you wholeheartedly on that :)

Reviewer: TomKaulitzLuvr Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/03/09 11:59 pm Title: Razor Red

oh a cookie! =D xD i love this! is it done or are you continueing?

Author's Response: Haha, it's a oneshot so it's just one chapter :) I might do a series of stories like this, but only if people are interested.

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