Date: 07/24/09 07:21 pm Title: Finishing Touches
awwwwwww.....made me well up at the last few lines.
god...love is awesome
=D
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it! :D And I agree!
Date: 04/24/09 04:32 am Title: Finishing Touches
Awwwww...
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review darling!
Date: 04/12/09 06:13 pm Title: Back and ready to party!
What I seem to find funny is that even though Bill pretty much beat the shit out of her, she still went back to him.
Author's Response: While I don't condone running back into an abusive relationship, it must be said that love makes you do crazy things.
Date: 10/23/08 09:49 am Title: Finishing Touches
Wow that was hot with a capital H. you have a way with words and now i need a cold shower, DAMN
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I have to say that I'm surprised people still like this story. XD But thank you again! :D
Date: 05/15/08 01:06 pm Title: Finishing Touches
Awesome story,you should write more HET
Date: 05/13/08 04:07 pm Title: A different point of view.
bump
Date: 05/04/08 12:46 pm Title: Back and ready to party!
And the translation is wrong on your bracelet.
It should be "Only to you and to me forever." Dir means 'to you' and mir means 'to me' meaning you should have used Nur Dich und Mich Für Immer".
But other then that the ending was sweet and I liked it. Much better then the other chapter.
Great Job babe!
Author's Response: Yeah I know but I was talking to that girl who speaks German who used to be in my school and she said dir could mean 'you' or to you' xDrnrnVielen dank bby. <3
Date: 05/04/08 12:44 pm Title: Finishing Touches
Sex parts were okay. I wanted to know what the girl was wearing D
Date: 05/03/08 04:33 pm Title: Finishing Touches
ok i looked up a vid on that bushido dude i refuse to let somthing that ugly stick his dick in bills ass lol
great story thow hun really loved
Date: 05/01/08 08:24 pm Title: Finishing Touches
I liked it I thought it was really good.
Date: 04/25/08 04:59 am Title: Gaining It Back
I know I've already reviewed this but seriously, I'm hooked and need a new chapter lol its so good xxx
Date: 04/20/08 06:18 pm Title: Gaining It Back
Ooooh that was brilliant
Date: 04/19/08 09:25 pm Title: Gaining It Back
WTF; this is shit - Why the freaking hell are Bill and the girl doing all that when Bushido is freaking right there, knocked out on the floor beside them?!?!
You idiot.
BTW: fix your bloody grammar.
10/10
Author's Response: well he's knocked out so who gives a shit. and they were only kissing and talking ass, it's not like they were fucking and woke the entire hotel up with the moans and groans. and MY grammar? you're the one with the spelling mistakes twice in one sentence! xP
Date: 04/18/08 09:36 am Title: Gaining It Back
Oooh I like this story =D
Date: 04/17/08 05:47 pm Title: Gaining It Back
awwww! they saved her! But whats going to happen to bushido?! Lol! is he still lying in the middle of the floor?!
Love this storyyyy!
More as soon as you can pleaseee!! =D
xxx
Date: 04/17/08 02:28 pm Title: Gaining It Back
fuck! that was an amazing part! i loved it! plees, u must continue this ff! so, keep goin` and 'rescue me' with a long next!! XP
Date: 04/16/08 09:59 pm Title: Gaining It Back
i luv it! r u gonna post more or is this it?
Date: 04/16/08 09:15 pm Title: Meet and Greet
that sign just made my day! My
Date: 04/14/08 07:30 am Title: Gaining It Back
Well done, Billy!But please update quicker, especially when you leave a situation like this....