Date: 11/02/08 11:51 pm Title: the day the world ended-introduction
I love the story idea, I really do ;x but I saw a lot of spelling errors, or some words need to be capitalized and some sentences are run-ons. And it was the Mayans, not the Aztecs ;x their calender ended on December 21st... sorry >_< it just bothered me. I catch a lot of those things. But I do like the story idea, but it might just drive me insane to find more errors lol I have a problem... >.>
Date: 12/13/07 02:21 pm Title: Death of seasons
lovely chapter! good to see that at least 4 of them are enjoying themselves lol
Date: 12/13/07 02:18 pm Title: we're killing lonliness
this was a really awesome chapter! haha georg and damius..loved it!
Date: 12/13/07 02:14 pm Title: well I'll give you all the nails you need
great story so far...
Date: 12/13/07 02:11 pm Title: the final countdown
woo the end of the world..interesting topic for the story!
Date: 12/13/07 02:08 pm Title: the day the world ended-introduction
hey i like how you've done that!
Date: 12/12/07 05:12 pm Title: we're killing lonliness
O_O
Gustav liked Georg O_O
That was an unexpected, very happy twist.
MORE MORE
Date: 12/10/07 07:31 pm Title: well I'll give you all the nails you need
MORe MORE
And some G perspectives would be nice XD
Author's Response: i'm getting there don't get your panties in a bunchrn
Date: 12/10/07 02:01 pm Title: well I'll give you all the nails you need
eeee :D more please
Date: 12/07/07 06:30 pm Title: the day the world ended-introduction
MORE MORE MORE
Date: 12/07/07 03:07 pm Title: the day the world ended-introduction
i dont know what'll follow, but i wanna read more of this:D
Author's Response: then I'll try and get annother chapter up todayrn