Date: 08/26/09 06:11 pm Title: Chapter 21
*squeal* Jeeeeeeeeeeej, glad Tom and Julie liked each other :D
Date: 08/26/09 05:13 pm Title: Chapter 22 - Epilogue
Oh. The last sentence...If you let go, I'm gonna let go too...Please don't end this, I'll be here to read all the chaps you post! IT'S MY FAVOURITE STORY ON THIS SITE! Love you for picturing them so well, I often enjoy rereading and feeling close to them.
Author's Response: Irene, thank you so much for all your reviews and for staying with the story. Like you, I feel close to them - I think that's why I can't let go yet :)) Thank you <3
Date: 08/26/09 05:09 pm Title: Chapter 21
Oh God! I'd like to "move stuff" with Bill... The older twins are as sweet as the young ones. They have "innocence" in common... I even love the "pinching" part of conversation!
Date: 08/26/09 05:00 pm Title: Chapter 20
All good: the kitchen scene, Tom's adventure with the kids and damn! Bill's last sentence! Super! Loved it!
Date: 08/26/09 04:52 pm Title: Chapter 19
wow, never expected their conversation on that subject would be like that! Her surprise, acceptance and his way of saying it...You can make a special chap out of any subject, I've checked that before.
Date: 08/26/09 01:01 pm Title: Chapter 22 - Epilogue
aww so cute ^_^ and Toms getting married and getting kids =D
I really love this story, cant wait for the next =D
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and comenting :))
Date: 08/26/09 11:25 am Title: Chapter 22 - Epilogue
Omg I love you.
That was such a great way to end this bit :)
I'm so gonna keep a lookout for the rest of the stories.
My favorite series on this site ^^
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I hope I can post more soon :))
Date: 08/26/09 10:43 am Title: Chapter 22 - Epilogue
YOU ROCK! this fanfic is so awesome. I love it to death. the end was beautiful. I cant wait to read the missing parts.... respect sister!
Author's Response: lol, respect! Thank you so much - I will try and post more soon :)) <3
Date: 08/26/09 04:39 am Title: Chapter 22 - Epilogue
Noooo, not the end D: We didn't get the scene with Bill and the toy. Or at least haven't got it yet. I'm begging you, please make that appear somewhere...? The ending was perfect :))
Author's Response: Aha - it will come ;)) Thank you so much for reading and commenting, I'm glad you liked the ending <3
Date: 08/25/09 11:20 pm Title: Chapter 22 - Epilogue
*bursts into sobs* BRAVA!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading - and it's good sobs I hope ;)) GRAZIE! :)
Date: 08/25/09 11:02 pm Title: Chapter 22 - Epilogue
oh i will keep an eye open for it make it a big thing so i notice.
Author's Response: Haha, I will try - hopefully people won't have forgotten by the time I post ;)) Thank you for reading :)
Date: 08/25/09 10:50 pm Title: Chapter 22 - Epilogue
OH MY GOD I LOVE YOU
Author's Response: I'm taking that as good ;D Thank you for reading! :))
Date: 08/25/09 10:45 pm Title: Chapter 22 - Epilogue
i LOVE it!!! WHEEEEEEEEEEEE!!! thank you!! and i hope by some chance the fic twin and i wrote would be at par to this :) thank you!!
Author's Response: Thank you!!! :)) Thank you so much for following this saga with me - there will be more :D
Date: 08/25/09 09:51 pm Title: Chapter 22 - Epilogue
You CANT END IT!!! NOOOOOO......
But what about the rest of the story...nooooo
I hope their is more, I really loved this story! =)
Author's Response: Thank you for reading, I'm glad you enjoyed it :) And there will be more to come =)
Date: 08/25/09 09:38 pm Title: Chapter 22 - Epilogue
Awww no I didn't want this one to be over awww. Well I'm glad you gonna continue :)
And I would love to kno her name.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and commenting :)) I don;t think we'll ever know her name... ;)
Date: 08/25/09 09:33 pm Title: Chapter 21
Awww Tom and Julie awwww
Date: 08/25/09 09:22 pm Title: Chapter 22 - Epilogue
Yeah, you really CAN'T end it there...
...New story soon?
Author's Response: I know - I can't let go yet! :) Thank you for reading :))
Date: 08/22/09 02:54 pm Title: Chapter 19
Eh, I think this chapter was fine anyway he already alluded to sexing it up with a guy in an earlier chapter. I like that that what was or wasn't done and the reasons the relationship happened were reasonable laid out.
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 08/19/09 10:18 am Title: Chapter 20
“Shall I put it on the list?” He laughs, picks up the pen and starts to write. – lol very funny
‘I love you’ is scribbled on the paper. – very sappy and cute!
Slowly, I slide down his zip then push my hand inside his shorts, stroking across his already hard cock. – lol they’re like rabbits!
“Stop teasing.” He makes a growling noise then pushes me back so I can take him into my mouth. - lol
I sit back on my heels and he leans down to kiss me. “Thank you.”
I laugh. “You’re welcome.”
He grins. “You can finish your tea now!” - *snickers* this is *eye roll* too cute!
"Don’t answer it."
“But it's Tom."
"What?!" I stand up. "Oh my God! What if they've had an accident! Quick answer it!" - *snorts with laughter*
"You see... there's the thing... uhm... I'm kinda... lost."
"LOST?! How can you be lost? You're only at the park." - lol
"You know that innocent look they give you?"
"Yeah?"
"Just think about where you've seen it before."
There’s another short silence then he laughs loudly. “I’ve seen it too many times.” – and he still fell for it lol!!!
"Wait a second..." Tom sounds suspicious. "What were you doing when I called?"
"Nothing." - lol
"Honestly, it's like the last four years never happened!" He's chuckling to himself. - lol
I hand the phone to Bill.
He puts it to his ear. "Hey Tom."
< " " >
"We're in the kitchen, why?" He stares at the handset. "Oh. He hung up." – lol!!!!
Author's Response: lol, thanks! :)
Date: 08/17/09 08:50 pm Title: Chapter 20
hahaa I lovee tom in this chapter :)) "Responsible Parents my Ass" favorite quote of this chapter :)
Author's Response: Haha, thank you :)